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  1. kbois

    Chapter 30

    I'm not sure what they've been up to. I think Liam and Keon need a few more years to get to the point they'll talk to me.
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    Chapter 8

    The story is only beginning to unfold. I find your comment indicating that the author is taking us on a "perverted journey" highly rude and offensive. If you don't like the direction the story is going... do us all a favor and stop reading.
  3. Good luck Rick! Take care of yourself!
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    Chapter 21

    Lex has a leg up on the rest of us!
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    Chapter 16

    Liam is one of my favorite characters. He's a great kid. Danny is one of those characters that I wish could have developed more, but it wasn't meant to be.
  6. People need to learn to mind their own damn business. The only one entitled to comment on your relationship status or weight is you. Back off Boomer. Sorry you had to deal with that ignoramus.
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    Chapter 8

    Reality has come crashing down on both Andrew and Matt. They have come face-to-face with the consequences of one decision... Andy choosing to write a book about human trafficking and Matt's when he chose to hang out with Danny. It's not looking good for either of them. Great job tim!
  8. Great interview! I just started doing the anthologies last year and I'm so happy I did. It gives me a chance to try new things with writing and to get a story out there that might not otherwise have made it onto the site. I'm working on this year's submission and hope to finish it up soon.
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    Chapter 7

    It's tim's story... he's the one who gets to decide. Plus, I think it'd appropriate that Black call Andrew by his first name. He seems like the type who has a god-like superiority complex so by being familiar it sets the tone that he knows he's the one in charge.
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    Chapter 7

    Starkly honest words from Mr. Black. He is obviously a businessman who has taken advantage of an extremely niche market. He knows what he does is not morally or ethically right. He also doesn't care. His attitude makes one wonder what happened in his life to allow him to get to where he's at. Excellent chapter, my friend.
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    Chapter 11

    They are a great couple.
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    Chapter 9

    I enjoy throwing little Easter eggs into my story.
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    Chapter 6

    Probably, although I suck at chess and bungee jumping would have to be for a reeeaaaaalllyyyyy good cause. I think I'd prefer skydiving over bungee jumping... at least I'd be strapped to someone else who knew what they were doing.
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    Chapter 6

    Nice try. Maybe if you have your groomer clip your nails you might be able to type better.
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    Chapter 6

    Who is this Kane you keep referring to?
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    Chapter 6

    Excellent build up to the upcoming auction, tim. Would I go to such lengths for a story? I'm not sure. If I knew that it would make a huge difference... maybe.
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    Chapter 4

    I completely agree.
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    Chapter 3

    Nash is a good one!
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    Chapter 2

    I'm sure it'll come back to you. It's always nice revisiting old stories.
  20. kbois

    Chapter 1

    Welcome back!
  21. I think he meant "No Dogs Allowed"
  22. Steer clear of New Jersey @Mikiesboy
  23. Sounds a little Nightmare on Elm Street-ish. Here in Florida it is currently 85 and its overcast. We're supposed to get some thunderstorms today so it's overcast. That should keep the temperature in the low 90s. But it's humid... ick. I hope everyone has a good day!
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    Chapter 4

    Noted, Sir!
  25. Sequels can serve a purpose if they're planned out from the beginning. Take Harry Potter for example... each book covered a specific year of Harry's schooling, yet each was a completely different story in addition to building the world she created. Sequels that exist just because the franchise wanted it go off the rails... take Star Wars for an example. They should've stopped after Return of the Jedi but once the almighty Mouse got involved, greed took over. I enjoy having characters cross over and make an appearance in another story, but they're not the feature. Its like running into an old classmate... you smile and say hi, maybe exchange some pleasantries and then move on. The only series I did, I didn't want it to be three stories from the same character's perspective. Each story featured a different main character pair, but the plot itself built up within each one. It doesn't make sense to continue a particular story if you've covered everything you wanted to in the first one.
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