Laura S. Fox
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Ha, ha, I don't even dare ...
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Hey, glad you're glad! But there's still more to the story!
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Chapter Seventeen Jake eyed the belt with growing unease. Klaus was balancing the scary object, ever so lightly, and that seemed hypnotizing. He could not tear his eyes off it. “I believe you know the drill, Jake,” Klaus began speaking. This time, Jake was not fooled. This was Klaus when angry. Never mind the even tone, the controlled gestures. He was going to get it good. “You will obey each word I say,” Klaus continued. “Undress and come here. On all fours.” Jak
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He, he, hope is a good thing And yes, my baby boy is learning!
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You have a bit of a prediction there about Jake ... And yes, Diaz is a bit blind to what's going on and who he's going up against. As for the punishment, I will see next time if I raise to everyone's expectations. I definitely hope I will!
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Wow, thanks a lot! I'm glad you like it.
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Please stick to it LOL! I hope you'll love the next chapter just the same.
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Thanks a lot! Jake will have his fair share of ... ahem, punishment As for Diaz, well, he's kind of the bad character. There's nothing he wouldn't do.
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Thank you for the insight on Diaz's personality. Whenever I write a character on the page, I make them from bits and pieces, and it's nice to see someone else putting together the puzzle. You could not have been righter in your characterization of him. As for Jake falling into his role ... you will understand more at the right moment. I promise!
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Oh, God, how will you react to the next one? You must invent some new emojis!
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He's a brave little one, my boy! I raised him up good :))
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Hmm, Diaz, he gets quite the fan club, doesn't he? Gosh, I cannot wait until you will see all the plot unfolding. But you're right! Diaz is slow ... not a match, it seems. Or is he? LOL, I'm just a tiny bit evil, while I'm sitting here, by my bucket filled with red herrings. As for the sore butt, he, he, we'll see Cheers!
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Just you wait for what will come next, and then tell me how you feel :))
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All in due time
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Chapter Sixteen Jake knew he shouldn’t be mad at Klaus. After all, the guy was working himself to the bone. Apparently, being rich didn’t mean sitting on your butt, by a pool, eating ice cream or something. But Jake had to admit that he felt restless without being able to talk to the guy. He had wanted to call a few times but felt guilty at the thought that Klaus was getting too little sleep as it was. A week was not that long. More than half of it was gone, anyway. Sunday, Klaus was
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My boards are even more dangerous than that :))
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As always, deville, your comment is spot on! Jake may be little and cute, but he's smarter than his brother
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So happy that you like what naughty Jake is doing! I had to throw cold water on my face a few times while writing that :)) Cheers!
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The future will tell.
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Hey, thanks a lot! Just as I said to another commenter, Jake will have to make some choices and that may not be easy. So glad you appreciated the sex tape
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A very insightful comment! Yes, you said it exactly like it is. Well, Jake will be at the crossroads, and he will need to make choices and not all choices in life are easy to make, right? I am quite impressed how quick and clear you portrayed Diaz's way of thinking. It's nice to see readers who see the characters I make just as I need them to sound, act and look. Thanks a lot for the long and interesting comment!
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Quite so, my friend, quite so.
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He, he, should I say Klaus is lucky, too?
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Chapter Fifteen It felt a little strange to move around the house, now that Klaus was gone. He was more familiar with the layout now, and he knew where to find anything he might have wanted, but he was far from feeling comfortable. The game room was nice, though. It helped him take his mind off of things. Plus, he liked it. It was just the first day without Klaus, yet he felt he was missing the guy. How the fuck he was going to deal with the guy disappearing from his life forever? At t
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Really soon
