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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Thank you for stopping by and commenting! Carter is definitely a source of surprises More happiness down the road, I promise! (for a while, at least)
  2. Chapter Thirty – How to Cure Performance Anxiety – A Short Guide Could Aron tell he was nervous? His friend closed his hand over Carter’s, and all he could do was to think of the warmth he was feeling. It was not exactly like they were holding hands, and there was some room between them on the back seat, while the taxi driver seemed more preoccupied with watching the road ahead rather than spying on them. You’re getting a little paranoid, aren’t you? You saw what happened with Simon
  3. You summed it up well And, yes, the light hearted atmosphere will keep up for a few more chapters. Now it's the boys' chance to get used to each other. You will learn all about what Aron is thinking of during this time at a certain moment I believe it will be pretty funny! Thank you for commenting!
  4. Ha, ha, I see that Alex really made some enemies, lol! Let's just keep it light-hearted, guys! I was just listening to a trolly song called Pop! Goes My Heart (I think that's the name), and I just thought it so suitable, hence the name. But I'm glad I didn't put those dark clouds out there And I thought I was preparing everyone for the end to come by mentioning it several chapters in advance. I think there is still plenty of the story, so it won't feel too short. Also, I believe it will wrap everything well. As for the sequel, ah, ah, I'm not good with those, unfortunately. Mainly because I've never written one, lol. The only time I wrote a book in two parts was only because I was writing so slowly and painstakingly that I thought the only way to motivate myself to finish was to split it in half. I tend to write stories with a beginning, a middle, and an end, which is why it's hard for me to image sequels. Thanks a lot for the comment, as always!
  5. Hey, godmom, glad you enjoyed the chapter! As for the 'non-drama', I'll put your heart and mind at ease for a while. Now it's time to have some fun after all the suffering. There are only several chapters left of the story, so I hope everyone will enjoy the last portion of the roller coaster ride. And, while I've never gone into such a terrible contraption, from the games I played, I know that towards the end, there are only a couple of small bumps before the finish line, at least in some models, so that the people don't start puking when they get down. Oh, damn, that was a terrible comparison! Yes, Aron wasn't blind, and now he can start talking more about his failing marriage with his best friend. As for the divorce ... you will see Yours truly, Goldie (I really like the new nickname)
  6. Yeah, the boys needed to have some fun! Glad you're enjoying this, Wes!
  7. Carter will just follow his own meandering ways, so I just have to beg everyone to be patient with him a little more. There's a reason for the title, after all Thank you for the constant comments on the story!
  8. So glad you enjoyed it! More will come!
  9. He, he, thank you! And hugs!
  10. That you are right about! Several chapters left, and yes, the story will reach its conclusion. Aron had his suspicions, he could not be blind after all, and with Alex back in full swing, everything Carter had built during the body swap sort of got swiped away. Thank you for reading and commenting!
  11. He, he, in a way, everything is, indeed, new to Carter (even though he had that 20+ chapters detour in Alex's body, lol), hence the awkwardness. Plus, that's him all right Soooo, you want poor Simon to be kicked at the curb? Don't you remember what Carter said about the guy's eyes? Those sweet puppy eyes ... He, he, just kidding. Hugs, too!
  12. Ha, ha, Carter knows how to defend his lover! Thank you for reading my story and commenting on it!
  13. Ah, thank you so much, I'm glad that these chapters are making you happy ... Carter and Aron deserve it, too, after all the struggles
  14. Thanks for the comment! He, he, indeed, Carter should now take good care of how he dresses. As for Simon, that's what at least he thinks he wants.
  15. Chapter Twenty-nine - There Goes My Heart He was still pondering over how the hell he had managed to get Aron to have sex with him so quickly when his phone started ringing. This time, he didn’t hurry to get it. Yeah, he was going to be a little sore, that was for sure. But he could barely stop a small surprised gasp when he saw the caller. “Hi,” Aron’s warm voice came through from the other side. “Hey, did you forget your keys?” Carter mumbled and looked around. “I guess you’ll
  16. He, he, Carter and subtleties ... not his strong suit, I'm afraid. The guy has a one-track mind once in a while, that, if his brain allows it ... Oh, the accident will be made all clear. But please, please forgive me if I reserve that for what I consider the perfect moment (even if the rest of the world may not agree with me, but, well, I have a brain like Carter, it's a little scumbag). And, damn, my red herrings work even when I don't intend them to be red herrings! That innuendo from Alex ... was not about suing. It was, in a way, Alex just being honest, as much as someone like him can be Thank you for keeping up with my crazy story!
  17. He, he, you're right, not telling! But you will see!😘
  18. Thanks! As for Carter, well, there is a reason why this story is named the way it is
  19. Then I'll think we'll play that game until that's over, lol! But I'll catch you, eventually!
  20. He, he, yeah, I know, that's so true about pets! What would a dog think? 'Man, that's not how you should do it! You need to come from the back! Oh, finally! What? Is that a sex position named after me? By all means, I'm flattered!' Aron ... yes, you're right, this is all new and surprising. But, in a way, he has prepared for this all his life. And he will not wait and watch. You'll see. And I think you'll be proud of him then Thanks a lot for commenting!
  21. Yes, you're reading both characters well. And trust me, I had to fight the desire of just having them 'say it' so hard while writing this. It would just not be in character for Carter to say everything directly, like this. I hope, when all is said and done, that all the pieces of the puzzle will fall in place as they should. But I trust you to tell me if I succeeded when that happens
  22. He, he, he, glad you liked it! Carter will evolve, slowly, yes, but he will, I promise! Still in love with Alex? Hugs!
  23. Ha, ha, mouthwash. But the truth is, mouthwash could make a problem bigger because it dries your mouth and makes bacteria grow back with a vengeance after the initial 'cleanse'.
  24. Yeap, you summed it up well, sorry for not making it more clear from the text. As for Simon, he will appear every now and then
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