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It was an interesting, much needed weekend break for David and TC. It's great that your researching hard to make this story as authentic an experience of a Dom and Dom/sub experience for your readers. The conformism of the D/s roles, as natural as that may be, is the complete antithesis of the "go with the flow" approach that is natural to me. That is why I find the story so intriguing and likewise your remarks that some of TC's actions may have been a mistake for a Dom. My natural reaction is, if it's consensual and you're having a good time, then just enjoy the ride, there are no rights and wrongs to being a free agent, so just have fun. But of course we are talking about handing over authority by "contract", in advance, selecting off a menu of choices, to limit another party's actions which will no longer be under the direct control of the sub. That is quite different, fascinating and scary, all at the same time. I enjoyed the chapter but would have liked a little more detail on how David was restrained. Purely for academic analysis, you understand. 😉

Listen thats just a ploy by TC to get David to be more submissive. At the end of the day TC is the Dom and can say David didn't quite make the cut to anything. And if David challenges his Dom, I imagine that's clearly evidence that he's not in subspace proper, anyway.

I guess Jamie's hesitancy is a strong indication that retaining Ricky's friendship is worth way more than risking a play to become his boyfriend. It's times like this that the phrase "can I have a hug?" Was invented for. You've done well to get to chapter 5 without having Ricky openly confess he wants Jamie as a boyfriend. Having Jamie's parents come home to break the moment could keep them in suspense for a while to come. Plus we can enjoy Silas kicking Jamie's ass for not having sealed the deal with everything that Ricky said. Plenty more fun, tension and tenderness to be had in this great story.

So David awoke the Lion and knew it was time for payback on Friday Night. It's hard to imagine the amount of trust needed by a sub. Once TC has expertly tied David's hands to the headboard and opened him for grooming inspection. Plucking the stray hairs on his taint with tweezers even seemed to shock David. I think I would have chickened out at that part of the story. I'm still cringing at the thought of it now. Can you even imagine a straggler on his scrotum. It's way too much for me already. The blindfold must make the anticipation so much more intense as well. But the stick and carrot approach is very evident in their D/s sessions and TC is careful to allow David to experience new heights in the intensity of his release. Ultimately, that will be the draw for David to subjugate himself to ever deeper levels of submission and who knows even subspace at a much later stage. TC's expertise with ropework is what bothers me most. Bondage is fundamental barrier and step to overcome in the early stages of D/s development. Impressive chapter Kbois. It occurs to me that the level of trust that David has in TC, normally takes a long time and maybe a lifetime to achieve and that will help David to progress a lot faster as a sub. I can only look on grimly as a spectator with morbid fascination and know that David is free to pull the plug at any stage. Or is he? I suspect that its possible that David may reach a point in this whole experience, where he simply can't. I hope that your personal difficulties with your younger son, get resolved eventually. It's never easy being a parent.

Edited: I'm mainly into romances. This is well written but not quite my thing. Good luck with the rest of the storyline.

It's an interesting description of a restoration, sure enough, but it needs a personal interest soon to carry the story forward beyond an exercise in logistics. I'm sure it will get there.

Sounds like a phone call or two to the local tourism office is needed to stop the misinformation about the current airbase ownership and it's status. Not surprising really as it's probably stood idle for many decades. It looks like a big project too and mainly for contractors I would suspect. Do they really need to be so secretive about it? What harm could Marcus have done? I guess the ways of the country are somewhat different and you have to keep a step ahead of your neighbours.

Pleased Marcus decided on spending the break at Jex's. The coastal fly-by would have been major news for a small rural community. As indeed will the news that Marcus was risking life and limb, according to his mother. Quite amusing and certainly not the last he will hear of it. I like Jex's family setup. It's a bit like the Walton's with Jex as John-boy. Obviously the family are business savvy and see the recently acquired air base as a good investment but it's sure costing a substantial amount to meet the building regulations. It seems they can't sell it as a mining proposition so where are they going to recover their investment? I probably missed something. Its definitely an interesting story. Looking forward to how they intend to spend their break earning some cash. Wynn seems like a cute little bro who will want to spend some time with his big lanky bully of a brother. I think he'd be fun to have around at times.

As I read the opening paragraphs, I was thinking Jex must have had a lonely existence, having to travel from one distant boarding school to another, for his education. His grandparents dying while he was away. But as the chapter progressed, I realised what a fabulous life he had. Still close to his parents and siblings, a Landy with cooler he had since 14, his own 49 acre airbase and now a Tiger Moth bi-plane. Lucky son of a *****! I hope his friend Marcus enjoys the flight to Geraldton enough, to want to fly on and spend the fotnight with Jex. Big boys toys are fun but so much better with someone to share them with 😎 Exciting start to the tale. Hope to learn a bit about the outback. Already learnt something new about quokka's. I want one hahaha.

Are you saying that I dont possess any of those qualities? I'm not sure if I ought to be offended?

If I were David, I think I would relieve myself and not say anything. How's TC going to know? Faking blue balls is easy. Haha! 🙂

Thank you for your honesty Michael. It ought to be obvious that at the start of this story, that i know little or nothing about all the flavors of BDSM. I'm glad that I have a less formalised arena in which to raise questions and eventually get the right answers. Rest assured that while I read for enjoyment and to understand a wider audience, it's never with the intention of disrespecting other people. But I doubt that I can continue to comment, enjoy and learn from this story, without highlighting my ignorance of certain things in this field. I hope that you can continue to correct any misconceptions that I have and know that almost all of the thousands of comments that I have made on GA, in a wide range of subjects, contain irony intended purely for humour and never for personal offence. Undoubtedly, I have pushed Kbois into answering questions in a field that she has warned us all, that she is not an expert in but has done her best to answer as openly as she can. For that I remain sincerely grateful. Thank you for your clarification and understanding. Long may it continue.

The drama in the tension was sublime. I love the way that you detail every aspect of the characters you portray. It's like you never miss a trick. I love the fun bits like "Maybe YOU'RE a bad kisser too, jackass!" The way the bottom fell out of Ted's world with that Kiss, is just reward for a really decent bloke. I do have a suspicion that even so, Jaylen is feeling that he has got the better end of the deal. That's something that Ted will never be able to comprehend. Quite possibly, the age barrier may be less of an issue, for men of quality. oh no, it's on long term hold. What does that even mean? Jaylen's got pick his car up in two hours. Tease!

Quite a night of surprises for Coach Alders. Finding out that half of his team of 15 year olds were having regular sex with eachother and that Jaylen was claiming the credit for the team's success. It's an intriguing examination of the legally and socially acceptable age gaps between consenting adults. Ted, as a responsible adult, seriously questions the appropriateness of his actions where I suspect many others, of his age, may not. It's a non-issue for Jaylen and given that Ted would rather not be alone at Christmas, everyone's a winner, aren't they? Unless, Jaylen ends up wanting more than just a fling.

Well as much as Ted Alders would wish to deny it, Jaylen appears to have the bigger crush between them both. I doubt that Ted will be able to shake Jaylen off so easily and end their acquaintance when they leave. Just don't get seen by any of Jalen's family, while youre trying to let him down softly, would be the next best advice. That and resist banging his brains out in the process. 🤪 🙄

Ha I chose the word advisedly and with full ironic intent. 😉 Like Elliot , I like pushing the limits of where I can go to with this.

I never sensed at any stage that reciprocation was ever on the table for discussion. Maybe a simple line could have been added to placate readers like myself, for whom it was a major issue. I'd hate to think that you'd lose even a single reader because of that misunderstanding. Even a line with TC saying I feel a little awkward asking when i know it's something I couldn't do myself would have made TC seem less of an ogre. Although I'm past all that now I make the suggestion for future readers that may think like me. And yes there are some, I hope. 😉

You're right 'victim' wasn't the word I was looking for. I meant to say... The interesting thing is that TC appears to be more of a slave to his compulsion to be a Dom than David is as a Sub.

That was a tame initiation for David and quite erotic too. I still haven't figured out if Doms are compelled to be Doms 24/7 as the only way they can reach sexual gratification. If so it's like a form of autism. I hate rigid regime so while it's never going to be for me, I am enjoying how TC and David are managing to adapt. The interesting thing is that TC appears to be more of a victim to his compulsion to be a Dom than David is as a Sub. Intrigued to see how everything will unfold. TC is clearly harbouring plenty of reasons to spank David at the next session. How long before Pickles is summoned to help.

"Ghost of the Future," he exclaimed, "I fear you more than any spectre I have seen. But as I know your purpose is to do me good, and as I hope to live to be another man from what I was, I am prepared to bear you company, and do it with a thankful heart."

Hope is the need to believe in a better tomorrow. And Faith is the courage to believe it will actually happen. It's all any of us have got Tim. Hang tight dude.

This is where I probably need to take a back seat, while I see how this all works out. I'm uncomfortable with the fact that TC assumed that David had no right to ask him if he would reciprocate at some point. Two gay tops would surely consider their opposite to be selfish if they insisted to be a forever Top. So what makes this any less selfish, for one of two Doms to always insist on being the Dom. I don't need an answer. It's just how I feel. Anyway on a lighter note the contract list of acceptable actions was a hoot. I've got to download one of those lists. And what's the worst that can happen if you break the contract? You're out of TC's club. The TENS is a non negotiable No for me having been hit with a full 50v during the birth our second child. As if contractions was a valid excuse for putting me in harms way. In the personal circumstances, I'm glad that David gets to satisfy his long held curiosity with TC. Two months seems an awfully long time for a contract. I'd opt for an hour for the first session. Thats about a comfortable pain threshold in the dentist chair for any of us.

I've been doing a bit of background research on BDSM and was wrong to think that it was not consensual or in any way controlled. That's a threshold I could never cross. But it seems there is a detailed session where everything that can be done to the Sub is discussed in exquisite detail including how they will call a halt if they are unable to speak. I guess you just have to know and trust your Master/Mistress. I'm getting side tracked. I'm beginning to think that TC and David have possibilities together. The Dirty Dancing sure had David putting in a convincing submissive role. Maybe TC has grown up a little too and realised that there is more to a loving relationship than insisting on being a Dom. At some point, these guys will probably realise that being together and enjoying a sex life together, will involve a little give and take. A sort of friends with benefits where the benefits are, that you get to have the company of a best mate to chat and play with, instead of coming home to an empty house.

What's wrong with feet. Toes are sexy.

Ha, both virgins, of sorts. I'm not going to notice. I'll just think these BDSM folk are a lot weirder than I thought 🤐