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chapter eight jay “Dude, get off your phone,” Taylor chastises from the other side of the living room. We’ve long since ditched the parents and ended up back at my cabin. My brothers both have rooms back home but they almost always stay with me when I’m in town, and sometimes even when I’m not. I should really change the lock code. ESPN is playing in the background. Derek is on the sofa next to me, his eyes look like they might shut any moment. It’s past midnight but my bod
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I love the visual of Jay pretending to be innocent and unknowing while really he's an evil mastermind.
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Loren's definitely feeling things he's never felt and isn't sure what the heck to do about it! It's part of growing but it's not easy or fun.
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Loved this! What a fun St. P day tale. Had me laughing and smiling.
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Pesky double posting… I shall use this to thank everyone for the wonderful birthday wishes
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The author never says shit. But I’m inclined to agree.
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It definitely gives you a different perspective. Funny enough, the next chapter of JL parallels this one, when Jay visits Denver!!
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I think the first line of business is a motion for innie-outie to changed to in-betweenie. Then, and this is merely a suggestion, demand Kurkova’s resignation. You cannot have a leader that is not part of the group. You need to step into the leadership and activate for your platform.
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This is why I think they're a good match. They align well on the fundamental things. There is so much compatibility between them, some of it just needs to be unlocked.
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I bet @imogene_arant could tell us their acronym since they have an in-betweenie themselves and probably attend the meetings on a regular basis.
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Well, yes, but it may or may not be a catalyst for something else...I dunno
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I believe it's in the final chapter when they're in Mexico. Jay mentions something to Seamus. Other than that, not much is said...to my recollection.
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You really, really don't need to go re-read lol. Jay would totally let Loren stew in his decision and rejoice in his uncomfortableness.
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Did Jay enjoy eating up Sven's attention because he likes attention or because he enjoyed watching Loren squirm?
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Jay is definitely the person that Loren needs be bring him out of the darkness and into the light. No two ways around it.
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It’s always great to have experts around here lol
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Gotta make sure everyone is represented!
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As of this point, he hasn’t met Seamus or Matt in person. That won’t happen until the playoff game which is right around the corner!
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I love this!!!!!
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Sometimes I see Jay as a piece of elastic in a machine that’s being pulled over and over and over to see how long it last before it snaps. Hopefully Loren doesn’t test it too much.
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If only he could communicate the truth… lol
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chapter seven loren “Well, that lift kit was a total cluster fuck to put in. I’ll post a detailed tutorial to my YouTube channel so you can avoid my mistakes, which were mostly my fault for not reading the instructions, so make sure you don’t follow in my footsteps down that path. “Now that we have the lift in, it’s time to pick out wheels and tires. Remember,” I say, pointing at the camera so they know I mean business, “these vans make customizing difficult because they do
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The first story I ever wrote had, on average, 180 exclamation points per chapter! Whoa! I didn’t even realize I was doing it! I think I was just so excited to be writing! At some point I was like, whoa…and did a search and replace. It’s a far less enthusiastic story now.
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senescence - Word of the Day - Tue Mar 15, 2022
Mrsgnomie commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Not according to my kids or my body when I try and get off the floor lol
