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Hey! Just because your 18 now doesnt mean you can just drop the juvinile bit Happy Birthday! Steve

Happy Birthday Steven... officially this time around Steve

I would have commented honest, but... uh... something came up ... I've written about the pizza thing and posted en length on the topic, so I wont go there now. The 'guy' sounds facinating, but in my own odd way I find religion facinating, even if I do believe orginized religion isn't the saving grace it once was. (those are my feelings, if you disagree pm me, please dont reply here!) There are alot of birthdays in July! I told S T E V E N, my hypothosis on this matter... somebody's I know is next thursday. have a great day Doll and remember pull the yellow chunks off first! Steve

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ERIC!!! hope it was a good one

See and I was going to come to his defense and point out that he has in fact only just made his 1000 post, The GA computer has run amok and is counting it as a post from every hoof, but noooooooooooooooo he had to go and blame me for his four thousand posts... Like I've got my hand shoved up his... Yeah Congrats CJ, and while I'm at it I might as well pat myself on the back, then again I have to get to CJ's next post Steve

Happy birthday!

Ball caps, ever so practical

I first had the opportunity to read a version of this some time ago. The hurricane in that version wasn't named Steve either, (Sorry Rabble Rouser, I don't know why they must be so insensitive). I also got to read a few other polished drafts as well. The technical Jargon, for me, fit perfectly, but I do have a minimal working knowledge of surfing even though I mostly an inland guy myself. Going on that I didn't find it to oppressive, or lacking in enough "atmosphere" to tackle the story. Characterization, again as had been stated I would have liked to see Drake's character a little more, but I understand that size limits and choreography of Character interactions made that a hard hurdle to tackle. Cody, I find Cody fascinating, even sort of enigmatic. I'll be the first to admit his entrance into the story staring stoically into the churning pacific did not give me a good feeling. His entrance into the story was almost ethereal in its prose. I honestly thought there would be no saving Cody from the first time I met him in the narration. I had a feeling he was one of those famous Hawaiian Phantom's that are said to stalk about the Islands. As the story moved on my initial fears of the enigmatic surfer turned into something closer to restrained terror as it appeared Cody was more then a Phantom or possible siren luring Drake into a suicidal attempt of rescue. See how my imagination gets away from me?? CJ's trademark action pace was there and drove the story as if a storm pushing inland, driving both the protagonists of the story and the reader into an endearing outcome. I love it CJ, and I'll say it again I think it is the best thing you have written yet! A mighty fitting story for your anniversary of On line writing! And the twist... , even though I kinda guessed it from the beginning, which only nurtured the initial feelings I had about Cody. Awesome dude, just Awesome! Steve

Ahhh but alot of them need that little fact drilled into their empty skulls

... _ _ _ ... you guys are soo mean to poor steve#3 what did he ever do to y'all??

BIG THANK YOU!!!! CJ Joe Graeme and all the wonderfull authors who participated, and you know put up with my tardiness on delivering a finsihed product! Steve

I'd like to say I'm dismayed. But I really can't not with all that has been happening as of late. Lewd IM's to congressional aides, Religeous leaders shoved out of the closet only to run back in under the guise of "intense religious counciling", and now this. It's a cycle of self hatred that keeps going, feeding off the generations before. The sad part is such a cycle will never stop until Humans, as a world culture, can learn to not care who is sleeping with whom.

country goat city goat... and finally through a serious of well placed sneaks and allusions Cj has announced the title of his next project.

Frolicking in the pen? oh wait I shouldnt have done that.... Steve

the juvienial statement was directed at me! But I retract and aim said statement at you now... because I can! seriously though, whether Blackheart (who Im strangely attatched too now...) lives are dies this story is still one helluva ride and I've enjoyed every second of it.

Eric and Blackheart sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g..... hrmm how very juvenile...

Romance sounds good enough, but there are some stories that don't fit snuggly into that genre. I had a friend once that used the phrase Gay Affirmitive Fiction. I kinda like the sound of that, however lofty in its goal.

There is a certain tide that comes to mind when having a discourse with other online authors, sex scenes, more so the stigma of writing porn. What is porn? According to Wikipedia: Pornography, sometimes shortened to porn or porno, is, in its broadest state, the explicit representation of the human body or sexual activity with the goal of sexual arousal and/or sexual relief. According to Webster

To be quite honest I was more thinking of one of those aussie tri-athelete/lifeguard types. however, now that the subject of sheepsheerer/farmer has been brought up, there is something titelating about a bronzed guy wearing a pair of dungerees and little else (wheres the drooling smilie?? ). enough with the thread hijacking... I have yet to see any sign of poor misunderstood Eric. Did the smack to the head knock some sense into him? I doubt it especialy with the nafarious Sheriff there to spoofeed him more crack. And Cj is totally white-washing the whole Mr. Williams did it theory... Steve

Im warning you now... if you set blackheart up with (excuse the stereo typing graeme...) some outback sheepsheerer type with missing teeth and pit stains bigger then the once white wife beater he's wearing... Im so sending him in your direction, I'll be able to convince him that your a sheep

How are you going to show Blackheart being rescued by the hot Aussie surfer on holiday in your epilogue??? Sure you haven't mentioned any orientation this way or that, but damn the accent will get them everytime

beh... hes obviously not a prfessional in that sense he was simply following the money. You still couldn't have him captured? or could he be crawling the the lush sub tropical jungles broken and.... Ok I better stop that is bordering on narcisisim... Steve

I totally agree... killing off blackheart was just mean and evil spirited. Of all the bad guys why the entrepreneurial hacker? Why? Theres good sheriff of Piedmont what does he get sides a sliced cheek or the real baddy (or is it biddy??) Thaddeus! bad form CJ bad form! Steve (who bares no resemblance to blackheart...)

did I forget to mention that one little caviate? My Badddddddddddd

HAHAHAAAAAA silly goat those are griffins not dragons