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...You know I understand respecting your parents but I also know respect must be earned. In the “witch” department Kim could give Giada a run for her money on a good day and if I were Sergio I’d be tempted to tell her she could go choke on a few of their precious diamonds. Ugh, he needs to grow a spine where mommy dearest is concerned. I especially don’t like the way she treats Adrianna but at least Adrianna won’t balk at telling her off even if it doesn’t do any good.
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Chapter 8: Giada gets a piece of Eric's sting.
NimirRaj commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: Giada gets a piece of Eric's sting.
Go Eric! You can argue hitting a woman is wrong but I could argue Giada is not a woman. I feel sorry for poor David as that’s definitely not the type of meeting he was expecting. -
Chapter 6: What has changed after 5 years?
NimirRaj commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: What has changed after 5 years?
Poor Giada and Trevor must be in shock... Too much to hope for a heart attack? -
Chapter 5: Sergio makes a mistake that costs him.
NimirRaj commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Sergio makes a mistake that costs him.
I feel very little sympathy for Sergio and what little I have diminishes every time he tries to justify his actions by saying he didn’t know Eric was a virgin as if his actions would have been any less cruel if Eric wasn’t a virgin. I’m just happy Eric didn’t try to commit suicide. The wicked witch is going to regret her stupidity one day but it’ll be too late. -
I don’t see how Sergio could remotely think there’s any sort of outcome where this doesn’t destroy Eric yet repeatedly he’s commented to himself that he hopes Eric will understand him. 🤦🏻♂️ Could Trevor be Giada’s son? Her giddiness over the photo made me think she recognized Sergio and her son’s name was never mentioned as all we know is he’s 3 years older than Eric. The witch caused a woman to lose her unborn child, destroyed her career, and is still not satisfied. I hope somebody drops a house on her soon.
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I Think This Qualifies as a Crisis
NimirRaj commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Think This Qualifies as a Crisis
....I suppose a homophobic monster would be in a good mood after murdering a gay man. He could argue in court that his actions were out of anger because the man raped his son years before yet I suspect it’s more homophobia driven, though unless there’s evidence he’s targeted others that’d be hard to prove. A moment of insanity brought on by anger is a good defense for a lesser sentence “if” there’s not evidence proving it was premeditated. -
Chapter 3: Sergio saves the day. Will this make Eric give in?
NimirRaj commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Sergio saves the day. Will this make Eric give in?
Dang I knew Eric was starting to fall for Sergio but he threw the L word out way faster than I expected. Sergio definitely feels more than just sexual attraction towards Eric yet he’ll likely deny his feelings and potentially reveal his true motives which will break Eric’s heart while confirming his beliefs men are evil(excluding Smith of course). If that happens I’m not sure Eric will survive. -
Chapter 2: The game continues.
NimirRaj commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: The game continues.
I’m confused by the scene with Giada & Laurel as was that in the distant past when she was pregnant with Eric meaning she knew about the affair years before she confronted her husband or was Laurel pregnant with another child after Brice left her? Brice...yeah I can’t comment about him because it’ll include too many curse words. Sergio might be slowly falling for Eric yet he’s playing with fire and so far his lines come off as so artificial & corny it’s pathetic. He must be terrible at flirting because typically his money and looks do all the talking for him. I couldn’t believe it when Riya supposedly saw right through him and felt he was being genuine. 🙄 -
Chapter 1: Who will rise and who will fall in this game?
NimirRaj commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Who will rise and who will fall in this game?
Ouch, that’s a tough thing for a kid to discover and have to deal with. Giada sounds like a lovely woman so I can’t believe her husband would cheat on her. 🙄 Ok, admittedly Eric did seem to go a little overboard, possibly due to his past relationship that apparently ended badly, yet after Henry got so handsy/forceful and was clearly in a sense trying to buy Eric I can’t believe Smith & Riya felt that Eric should have “given him a chance”. I mean, that’s a terrible suggestion as he’s far from suitable boyfriend material. Henry clearly never wanted a true relationship with Eric if he expected to buy his affection and asking Eric out by holding a “surprise party” is just ridiculous. Sergio for maybe the first few sentences of his intro 😂 sounded like an ok guy but sadly was quickly revealed to be super conceited & egoistical. Unless he’s a good actor I don’t see Eric wanting to have anything to do with him. Maybe Eric will bring Sergio down to earth. -
WOULD YOU LIKE A CUP OF TEA?
NimirRaj commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in WOULD YOU LIKE A CUP OF TEA?
Once again a very sweet chapter though while I believe Edward’s desire to apologize is sincere with things like Romel talking in his sleep I’m not sure if he has it in him to leave the topic of Craig and his grandfather alone for long not that I blame him if it’s something that’s weighing on Romel’s mind. Hopefully things will go well and that rubber band isn’t too tight. 👀 -
Is there more than one Juanito?
NimirRaj commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Is there more than one Juanito?
A very sweet chapter and as for the upcoming chapter’s title...is Gran going to show up at Craig & Justin’s next catering event?! Otherwise I don’t know what that title could be referring to...unless Gran has some interesting hobbies Craig doesn’t know about. 👀 😂 -
Edward flipped his lid big time not to mention his going off about things some of them don’t even know about not to mention information he promised to keep private. In the first installment Romel was concerned about Edward’s memory lapses so even though it hasn’t been mentioned lately I wonder if his mood swings or aggression is perhaps related to a medical condition. As far as Craig quitting nursing I think it’s way more complicated than it seems on the surface. All evidence seems to support Craig battled with his conflicting feelings and in the end gave his grandfather drugs yet something about how Romel acted along with the nurse commenting on the phone to Edward about the drug storeroom being locked & Romel being MIA when Edward called that evening makes me think he might have given Craig’s grandfather the drugs himself as a means of helping his friend.
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HAVE YOU STARTED WITHOUT ME?
NimirRaj commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in HAVE YOU STARTED WITHOUT ME?
Oof, lol Thomas does not know how to take no for an answer when he’s horny & lonely. I think I’d like to see him introduced to Mother sometime. 😉 Jared...TMI buddy especially with your ex even if he is your pimp now. Dang, that’s a sentence ain’t it. 🤦🏻♂️ -
That is so sad but also vexing in a way. Due to social standing and her wanting to keep her current lifestyle money wise they can’t be together...yet he never left, loves her from afar, on rare occasions dines with her, etc. so it’s sorta like he simply gave up sex rather than moved on. Not really sure his actions make sense to me as it seems like he’s suffering far more now than he would being in a private relationship with her as while I get why he wanted to be open about it, marry her, etc. he’s still there suffering in silence while at least before there were clearly at least fleeting moments of joy even if they had to hide their relationship to an extent.
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Ok Roger, who I think is the guy who introduced himself in the bar, was a terrible applicant so yeah he’s not going to do well if that’s his career plan. Jared...I’m not sure if he’s trying to upset Thomas or is truly serious because of his job situation yet either way I don’t think this is a good idea. Thomas was clearly happy at the end because Jared was picked and he wants Jared to be picked so he can have an excuse to have sex with other people. More and more I see increasing negatives rather than positives when it comes to their relationship...or former relationship. Maybe it‘ll work out as they’re both unpredictable so it’s hard to guess where things will lead.
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I love Edward and I’m glad to see Oliver gets the “service” he deserves. Couldn’t happen to a better man.
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The world is filled with coincidences yet part of me can’t help being suspicious of this guy. He just happens to introduce himself to someone who works for the Price’s who’s relationship or lack thereof is the worst kept secret in town while being exactly suited to be Mrs. Price’s next guy. Is there any chance he knew who he was talking to and was trying to get the...um position? Nah, just a lucky coincidence for both parties.
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Ugh, Thomas is not only thinking about how he’s upset he got caught rather than feeling any guilt he cheated he’s even saying it out loud. Damn, the moron is liable to blurt that out to Jared and get a taste of pain with no pleasure as I’d punch him...or more likely slap him. 😂 Thomas seemed like a sweet guy but Jared can do so much better. Clearly he wants a committed relationship and I even recall before they truly started dating that Jared discussed everything he wanted in a relationship which included commitment while Thomas claims he wants that yet clearly can’t control his urges. Not sure I see the relationship working out unless Jared decides he’s ok with an open relationship or unless Thomas can prove he can be trusted & committed to their relationship, though that’ll be difficult as trust is hard to earn back.
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I’m been binging this story and honestly I’ve been expecting some drama for a while. In the first story/installment Justin for instance was at one point thinking to himself that cheating on Craig with Tristan was inevitable, considering how they hung out nude, despite simultaneously saying he’d never want to hurt Craig. That was playing with fire yet nothing actually happened...so far despite his inner monologue making it seem like on some level Justin wouldn’t mind cheating on Craig if Tristan made a move on him. Now we’ve had our first threesome which while they were somewhat intoxicated had the consensus of both Craig, who can get jealous so his agreement surprised me, and Justin so all’s well on that front except I’m very disappointed in Thomas. Technically Thomas & Jared have never expressly used the term exclusive to define their relationship yet Jared made it clear he wasn’t happy at the idea of Thomas possibly having had sex with Andy when he called right after they first met and discovered Andy slept over despite that they weren’t even in a relationship at the time while now they live together, are dating, say the love each other, etc. Thomas clearly knows what he did would qualify as cheating as he’s happy Jared is gone so his absence won’t be suspicious as clearly he’s concerned about Jared finding out what happened. In a way I’m more bothered by his not seeming to feel any guilt over cheating than his cheating. I suspect he’d be hypocritically upset if he learned Jared had sex with someone else, though perhaps not. 🤷🏻♂️
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I can just hear Gus & Rick grumbling to themselves about Joey’s timing and how he was interrupting the wrong couple. Very sweet that they’ve both discovered the mutual interest as well as great I suppose that Gus made the first move as poor Rick “might” have eventually yet I didn’t have high hopes. Now it’s time for drama to strike again with Rita Skeeter, the rapist, and daddy dearest all ready to bring Rick’s mood down. Hopefully this will inspire him to have a backbone as he needs to put a few people in their places if he wants to be happy.
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Chapter 67 - "Burden Of Truth"
NimirRaj commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 67 - "Burden Of Truth"
So sweet and so realistic. You worry they’ll freak out, you freak out if they don’t freak out, and of course sometimes if they say something like “Oh I already knew.” instead of being relieved, which would be the logical reaction, you can actually end up feeling angry. The ups, downs, and sideways of coming out. 🤷🏻♂️ -
Wow when I think my opinion of Heinrich Senior couldn’t get any worse he outdoes himself. 🤦🏻♂️ With the invite from Gus things seemed to be looking up despite’s dad’s cheery presence until the shock of SexyHunk showing up in person only to be Willy Kohler of all people, though based on that description it look like life hasn’t been smooth sailing for him...which is just so sad. 😂 It’s going to really throw Rick for a loop and now I’m wondering if he had a face pic on the app as I’m curious if that jerk to put it mildly actually knew he was talking to the guy he raped. 🤔
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Oh this was delicious. 😂
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Theoretically TJ should be stronger because I recall everyone including I think Tristan being shocked at TJ’s abilities as he supposedly has some he shouldn’t based on his genetics and since Tristan is TJ’s clone he’s likely part of why they felt they knew how strong TJ would be meaning he’s probably stronger than Tristan based on their collective reactions. Of course the difference is Tristan does things TJ has never even pondered trying to do so it’s hard to compare them when TJ rarely unleashes his abilities. I have an idea which is if they’re wondering about things like if Patrick is secretly a pedophile I want to recall that TJ has the ability to read minds even though he hasn’t used it much, so wouldn’t that be useful? Seems like a good & convenient way to find out any secrets he might be hiding especially secrets that might endanger them if he’s up to no good.
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I’m dying 😂 and I totally love Tristan. I don’t know what Bob did yet I think we all know he deserved it. When are they going to learn that Tristan won’t take their bad attitudes & bs?
