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  1. Laura S. Fox
    That really sends me to one line in a song that has already served as my inspiration for this story about ten-times over
  2. Laura S. Fox
    Brad might be easy to hate... but I like to believe that by the end of it all he'll elicit other feelings in the readers
  3. Laura S. Fox
    The prince of snark, I love this. He'll get his fair share of nicknames...
  4. Laura S. Fox
    For anyone who still doesn't know me...
  5. Laura S. Fox
    Hmm, hmm... there's some truth in here. Brad never actually read the book(s). He throws words casually. Also, as a replacement... Luke looks nothing like Lyn, not physically, nor intellectually. Well noticed! And somehow I thought of them like this: Athos - Alexander - aristocratic, noble, just Porthos - Brad - he just likes having fun Aramis - Lyn - intelligent with scholarly inclinations, a string of affairs under his belt... even the hint of monk-like attitudes sometimes... but that's something that might become obvious later, lol (not an actual monk, don't worry ).
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    Brad might not know what he wants himself. And that's a bit of an understatement... I think. He definitely acts and reacts impulsively. There are things unsaid there, without a doubt. Brad, surprisingly or not, reveals the least of all the characters. That's intentional. Only Brad might think of Luke as the Fourth Musketeer, ngl.
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    I didn't exactly think of whether Lyn and Alexander played together before, but I wanted to point out how well they 'get' each other. Even during college, in their conversations and debates, they're on equal footing. Let's just say... Brad is not that unfamiliar to feeling like he's being left out... And chess is the sort of game our two guys would excel in. And Brad wouldn't. Welcome back. I'm so eager to read your analysis again
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    It is natural and reasonable to see Brad in this light, given the circumstances. And yes! Lyn and Alexander worked as a team bent on winning. No useless barbs between them indeed...
  10. Laura S. Fox
    Correct Brad is watching his two friends, a bit too closely. And that's a very good question.
  11. Laura S. Fox
    I fear where this 'buffet' idea is going...
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    And that is Alexander! Yes, he has an analytical mind, and yes, both his eyes are wide open - so unlike Lyn, who's as blind as a bat. We'll see about that angle... Alexander will surely work it.
  13. Laura S. Fox
    Oh, gawd, yes, he might be just that...
  14. Laura S. Fox
    He-he, like I said a little above, that would make Lyn a lil' too easy... And Luke does look like a younger Brad... but is that enough? Especially since Alexander is putting himself on display so eagerly.
  15. Laura S. Fox
    And seeing how he's a guy who likes to believe he's in control all the time... wonder to your heart's content what goes now through his head!
  16. Laura S. Fox
    He's a bag of them and then some more!
  17. Laura S. Fox
    You think Lyn is that easy? He mostly noticed how alike Luke is to Brad... and while he does have a type, who says tastes can't change, right?
  18. Laura S. Fox
    Chapter Fourteen – [Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour Alexander dropped by Brad’s side, getting unnervingly close and personal in his friend’s space, while Lyn observed the duo with increasing annoyance. They were here because they were supposed to study, not goof around. Brad wouldn’t be himself if he missed a chance to neglect his studies in favor of anything else, as long as it was remotely more entertaining than staring at a textbook. “Whatcha doing, bro
  19. Laura S. Fox
    I think you'll get your answers in the chapter I just posted... And it's not LiveFeed rounding them up
  20. Laura S. Fox
    I love it how people reacted with 'fingers crossed' to this...
  21. Laura S. Fox
    You deserve all the cookies for this comment, @Joie J.
  22. Laura S. Fox
    Yeah... he's totally not made for this. He'll have to understand that, eventually.
  23. Laura S. Fox
    That's a glorious rendition of a completely accidental accident that just happened :))
  24. Laura S. Fox
    The lawyer is my wild card. He'll work wonders (including for Jamie's anger)
  25. Laura S. Fox
    Someone paid attention! Yes, we're talking the whole family here... eventually.
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