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    Chapter 5

    Mrsgnomie commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Wow, this chapters was told with such a balance of grief and hope. I'm not much of a crier but you got a bit from me.
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    If Manchester UK is the same was small coastal town USA, then heck yes! lol
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    of all the chapter comments this one stresses me out the most lol I always overthink the pacing of a story. You do not know how much anxiety I had over that last section of the chapter where I flew through an entire month! I was stressed. But I wanted to start next chapter at the championship game. I did not want to waste any more word counts on games that don’t matter. I hope it doesn’t take away from the storyline!
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    Jay would either have a giant sectional perfect for two beefcakes or he opts for a regular sectional with the built in excuse for having Loren on top of him. Either way it's a win/win.
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    I'll be curious about your thoughts on the next chapter.
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    Lol, I honestly didn't expect this reaction. I should have....but I didn't.
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    Valid.
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    I mean, 👆 this is a valid point. But this is also a valid point 👇
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    But even as a teen, how sustainable is that? A week at 4x a day? Maybe two weeks? Even teenagers have limits. It's just not good after a while lol. Quality over quantity!
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    @kbois You're fired.
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    Only one final hurdle? You're such an optimist.
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    I will say that next chapter is a big one. You won't want to miss it.
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    I love fiction. 💗
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    My brother is a Rams fan through and through. I quite liked his reaction when he read it. Totally worth it.
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    25x a week would get uncomfortable really fast.
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    chapter eight jay “Dude, get off your phone,” Taylor chastises from the other side of the living room. We’ve long since ditched the parents and ended up back at my cabin. My brothers both have rooms back home but they almost always stay with me when I’m in town, and sometimes even when I’m not. I should really change the lock code. ESPN is playing in the background. Derek is on the sofa next to me, his eyes look like they might shut any moment. It’s past midnight but my bod
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    Stratego

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Stratego

    I love the visual of Jay pretending to be innocent and unknowing while really he's an evil mastermind.
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    Stratego

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Stratego

    Loren's definitely feeling things he's never felt and isn't sure what the heck to do about it! It's part of growing but it's not easy or fun.
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    Chapter 1

    Mrsgnomie commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Loved this! What a fun St. P day tale. Had me laughing and smiling.
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    Stratego

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Stratego

    Pesky double posting… I shall use this to thank everyone for the wonderful birthday wishes
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    Stratego

    Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Stratego

    The author never says shit. But I’m inclined to agree.
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    It definitely gives you a different perspective. Funny enough, the next chapter of JL parallels this one, when Jay visits Denver!!
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