Let me say that this is really great story. These last two chapters are really bad with slot of mistakes. You have so many 3 or 4 running into each other with no spaces separating them, making them look like 1 really ugly. Other than great job.
I somehow knew this was gonna happen but I also thought it was gonna be Krull that raped him. Of course when that fat ass lumberjack beat the shit out of him I'm surprised it wasn't him.
I will say since I have found this site, I have quit reading at other sites. I Love this site, the stories, and the authors. You are one of the best here. Thank-You for that. I will be reading more of your stories.
This was a fantastic story, even though fantastic seems wrong to say because it is very tragic as well. Even though a person could wish stuff like this didn't happen the sad part it does even today. I'm glad it turned out okay for Silver, I'm glad he was able to bring closure to David's family. Now on to Enigma II.
Although this is so far a sad and tragic story so far and possibly true for some. I am truly hooked on this story. I was actually truly hooked before getting halfway through the 1st chapter. Stuff like this gets me on a emotional roller coaster. My heart is breaking for Silver but hoping River can get through to him.
OMG I'm so glad there was only 22 lives lost. It could have been worse. However I am do glad Dylan is alive, I totally lost it when he said he was dead and I jumped for joy and did a victory dance. LOL
I hope Robbie can give Connor a chance, but I'm thinking his heart is truly with Tom. Great just what we don't need is Don back in the picture. I'm also a little worried about Sue's headaches. She needs to be checked over.