So, I've made it this far in, and I have to say, Mr Halford, that you have absolutely nailed this revision! I've read this story many times, and so I'm able to see all of the new stuff, as well as where something has been rearranged or brought xurrent, etc. It flows wonderfully and all of the extras are fantastic! Thank you for sharing!!
Wow, there was a lot going on in this one!! It seems the boys are having a bit of difficulty adjusting to not being on their own...hopefully they'll get it together!! Thank you again for another great chapter!
I haven't commented much on this story, but I have so enjoyed reading of Armand and his family. It seems like it is winding down now, and I'm of two minds. I'm sad to see it end, but know that it must; I'm also happy to see the way You're drawing everything together for the last act. The entire story has been well written, and this is no exception. Thank you for sharing it!
Ok, it is 5:30AM on a crappy, rainy Saturday in Mississippi. Where am I? Asleep, you ask? No, not me! Never! I am sitting here waiting for my notifications to update like a crackhead waiting for his dealer to show up....
You see? This right here. This is what I meant when I said we had to aggravate you.... I'm glad you're feeling a little better, and I look forward to the rocks, broken glass, rusted metal and wild bears or whatever that's at the bottom of this cliff for the boys to land on......
Looking forward to the next installment of course, but you have to take care of yourself first so we can continue to aggravate the hell out of you!! Love you, Dudette!!
"The boys are home and everything is calm." Is it just me or did that REALLY sound like a threat??? Another fantastic chapter, Dudette - this one has me both completely hooked and completely snowed!! I have no idea what might be coming!
I didn't want to leave this in a review, because it doesn't say much about the story and is pretty personal. Thank you, from myself and on behalf of my brother and my cousin, who both came home from Afghanistan and Iraq, respectively, as broken as I've ever seen anyone who survived. They both have service dogs, and they have truly made a huge difference in their lives and the lives of their families. I think the is the first time I've ever seen PTSD service dogs mentioned in fiction here, and the story was awesome!! Thank you so much!