Jump to content

Mrsgnomie

Signature Author
  • Posts

    4,767
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Mrsgnomie

  1. Mrsgnomie

    A history lesson

    I would not re-read the chapter right away lol. Maybe after a beer or something. Same. He needs a thousand hugs.
  2. chapter nine loren “There is nothing worse than trying to spot your gray or black or red luggage from the hundreds of similar ones coming out of the carousel. The thing I love most about the Trvl luggage is that you can customize colors. I didn’t go crazy this time, opting for tan on the front half and black on the back, which matches my van. The vivid lime green I chose for the zipper and seams give it the pop I need to spot it from a distance.” I spin the luggage around so
  3. Mrsgnomie

    Chapter 21

    Still mad about Caleb. Also mad about the new thing.
  4. It’s not even 9am. Gotta make sure everything is packed. Gotta make sure no one’s boasting your ego in my comment section.
  5. Don’t encourage @kbois, she’ll only get more sassy and her ego will grow bigger and bigger, like a Clydesdale.
  6. Is that really a different place?!!
  7. Mrsgnomie

    Chapter 5

    Wow, this chapters was told with such a balance of grief and hope. I'm not much of a crier but you got a bit from me.
  8. If Manchester UK is the same was small coastal town USA, then heck yes! lol
  9. of all the chapter comments this one stresses me out the most lol I always overthink the pacing of a story. You do not know how much anxiety I had over that last section of the chapter where I flew through an entire month! I was stressed. But I wanted to start next chapter at the championship game. I did not want to waste any more word counts on games that don’t matter. I hope it doesn’t take away from the storyline!
  10. Jay would either have a giant sectional perfect for two beefcakes or he opts for a regular sectional with the built in excuse for having Loren on top of him. Either way it's a win/win.
  11. I'll be curious about your thoughts on the next chapter.
  12. Lol, I honestly didn't expect this reaction. I should have....but I didn't.
  13. Valid.
  14. I mean, 👆 this is a valid point. But this is also a valid point 👇
  15. But even as a teen, how sustainable is that? A week at 4x a day? Maybe two weeks? Even teenagers have limits. It's just not good after a while lol. Quality over quantity!
  16. @kbois You're fired.
  17. Only one final hurdle? You're such an optimist.
  18. I will say that next chapter is a big one. You won't want to miss it.
  19. I love fiction. 💗
  20. My brother is a Rams fan through and through. I quite liked his reaction when he read it. Totally worth it.
  21. 25x a week would get uncomfortable really fast.
×
×
  • Create New...