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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Kisses! As for your reservations, I totally understand!
  2. And when I think I did a good job to make things a bit more clear, I realize from people's comments that I managed to make them more complicated ... My fault, not yours, of course. I believe the reason why the separation felt so sudden was because I wasn't clear about the passing of time. Between Carter 'stalking' Alex and the separation, there's been some uneventful weeks. In the meantime, Alex, who remembered the accident, but forgot about the body swap, returned to his usual ways. That means a reset of everything Carter struggled to build for that marriage during the body swap. Before the accident, Aron's marriage to Alex was far from being in a good place. It was clear that there weren't any roses and wine anymore. So, with Alex back into his body and his old ways, Aron must have gotten pretty bitter with the 'reset' of his husband. More will transpire as follows. To the point that a big fight happened. Thank you for your comment! PS. Alex's behavior has another reason
  3. I like Goldie! Sounds nice! Hugs! (Rump was sort of naughty, I guess, :)))
  4. Oh, my dear godmom, where should I start? Well, I'm glad you understand Carter and his hesitations. One thing that's always hard to do is to keep characters in character. And I guess that is why this story ended up having so many chapters in the end. Carter is a slow learner, emotionally wise, and his road to happiness is terribly convoluted. Hence all the hiccups and mishaps. Now about Aron ... Spite doesn't quite cover it. You read Aron well in the comment you left on the previous chapter. So, hint, hint, imagine just what nerve Aron's mom struck with that commentary ... You can't fix a broken man. I think you know what I mean (God, I hate writing on tablet, my hand just slipped and now I have to continue by editing since the comment got posted anyway) Now put yourself in Alex's shoes and imagine the accident. How would that look from Alex's perspective? Ponytail girl is the key to everything. So forgive me if I hold on to her a while longer. Many hugs and lots of love! Yours truly, Rump.
  5. I know there's been some anticipation, and I'm not one not to deliver on that promise. Thank you for commenting, as usual! And, yes, more will happen from now on!
  6. Oh, no! (Reaches to offer a hand!)
  7. He, he, your feeling is right on target! But Carter, he, he, my boy, he's good at stumbling over his own two feet. So glad you enjoyed the chapter! As for what you said after the word 'thanks', I'm afraid my crown needs some polishing and I have no idea where I left it lol. Now, seriously, thank you so much for all your kind words and support.
  8. Thank you! Carter will get there in due time, and I hope, when that happens, that everyone will release a collective sigh! It will be fun, I promise!
  9. He, he, you're right about Simon here. And Alex, well, he should have known better.
  10. Ha, ha, of course, since that comes from a cat, it must be true! Although Carter just didn't want to let the kid watch 'inappropriate content' :)) Carter, ah, Carter ... well, he'll torment everyone for a little while. That's how he rolls, lol! Thanks for commenting!
  11. All the facepalms in the universe can't cover that, I suppose! Thanks for the comment!
  12. He, he, that's Alex for you, all right! As for Carter locking the dog away in the other room, he, he, I suppose that's how most people feel!
  13. Chapter Twenty-Eight – Experimenting To Be With You “This is, Taz, what is called a stakeout,” Carter spoke to his dog, as he sipped from his iced coffee through the straw. “You see,” he explained to his pet, “Alex is bound to make a mistake, sooner or later, and we will be able to expose the douchebag to Aron. We’re making a great team!” Now, as he stood behind the wheel of his car, talking to his dog, he didn’t feel that convinced that he was making any progress, though. He wasn’t exac
  14. Ha, ha, so I'm the Cheshire cat, or better said, just a grin! Yeah, I guess all them hot gay boys are making Carter think he's in the heart og wonderland, lol! Thanks for the funny comment and always being here, with each chapter!
  15. Hey, thank you for commenting! You're the closest to the truth so far! While I know I'm putting such a spin on things that almost nobody can guess what will happen next, I'm glad to see that readers get Carter so well like you right now! Yes, Carter would have a moral dilemma to actually expose Alex, being a good guy and all. As for the situation revealing itself ... he, he, you'll know you're right as you'll read the next chapters. Hugs!
  16. Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoy my stories! And I hope you'll like this one until the end, just like Collateral.
  17. Thank you for commenting! It's always great to read people's take on what I write and introduce with each chapter. You're not the only one who thinks this is some Alex's game to ruin Aron's and Carter's friendship. And I most probably made it look that way! I think you will guess the truth next time! And it all comes from Alex being the self-absorbed diva he is! And then, I hope you'll tell me what you think. Hugs!
  18. Thank you for commenting! And for having so much interest in my story! And also for laughing at the jokes I'm putting in Carter's brain!
  19. Then prepare! Next week, things will get ... No spoilers!
  20. Hmm, crispy! Do you imagine Alex all naked on a platter with an apple in his mouth? He, he, that's so wrong! Well, you're right, Carter is way too nice to punish the little A-hole. As for Simon, what can I say? He might want to turn Alex into something he wants the guy to be, but that doesn't always work, right? I so lol'ed at Socrate not dating anymore. As for Satan's wok and his taste for Chinese ... That's all Carter's fault! His brain is such a trolly character, comes up with the weirdest ideas! Well, Alex's kiss might not be something as evil as everyone thinks ... And I am so, so, so evilly glad that my red herring worked! No one suspects a thing! He, he! Alex is a bit too self-centered to have wanted to show Aron 'something' ... Thank you for your funny comments! They made me lol hard!
  21. He, he, I think everyone will have a clearer image of why Alex behaved like that next chapter. As much as he's a diva and a pretty flighty character, there is a bit of a logic behind his actions this time, lol.
  22. Well, Carter is a bit ... different. I would not count on him to have the same perspective on many things, and people, including gay guys, as the vast majority. Hence what I thought it to be quite a hilarious experience. As for my abilities, well, I thank you for the compliment, but all I do is portraying a character just like I imagine him reacting. I always open my eyes at the same time as my main character and I try to imagine how it would be to go through this, or that ... or that other thing, he, he.
  23. Hey MrWill, I'm glad to see you back and enjoy re-reading the story from the top. I guess a lot of people ask themselves, at one point or another, in their lives, what would be like on the other side of the river, he, he. And, of course, there are the free spirits who swim in that river, like you. Thank you for the kind words! As always, it is my pleasure to reply to your comments!
  24. He, he, Alex's true motivation ... is actually simpler than it looks. Don't forget, dear godmom, where Alex is coming from (recently!) I believe that you'll have a better chance at guessing next time when Carter will talk to Alex a little. I hope, at least, that some readers, will understand the 'demented dildo's' motivations (lol, that was too good to miss). As for Alex being surprised about Carter's nice manly muscles ... Well, he was (I'm not sure if this counts as spoilers) checking something. And that answers - a little - your last question. At least Aron is an open book. No one has to wonder about what's going on through his mind
  25. Well, I guess I did make him look like that, lol!
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