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Marc thinks he’s carried off the straight act where no one suspects he is gay. But his Aunt, although up there in years, seems to be more observant than Marc gives her credit for. And his team immediately shut down the topic of his love life with just on word from Reba. And when did Reba tell Sawyer where Marc lived? Was it when he came back from the bathroom at the restaurant? Then she definitely noticed the interaction between Sawyer and Marc. Love the story, thanks for sharing and keep up the great work.
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Difference between the small town raised man and the city raised man. Although coming out is never easy. Seems like Marc is weighing duty to his Aunt May and the small town environ and the ability to be true to himself. Love the story, thanks for sharing
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Why did the Doctor want the names of the twins? Are the Prince and Prince being set up at the safe house by the people seeking Bastian? Or will the Doctor be gone when the twins return to the safe house? Great chapter, thanks for sharing your story.
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Donovan has James dazed and confused, snapping his fingers to bring him back from staring at him. Then the erection when he sees him in the locker room. And Dion has been witness to both events. And now he’s paged full name style….definitely a day of secrets being revealed without being shared openly. Thanks for sharing
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Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Leo622 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
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Weaving a compelling background for your characters. And who did Ed hold the elevator for? Looking forward to the next chapter…thank you!
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Chapter 1- Home Sweet Home
Leo622 commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 1- Home Sweet Home
Seems like Eds’ world of solitude is about to come to an end…. What past events still haunt him and will his teenage neighbor add to his nightmares? Interesting start. Thanks for sharing. -
Enjoyed your story very much. Now I some reading to catch up on with your previous offerings. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to your continuing saga.
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Solid start to the story. Thanks for sharing.
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What’s a ninja kid out at 1:45 am for? Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing.
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It must be the gay….Freud would have a great time if Rusty was laying on his couch, just rambling on about his dreams. Thanks for the new series and sharing with us.
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I can hardly wait for the excited Dads to be to knock out walls and go full speed ahead to delivery. A true HEA. Or is it, Mrsgnomie??? Thank you for all your efforts in keeping us engaged with your literary talents.
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Life is about making memories. The good, the bad, the sad, and the ugly. Reflecting on our past is a life well lived. Beautiful series of poems. Thank you for sharing
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The future is a blank canvas, paint the masterpiece that you envision
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The first stanza perfectly states the way the employees would feel when they lose their livelihoods, years of dedicated service down the drain. The second stanza expresses the devastation of the owner watching the legacy handed down to him for safekeeping slipping through his fingers, the history lost as the employees are let go and the lights are shut off for the last time. Beautiful
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Great foundation for a storyline. It can go so many directions it would be like a octopus. Looking forward for more. Thank you for sharing.
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Mrsgnomie does it yet again. She has a gift for taking words and arranging them in such a way to evoke laughter, love and truly memorable characters throughout. Jensen and Nolan are a journey of determination on one part and slow realization on the other. Plan on a start to finish setting. Trust me, you'll enjoy your journey. Thank you Mrsgnomie for sharing.
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Rusty breaks all the drama down to basics...gay guys like dick. Anyway you look at it, videos aren't that uncommon and the situation will pass. The question is who is behind the release, Drew? He seems to much a Mommy boy. Connor? He wants Jonathan as his prize, knowing more about the Hamilton family than others. Who are the triple doppelgangers outside the theater and the person shielded by Connor when she addressed him in the dining room? And Mother Hamilton has given Rusty open opportunity to pursue his passion without his fathers' knowledge. Excellent as always. Thanks for sharing
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Two writers, thirty years apart, staying at the same Inn. Deja vu or coincidence? Keep up the good work and thanks.
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Very interesting start. Small enough town that everyone knows everyone, and visitors appear to be treated with suspicion. And one family seems to be the town’s benefactor. Thanks for sharing.
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Remember Maddox, seeing Jonathans’ discomfort at a wet tee shirt contest? Both Jonathan’s distress at displaying his body for public display and Maddoxs’ jealousy of others seeing Jonathan in his revealing state.Can you imagine Maddox, first seeing Jonathan with his lips wrapped around Drew as he swallows his cock? And Jonathan paralyzed by his tormentors at Sunny Hill? Jonathan will run and Maddox will be a “Mad Dawg”. And Rusty will be critiquing the video, repeatedly, with lube and tissues. JMHO
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Chapter 23 - Court is Now in Session
Leo622 commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Court is Now in Session
Thank you for sharing your story and best of luck with your education. I've enjoyed the effort you're putting into each and every character, scene and plot twist. Looking forward to whatever else your time allows you to publish. -
Very nice story. Long enough to allow the main character to come to life and concise enough to be a single session reading. Thanks for sharing…hope my fairy visits me soon.
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That information is as solid as warm ice cream and clear as mud. Good start, thanks for sharing.
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What’s That Word… Context?
Leo622 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What’s That Word… Context?
Four months does not a life time make. The couple has twice as many downs as ups and Maddox has only reacted his roommates prompts. Rusty..contentious moments. Dex and Kane...defining moments. And it's a good thing Jonathan is good looking because he has absolutely no common sense. If they can entertain a campus for four months with their relationship drama I think they need to cut their losses and move on.- 38 comments
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