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Chapter Eleven: Whispers
Jkeeletupelo commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eleven: Whispers
I am so completely wrapped up in this story!! I can't wait for the next one - and I love the unique approach to shifters and magic you've taken. It's very definitely more European than American, and I find it very refreshing.- 57 comments
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You're getting too good at the cliffies!! Great chapter and we get even further into the mystery!! I'm completely hooked - more please!
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Excellent chapter!!! I can't wait for more!
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Well, there are a few things unraveling here! Another good installment - can't wait for more!!
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Ok, I've waited until the end of what was published to comment, and I'll say, im impressed. I like the air of mystery you've built up to this point, and I love the characters we've been introduced to so far. I'm very curious about what is yet to come, and I'm also wondering just who exactly Clara and Beatrice are in the grand scheme of things.
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A brilliant finish!! It was perfect. Thank you!!
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I can't believe it's over, but what a perfect ending. That you have given years of your life to this project just shows us how much the characters demanded to be heard, taken seriously and presented properly. Everything in its own perfect time and place. I've read everything you've posted here, and I've been with this site a long, long time - this is my third account, because I lost devices and passwords and had a could of long gaps. Anyway, in all of this time, you are among the top of the authors I've had the privilege to read here, in pretty much every way possible, and I love you for it. Thank you so much for sharing so much of your life and yourself with us.
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It is always a great and welcome treat to see the notification oop up that there is a new chapter available. I love this story!!
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That. Was. Perfect. This, is Alf!! (For absolutely no reason!)
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I can very well imagine myself having that same conversation with some super chipper, gung-ho HR person. And one of us not surviving it!!
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That was incredibly beautiful. Thank you.
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Another excellent chapter! The boys sure are busy these days! It's great to see everyone rally around them, and to bring a whole new set of friends into the picture with Harry, Janice and now Peter. More, please
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I fuckin love that Caleb got his HEA. I can't wait to see what the rest of the crew is up to...
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I love it. I'm super curious to see what the epilogues wrap up, but it was a good ending!
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Fucking EPIC!!!
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Hooray, harry got to go home finally!! I knew at least Michael would end up staying with him for a while - another great chapter!!
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You are a brat. Jesus, talk about cliffies! Now imma be irritable til Saturday..
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So, I've made it this far in, and I have to say, Mr Halford, that you have absolutely nailed this revision! I've read this story many times, and so I'm able to see all of the new stuff, as well as where something has been rearranged or brought xurrent, etc. It flows wonderfully and all of the extras are fantastic! Thank you for sharing!!
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Wow, there was a lot going on in this one!! It seems the boys are having a bit of difficulty adjusting to not being on their own...hopefully they'll get it together!! Thank you again for another great chapter!
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I haven't commented much on this story, but I have so enjoyed reading of Armand and his family. It seems like it is winding down now, and I'm of two minds. I'm sad to see it end, but know that it must; I'm also happy to see the way You're drawing everything together for the last act. The entire story has been well written, and this is no exception. Thank you for sharing it!
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Well, I'm glad Asa got out, but these critters sound too much like my last set of inlaws for comfort....
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I knew they were gonna adopt Harry as well! Great story - thank you!!
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I'm continually impressed by these boys!!
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Im kinda fangirling about this story it seems, but I loved this one - Harry is definitely getting adopted!!
