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James B.

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  1. James B.

    Chapter 2

    All I can say is this is the first story that only after two chapters of reading I'm truly captivated by. Wonderful job.
  2. I absolutely loved this story. Thanks for the great story.
  3. Let me say that this is really great story. These last two chapters are really bad with slot of mistakes. You have so many 3 or 4 running into each other with no spaces separating them, making them look like 1 really ugly. Other than great job.
  4. I don't think Toby has the flu, I believe the Leukemia is back as much as I hate to think or even say it. I just wanna be wrong in Toby's case.
  5. I somehow knew this was gonna happen but I also thought it was gonna be Krull that raped him. Of course when that fat ass lumberjack beat the shit out of him I'm surprised it wasn't him.
  6. James B.

    Chapter 15

    I'd really like to read the rest of this story.
  7. Nice to know about book 3 but can't get on ebooks keeps saying my connection is not safe.
  8. James B.

    Epilogue

    I will say since I have found this site, I have quit reading at other sites. I Love this site, the stories, and the authors. You are one of the best here. Thank-You for that. I will be reading more of your stories.
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  12. Beautifully put Asher, now send him home to River.
  13. I'm not liking where this is heading. Where is River & Sam?
  14. This was a fantastic story, even though fantastic seems wrong to say because it is very tragic as well. Even though a person could wish stuff like this didn't happen the sad part it does even today. I'm glad it turned out okay for Silver, I'm glad he was able to bring closure to David's family. Now on to Enigma II.
  15. Although this is so far a sad and tragic story so far and possibly true for some. I am truly hooked on this story. I was actually truly hooked before getting halfway through the 1st chapter. Stuff like this gets me on a emotional roller coaster. My heart is breaking for Silver but hoping River can get through to him.
  16. James B.

    Ex Post Facto

    OMG I'm so glad there was only 22 lives lost. It could have been worse. However I am do glad Dylan is alive, I totally lost it when he said he was dead and I jumped for joy and did a victory dance. LOL
  17. James B.

    Chapter 23

    Excellent Story and Ending. Now to see what else you have written for me to read.
  18. James B.

    Chapter 22

    Yes Jake kept his word and Fucked Klaus! Damn now I'm all worked up. Excellent chapter.
  19. James B.

    Chapter 16

    I agree Diaz needs out if Jake's Life altogether.
  20. James B.

    Chapter 14

    (making him moan loader and loader, ) I so believe it’s louder and louder. other than that excellent chapter.
  21. James B.

    Chapter 6

    I think in Jake's case Klaus is gonna end up falling and falling hard for Jake.
  22. Oh God, I really hope Dylan is not dead or anything happens to Patrick. I'm ready for the next chapter now.😍
  23. James B.

    Rainbow Colours

    Sad to see this end. Can't wait till Eric, Andy and Adam return.
  24. James B.

    Michael

    I don't want Daniel to go.
  25. I hope Robbie can give Connor a chance, but I'm thinking his heart is truly with Tom. Great just what we don't need is Don back in the picture. I'm also a little worried about Sue's headaches. She needs to be checked over.
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