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  1. kbois

    Chapter 16

    I agree with tim on this one. I think once the decision was made to get Matt his official documentation there probably wasn't much conversation to be had. Matt doesn't really know Andy and while I'm sure he's grateful, he feels no obligation to try to foster any kind of friendship. Don't forget there's an age gap too. At this point Matt sees Andy as someone who went out of their way to save him and to provide him with a fresh start. Nothing more. He has no clue what he wants out of life other than to find out what happened to Ahmet. As tim mentioned, Andy's parents have no valid reason to meet Matt. As far as Andy, I know for a fact (because, helloooo... editor here. Lol) that we haven't heard the last from Andy. I know I've said it before... trust the process.
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    Chapter 1

    Another cliffie... more argument for my theory that @kbois wrote it.
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    Chapter 16

    When I first started working in travel a gazillion years ago it was right after Pan Am closed up shop. I worked at Logan Airport in Boston and Terminal A was still closed as it had house Pan Am exclusively.
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    Chapter 16

    Here's the fix: London check in for international flight = 3 hours (because Matt is nervous) Weather delay= 2 hours Boarding and taxiing= .5 hours Flight time= 4 hours Taxiing and deplaning= .5 hours Baggage claim and a freaking long customs line= 1 hour Total is 11 hours... You're welcome 🤣😂
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    Chapter 16

    Anything over 3 hours and I'm paying for extra leg room. Anything over six and I keep my fingers crossed that premium plus or even business class isn't astronomical. I kinda miss working in travel and having airline reps to ease the way into free upgrades.
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    Chapter 1

    Fun story about a "Come to Jason" moment he had with himself. Well written with some nice touches of humor sprinkled in. Thanks Secret Author!
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    Chapter 16

    Ahmet's old boss has better things to keep track of. He sold Matt and wrote him off as nothing more than a business transaction.
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    Chapter 16

    Oh... such disappointment for Matthew, but he knew going into this that it was a risk. Now he really has to face his future and decide what it will be. Is he going back to Scotland? Will he go back to the States or maybe keep traveling? Who am I kidding. I know but I'm not saying anything. Once again, an awesome chapter.
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    Chapter 9

    Yeah... that one made me laugh when my brain hit on it.
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    Chapter 8

    They are fun, aren't they? Lol.
  11. kbois

    Chapter 1

    Current status of my brain: Thanks for that Secret Author. Overall though, it was an imaginative take on a murder mystery. Nice job.
  12. kbois

    Chapter 1

    Might have to check Snopes.
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    Chapter 1

    That's just farfetched enough for you to have written it. 🤔
  14. kbois

    Chapter 5

    The fun is just beginning.
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    Chapter 4

    Kage...😍🥰❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Side note: this story is where my Korner Krew was born. If you have the time to read the comments you'll understand why they're such PITAs. Also, they're constantly recruiting.
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    Chapter 1

    This one is imaginative, sad, hopeful, and a little bit weird all at the same time. It must be terrifying to be trapped in a alternate reality in your mind. Nick knows something is off, but he can't put a finger on it. Nice little cliffie at the end. I wonder who makes good use of those? Nice job Secret Author!
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    Chapter 1

    Ahhhh... Kage. Such memories...❤️
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    Chapter 26

    It will never be behind me. You guys will always be there to throw it back at me. Lol
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    Chapter 26

    Hmmm.... Shadow Effect should be interstesting for you. Good luck!
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    Chapter 25

    Eh.. It's complicated.
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    Chapter 21

    Oh god... don't you start with Caleb too. That's all I need is another one jumping on @Mrsgnomies bandwagon.
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    Chapter 20

    No they don't. They're a-holes.
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    Chapter 19

    Nope.. they sure didn't.
  25. kbois

    Chapter 18

    This is the point where there were a lot of moving parts to keep track of.
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