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kbois

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  1. kbois

    Chapter 4

    Sounds good to me... maybe I'll have Kage save the day... get these die hard readers off my back for killing him off.
  2. kbois

    Chapter 4

    Yes... there is an Irish singer Enya. But I have a character by the same name who can control fire. She's a badass.
  3. kbois

    Chapter 4

    Or maybe a collaboration..... what do you say @Mikiesboy?
  4. kbois

    Chapter 4

    Every great story inspires more questions than answer in the beginning. Otherwise genres like mystery and suspense wouldn't exist. It's a natural conclusion to think that Andrew will buy Matt, but that may or may not be the case. There are so many directions in which this story can go. It's a true testament to tim's writing that he's inspired all these speculations. That's what makes a great writer.
  5. kbois

    Chapter 4

    I guess I deserved that after sharing work tales with you. 🤣🤣
  6. kbois

    Chapter 4

    Darn... I now wish I had suggested it.
  7. kbois

    Chapter 4

    I knew I should have bet on you when tim and I were discussing the fact that no one had suggested that.
  8. kbois

    Chapter 4

    When I first read this chapter it hit me hard. Humanity can sink to unimaginable depths. Dante, and anyone who has dealt with the type of life he had, should be applauded. To survive being on the streets or captivity takes an incredible inner strength. For those who manage to find happiness, they deserve it. I think Andrew is kidding himself: So, the only real danger, I feel, is if I do anything other than what they have laid out The man who runs the sex trafficking that he's going see is a sleeping dragon who should not be poked. I hope he comes to realize this. Another great chapter tim!
  9. My staff is now making fun of me because I sound like a peg-legged pirate when I walk anywhere. I'm trying an immobilizer boot to see if that helps my ankle. I have my brace, but I think that it will be better for maintenance. After over two weeks of wearing it there was no difference. We shall see what happens.
  10. You're heat cranky. Totally understandable with that kind of humidity. It's like walking through a swamp. We've been lucky down here so far. It's been hot, but the oppressive humidity hasn't kicked in full force. Can't wait for that.... not.
  11. kbois

    Chapter 3

    **ducks head and slinks away**
  12. It'll be a long cold day hanging out with Lucifer before you catch me in a confessional 😂 Happy Friday Eve everyone... I hope it's a good one!
  13. kbois

    Chapter 3

    Make sure you get whatever falls on the floor.
  14. There goes the neighborhood! @weinerdog.. I told tim you were housebroken and rarely bite.. please behave.
  15. kbois

    Chapter 3

    It literally took me one chapter and some back and forth with tim to establish what his vision was with this story... that right there is key. It's so different being on the editing side because you see things that you know you would do differently as an author... then you have to be willing to adapt to someone else's style. I lucked out with @Mrsgnomie, she and I already have similar styles. This story gave me a challenge to work with someone I haven't worked with before and honestly the story blew me away. So yes... as much as I'd love to take a smidge of credit for this incredible tale... I can't. I just tweaked a few points.
  16. kbois

    Chapter 3

    Self-promotion... I can work with that.
  17. kbois

    Chapter 3

    This story is all tim. I just gave him a few suggestions and corrected a few grammarical things... some of which he took, some he didn't. The plot is great and honestly I think this is tim's crown jewel.
  18. kbois

    Chapter 3

    I got home 11 minutes too late to catch his gaff... dammit.
  19. kbois

    Chapter 3

    Roll over. Get over it. 😆
  20. kbois

    Chapter 3

    Oy... it seems like Matt is up the proverbial creek without a paddle. As for Andrew? What in the hell is he thinking? Authors certainly do go to extreme lengths for their stories sometimes. Great job tim!
  21. I agree. I think society has become too invested in numbers, especially those who grew up with social media. It's not about the likes or the comment, it's about enjoying a story no matter how many people are following. Stay cool and I hope everyone has a good day!
  22. kbois

    Chapter 2

    Again... promises, promises.😉
  23. kbois

    Chapter 2

    Promises, promises.
  24. kbois

    Chapter 2

    I can try. Mwaahaha!
  25. kbois

    Chapter 2

    This story is 99.99% all tim. Most of my edits were more of the grammatical type. I absolutely loved editing this.
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