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chapter ten jay I’ve always enjoyed the media. I’ve been good to them, giving them lots of quotable material and, in return, they’ve always been good to me. The downfall to having such a good rapport is that I’m sacrificed to the media after big losses. The organization knows that I represent well. Unlike some of my teammates who pout, grumble, or walk away from interviews all together, I make myself, general sportsmanship, and the team look good. “What are your thoughts on
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
I always get notified of comments, so thank you. This really means so much! There’s always nuggets that get picked up during a re-read!- 59 comments
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No doubt there are so many questions around this, most will get answered. Lars and Loren's 'reunion' will be revealing. The good, the bad, the painful. But Loren will have Jay by his side, so it will be okay.
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Glad to have you on board!- 59 comments
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That definitely takes the abuse to a different level. Family is always harder because it should never be them, but it is them, more often than not.
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Most abusers and (murders, etc) are the ones no one expected.
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Juxtaposed. @Myr would be so proud to see his words being used
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Next chapter…
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Jay does know just the things Loren needs. No matter how big or how small.
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This is so true. A few years back I was director of a youth group. There was a senior who wasn’t directly involved but he came around occasionally. A year after graduation it came out that he’d been abusing a bunch of 8th and 9th grade boys. Using his position as a popular senior, varsity start, etc. so much of the community said there’s no way, he’d never do that. Me? I advocated for the 13 boys who came forward. you can’t tell me 13 boys conspired against him and lied about being abused. THIRTEEN. And that’s only the ones who has the courage.
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So much still to come. It’s only chapter 9 of like 32!
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Getting stuff like this out in the open will always be beneficial to a couple, even if there is still hurdles, they will be less difficult. From Seamus’s perspective, Loren’s been really standoffish and he clearly think the world of Jay, so of course he’s a little hesitant. He doesn’t want Jay to make a mistake
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It’s a good thing…at least that’s what I tell myself
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This ^^ 💯💯💯
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I’m sure Jay can see the writing on the walls. He already has a taste for how Loe can pull away. Now that everything is laid out, the only way to ensure the beast doesn’t grow, is to make sure they’re intentionally in front of it. Jay doesn’t miss a thing
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It's hard when you know the chapter has a lot happening. I admit, I was nervous.
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The edited version is good, too. lol
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Clear, concise, and 💯 accurate comment.
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Yes, for sure. Just because Jay has a straightforward life, doesn’t mean he doesn’t desperately need Loren as well. Opposites and all that.
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Is Loren's twin going to make an appearance in this story?I bet you can write a very interesting scene on that. It won’t be immediate. It’s not like he opens up to Jay and then miraculously, after a decade of silence, he randomly hears from his family. But yes, there is a lot more on the horizon.
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I got a serious side eye when I saw him the next day. Especially since this was written and read before they won the Super Bowl. I got a phone call after Rams won, as if to throw it back in my face lol
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All of this but especially the part about Loren saving himself. He really isn’t looking to Jay to be his savior. He definitely needs the unconditional love and support that Jay can offer, but Loren is a strong guy and he has overcome a lot considering. Abuse, even with years id therapy, doesn’t just vanish. It’s a terrible, horrible type of cut that you live with but doesn’t ever go away and can sometimes still hurt when touched.
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This isn’t the last we will hear of his parents or his brother, it won’t be right away, but they will circle back around. Loren desperately needs a Jay.
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