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    Lord Edwin

    Lord Edwin is again in development business, but there is competition. So after the development is finishing in spite of trouble with the terrorizing competition Lord Edwin darts to other parts of the globe to do more business and to have more family. There is no dull moment in this story, the Lord is not a settle down type of a guy. While ships are blown up the family is growing and the Lord gets more titles to rattle to embarrass arrogant and oblivious officials. Quokka has again us readers following to interesting places in the world, have fun tracing the adventure on map!
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    Tough Times

    Another nice sea adventure by Quokka, thank you. As usual, it was nice to follow the adventure to weird places using the Google maps, it makes the story so much more alive. Young man Devlin Alpike has had a lot of misfortune and is living meagerly in trailer park without work. There seems to no way out of it until some high school friends come to show some light to Devlin's world. All is not just sunshine and a lot happens, read it yourself! The story itself is easy to follow, but I feel the end was a bit hasty. Maybe there will be a followup story? Please.
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    Chapter 110

    And just to point the problem, the Timothy is in state "Temporary Hold", and that prevents it to be reviewed and the stars. So why not just change the status to Complete, unless you intend to continue from the quit nice place of the story where it is now. I'm just nagging, sorry. The story is lovely even without the stars.
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    Chapter 110

    Thank you for that, but don't you think this story deserves its own stars? I sure do, and I'd like to decorate it with 5 of them;)
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    Chapter 110

    I had many wonderful moments with this story, thank you for creating it. Please mark the story to be completed, so that the story can get the stars it needs. The sequel then should be a new story, of course.
  6. A beautiful easy story of unlikely guys with nice twists. A totally lovably story, I enjoyed it grinning most of the time. Thank you for writing
  7. This not an easy book to read, the characters each have complicated history and collisions have consequences. This is book challenges the reader to understand the reflection of the history to the current time and maybe helps the reader think of his own life, too. We all have a history, the future is there to make. This book is well worth the reading effort! Thank you for writing it!
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    Kit

    A beautiful action filled fast paced growth story of a shoo away boy to a responsible young man with help of a relative. I could have endured more description of the feelings between the friends and then between the siblings. And the wealth appearing suddenly always astonishes me. It is naturally good to have some;) Anyway I enjoyed this story, thank you for writing. Maybe we will hear more of Kit later?
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  9. Hilarious excerpts from life. Just try not to laugh- in vain.
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  10. Christmas with a family consisting of people from different relationships, ages, and some teen angst and you might have some challenges. But there is nothing little surprise babies would not change, is there?
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    Boss Nanny

    There is not much more that could be said that the others have already said better, so thank you Mrsgnomie for writing this pour of events and multiple storms of feelings, really enjoyable story. It was really hard to take breaks from it, but sometimes one has to sleep, too.
  12. Living in a small apartment building seems to be similar to living in a small village: everyone thinks they know everyone's secrets and they still have to live together. This is a hilarious and entertaining story of life in a barely maintained LA apartment building that is supposed in near future to be taken down. How the inhabitants manage thru several house managers and ownerships and constantly changing tenants and build their own small community. Even if there is supposed to be no plot in this story, there is a lot of incidents and action, but above all the story is a description of human life. I loved the story! Thank you for writing.
  13. This is a beautiful light love story situated in movie industry. Well written and easy to read, pleasing like an evening snack.
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    Quabbin

    A young man going thru his life trying to find a settlement. The process is detailed and arduous and the reader might wonder whether the young man will survive. A well written psychological story with excellent storyline.
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    Mexico

    Excellent vacation story: introduction to another atmosphere, another kind of people, different language and different way to live. A fun light story, well worth the stars.
  16. No one but the mother and the son's latest known lady friend seem to be worried not hearing about the son for a couple of weeks. When mother becomes anxious enough not hearing anything from her son, the mother gets her ex, the father, a small town police officer, to reluctantly start searching for the missing son. And finally the father flies to West Coast to find more clues and there he meets some friends of the son. Most chapters are mainly dialogue between two people, but the dialogue reveals the partakers, and their attitude quite well. And the father being a cop can ask the right questions, too, not always appreciating the answers. And when in the end the father tells the anxious mother that the mission is completed, would you believe the mother would be content with that?
  17. The whirlwind of extended Michaels family continues struggling with different opinions and reconciliations and get more than their fair share of bombs, deaths, recoveries, comas, and other mishaps that have been so common in the earlier books. There is not one dull moment and the story line runs forward with speed that leaves the poor reader almost behind. The story is well written, has relatively short chapters and the cliffhangers, too. It has all kind of evil things happening, and magic helps the family a lot, again. And if you still after reading these five TJ's journey books can tell who's who and how they are related, you must be a wizard.
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    Farm Tales

    Very nice well told small stories. I liked a lot.
  19. This is a beautiful short love story that will leave you smiling in spite of all the quirks in their life. With love you win. Thank you for writing!
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  20. This a sweet well written fluent love story about a troubled man who walks to the door of secluded home of another man, who slowly opens the knots and helps the other accept himself, and finally helps his family to accept the pair. Although I am not very fond of detailed description of gay sex, in this story there is a beautiful considerate guidance to sweet, loving first intercourse, and it has its place, too. Thank you for writing, I enjoyed the story.
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  21. This well written, beautiful love story is the start of the ultimate Love Saga in three books. The love just keeps growing but there are all kinds of traps on the journey, so prepare with tissues, too. I always return to this set of stories when I feel gloomy, and every time I can't leave the story until having read all the three books to the satisfying end, and every time I feel surrounded with love afterwards; the saga is really uplifting.
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    DV Ch 6 - Jex is Hit

    Wonderful story, thank you. I'm just wondering what happened to the youngsters of the gang, or have you plans for them in future;?
  23. When you have a background, you have to fight for your living while supporting your sister, and additionally you have to fight for your ghosts, add to that another guy with his own background and ghosts, and you have some mess. With all the mental difficulties around I found the story a bit disturbing, a lot intriguing and to be another story I couldn't leave unread. Thank you for writing
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    Coquina Hotel

    This a light and sweet story of a man who after being betrayed in love starts a new phase in his life buying an abandoned hotel on the beach and meets his Viking while rebuilding the it. Again love brings success to the whole community.
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    The Expedition

    A very fluent story where modern satellite technology detects odd finding in Egyptian desert where nothing but sand should exist. Three archaeologists combine forces to reveal the mystery.
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