What's a story without a few red herrings? And cliffies. And the awesome twisty-turnies?
I'm now thoroughly invested in the story. Great writing. The editing ain't bad either. (Luv ya tim! 😘)
This was a great building chapter. It's not often that you see characters so upfront with each other so early in their relationship. You can't build anything unless there's a solid foundation and these two have laid it down (yes... double entendre..lol)
Dominic swiping Dylan's phone..😅😅
Lock your phones peeps... just do it. Otherwise, kids and pain in the ass siblings will run with it. Every. Time. (My brother learned the hard way after a certain sister changed his background photo not once, not twice, but three times. Close up of the nostrils, close up of the inside of her mouth and a close up of the crease of her bent elbow. Sucker.)
You are in such an amazing place right now and I'm so proud of you. Sometimes it's hard not to focus on the negative, especially when it brings you into a headspace that's not a good place to be.
We all need reminders everyday of what's good in life. Having a support system is crucial.
Thanks for the reminder to stop and focus on the good stuff (like donuts)
xoxo
I just read a little about it while I waited for my Uber. It's amazing how many intricacies the human brain has that differ from person to person.
I remember in 6th grade our teacher gave a class assignment. She read a description from The Hound of the Baskervilles. It was the exterior of a house and the walkway leading up to it. We had to draw what she described. 30-some odd kids in the class and there were 30-some odd different versions. One kid drew a square. I'm willing to bet he has anphantasia.
Out of curiosity... is it just visual for you, or does it affect your other senses?
Quirky names can be fun. It's when parents take a perfectly normal name and spell it like they're trying to induce an aneurysm in Vanna White.
Alexander= Alyxzandur
Really?
I love learning new phrases. This one struck me funny:
Don’t take the piss
I have a vague idea of it's meaning from the context. It sounds like a great way to tell someone to stop screwing around.
You did a great job establishing a connection between Jamie and Mike. I loved the bantering and teasing. The kiss was the icing on the cake.