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Dude... Focus! chapter 4 comes after 3 then five..

OK, maybe I did have something to do with the flaming bag... As for the details... Ive already mentioned engine size somewhere. I know I did! I even researched the door handles I had a serious question there. Are they push button release or... the kind you lift... damn details details..... and seriously, posting car porn in a forum post!?! where's a moderator when you need one Steve

I could soooooo sing like a purty lil' birdy. Yet I won't...

When a author posts into the efitction section here they have control over the story and can remove it at anytime... That is my understanding, as tools for editing and deleting are provided. Steve

Yo Rick! I have yet to read, but seeing as your using inventive ways of encouraging feedback... I'll check it out tommorow and leave you a note or two.... Ask the resident shy and retiring lurker though ( CJ ) Once I start a rarely shut up Steve

That is very poetic Colin, and I couldn't agree more... we shouldn't need that one...

Victims..... my thoughts exactly JK, you know I love where the story is going CJ, and ya know what they say a diamond in the rough is still a diamond Steve

You should have seen the plethora I cut in the rewrite

Very true... but if the same goal can be achieved through action. It would be better suited for the reader. Why imply action when you can show it? (thanks to you! If it weren't for you messing with our heads, we would have been together months ago!) *thanks to you," he shouted, "If it weren't for you messing wih our heads, we would have been together months ago." Edited to include example...

thanks to you, and we would have been together months ago if not for you messing with our heads (thanks to you! If it weren't for you messing with our heads, we would have been together months ago!) Alright, the wording is better, But I would only use one of those exclamations, if any. I read somewhere that your only allowed around four per 100,000 words... Beside you can relay excitement through action and narration. Steve

Hrmmmm funny how that is, sometimes its hard to distinguish the victor from the victim... Blame me for making you think? honestly... HOW'D YOU KNOW!!!!! Ok Tracy, You've started a vicous trend... No chapters for two weeks! just kidding Steve

Well if greame didnt just steal my thunder there... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! And many... many... thanks for all your reviews for Living in Surreality!! i appriciate them more then I can say. Steve

Readers? what are those? I dunno on one hand I'd love to have throngs of devoted fans, on the other that is a lot of responsibility to take on. I guess this question all goes back to "why do you write?" the simple answer to that is because I can and if I didn't the voices in my head would drive into a locked padded room somewhere. Do I like sharing my work, yes, It gives me some sense of accomplishment. Thats why I like recieving brief notes letting me know someone is out there reading what I have written. Do I let readers influence my writing, No. Then Ive only ever recieved one email that had a story direction suggestion. The guy wanted nude camping between a father and his son.... and a gay birds and bees talk. :wacko: So yeah... the nude camping bit never happened.... and the talk never happened either. Steve

Great!! now a crack pusher... Glad your enjoying it chris! did what? the only question, was it a good surprise or a bad surprise? :wacko: beh.... labels... Why do you have to catogorize and sub-catagorize everything to death. I guess it makes things easier to explain in the long run... Anyhow, some firestorm! must be one of the slow burning smolders...

Nah... I like spoilers..... Speaking of, Chapter 7 Now just to sit back, relax and wait for the firestorm to begin.... Steve

So the hand drawn picture chapter, featuring stick figures with vastly disproprtionate body parts, was a lie? Steve

HEY! blame DK he's the one who gave me the idea of using my dream as a story!

hehehe.... Not so successful if no one understood it Oh well, no one is perfect... Speaking of I cant wait to see the firestorm chapter seven ignights... Steve

Leave it up to CJ to get us all posting more First, I agree on the climax side of things with DS, If this story took place over the span of a week, CJ started it on Wednesday instead of the usual Monday. Events in the characters life from the previous two days will surely still be effecting his actions on this day. Maybe the use of the prologue to fill in the gaps of the missing time was a misstep leading to this general timeline confusion. :wacko: Secondly, I dont think birds comments were too way out of wack, just providing his take on the information provided so far. All I can say if the story starts with this big a bang.... and I can't say anything else, CJ promised no one would find me if I did.... Steve I was late to the party again....

You ever have one of those Mondays? You know the ones where you rush out of the house at 4:30 in the morning. Get halfway to work only to figure out you have forgotten your keys, so you have to turn around and drive the 15 miles back home grab your keys and head out once again. Only this time you get stuck in traffic? Yep, that was my Monday. Nope, it sure didn

Congrats Razor! Steve

I acctualy think I stumbled onto GA by going through refering urls on my own website... It seems someone was foolish enough to acctualy add it to the links archive here. Been coming back over the years, checking out different authors Comicality, DomLuka. Then I figured Id join... acctualy I need to pm admin about that Steve

You are sooo wrong in your assertion that all triumphs belong to birds and sharon One can only be truely as good as what they have to work with. That said, Wow DS, Ive said it before I'll say it again, The way you have twisted around Mythology to suit your stories pourpose with Midnights rainbow is truely inspiring. I'm liking the mythology you have set for the story. I'll need to read more about Asher before I feel one way or another about him, but with one scene you have me liking David. I hope you don't wash this young vampire away as such an expedible character. The only real criticisim I have is in your description, you seemed to use it overly so where Seth's lair is concerned. Im still not completely sure I read the columns part right... All and all I most definately looking forward to the next chapter, and the eventual re-emergance of Lucif. Steve

whoo hoo I can answer all three of the last ... 1 I am starting to write a new chapter 2 at this point I am inebriated... 3 yeah I'm a happy drunk better then a mean one ..... The person below me has commitied to something they are no longer so sure of.... Steve

everybodies got a laughing place ... in my pants OK maybe that works against me