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If this was @kbois korner krew we would be outside the house with burning torches (Not Really @Arch Hunter)
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Jeez God knows what Greg's next move is going to be. If this stuff was RL somehow I don't think Men giving birth out of their ass would catch on. "A theft prevention officer is basically a rent-a-cop. You watch surveillance cameras and walk through the store to keep an eye on customers and merchandise." "Oh." Connor laughed a little. "I get it. I catch shoplifters." If Connor gets a job like that why do I think the first person he catches will be.......Nathan?🤔 Then again it could be ....Greg🤞
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I'm roughly at the halfway point hopefully @Mark Ponyboy Peters I will be caught up by your next post. I had this conversation literally 15 minutes ago as I type this. My buddy was looking over my shoulder at me reading this and he noticed your name. He asked he if that was your actual name or a nickname. I said I didn't know one way or another (I suppose Ponyboy could have some Indian background) He went on to tell me about a buddy they all knew in middle school who about the same height and weight as everybody and was nicknamed Ponyboy because a certain body part of his was considerably larger then everyone else. Since he was a boy they used the term Pony instead of Horse. So forgive me for being crude but is your story about the name Ponyboy the same as his?🤔😄
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I generally agree with that but I know a few friends very nice people but when you talk to them they go on and on and ........and on and on.Those people I text😄
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This is never going to end is it? Well at least Manny didn't lose part of his leg. Then his favorite restaurant would be IHOP🥁 da dit boom
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Paul's parents knew but weren't happy about it at all. He didn't want to risk asking to talk to a couple gay men about anything. He figured he'd talk to Bobby after he talked with Manny and Bass. It's one thing for Paul's parents not to be happy about it but are they extremists? Will stuff hit the fan if they find out after Bobby speaks with Manny and then tells Paul that could put a lot of unnecessary attention on Manny and Bass. Mark was shocked, "Why would you need a bodyguard?" "Well, my dad was, um, involved, with a bunch of slimy characters. He figured; we should have someone watching out for us." Paul was up next, "How did your parents die?" "Dad and my stepmom died in a car accident. My real mom died in a bomb blast." Mark queried, “How did you find out your real mother died because of a bomb?” Rocky hesitated, not wanting to share all the details. “I found some notes, my dad made about his search for the bomber. It included some details about the bombing itself. Even if Rocky didn't know martial arts if students knew about all that I think they would keep their distance from Rocky anyway
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Should Connor have took the Moped? I mean it sounds like he thought the moped was being discarded because it was next to the trash.Well who leaves a moped next to the trash it's not like trash pick-up will take it. At least as far as I know🤔 Even though Nathan was being Nathan this is the best I've seen Nathan interact with Connor and M in this story it was almost heartwarming they even all three took Jack out for a walk. Now on to Mother's plan (Good to see her BTW) "Jeez. Fine," Nathan changed the channel to Family Feud. "Better?" Connor glared at the TV. The bright set and the fake smiles of the contestants made his stomach hurt. Fake smiles? Hey Steve Harvey is funny those were not fake smiles
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Loved how you described thing with Zippy and Mikey (BTW that reminds me of a obscure comic strip called Zippy the pinhead anyone remember that?) He’d often be behind the bar serving on busy nights flitting from one customer to another. I guess you meant flirting unless it's an New England expression I forgot about .I used to live in Revere Mass. Speaking of growing up in Revere candlepin bowling alley I remember those you might have to explain what that is to other readers
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Most likely the A-hole supervisor
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I didn't know where to ask this because @CLJobe current story is on temporary hold and you can't do any function. Anybody have ant info? I hope he is OK.One of the possible reasons given why it is on hold was that he was leaving GA. I hope that is not the case🤞
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I'm very happy to see @raven1is beta reading the story. It seemed like he was MIA and I was wondering if he was OK. Now on to the story
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I read chapter three yesterday but it took me awhile to comment. because I decided to check out that beach Luke and Matt went to.I happened across Tim and Guy and got into a long conversation. Also it took awhile to navigate my way out of the beach....big beach you know
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In past chapters When Phil looked at the window it was always someone connected to him from the past and unless I’m mistaken all of them have passed away.So now he sees a boy who he doesn’t reconize all the other people he seen in the window before were people he was either thinking about or speaking to Colin about or in this case Susan so my first reaction was he saw Stanley. But it doesn’t fit all the previous criteria with the others Phil seen in the window also this would sort of be a glimpse into the future also a departure along with Phil not having a personal connection with Stanley. So who is the boy in the window? Well if he has a connection with Phil then it could be his grandson who he was never allowed to see. That would mean Phil’s Grandson is dead.Why does he not know ? Because Roger didn’t bother to tell him. Why would Phil’s grandson appear in the window? Maybe because he wants Phil to help Stanley he might even know or have knowned Stanley.The first time Phil saw the boy he was crying then after Colin made plans to see Stanley the boy smiled.Just some spec for what it’s worth it's probably Stanley but maybe not
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The Visit and A Lesson In Tolerance
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Visit and A Lesson In Tolerance
You know what Rocky did was pretty much the same thing Bass did.IMO I Would ask the principle and even Manny and Bass what was Rocky supposed to do?Let his ass get kicked?- 31 comments
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I believe M can defeat the agent Connor came into the living room a few minutes into the movie. It was something new with Will Smith. Really? In a story with aliens in it and a character we've been referring to as a MIB you have them watching a Will Smith movie? Will Smith from Men In Black🤔
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“No, it’s not your imagination and the flights westward always takes less time, due to the rotation of the earth,” Tony said. “When we fly east, the earth rotation keeps moving our destination farther away, so we have to travel farther and it takes a little longer to get there. When we’re flying west, however, the destination is moving toward us, thus decreasing the flight time.” I found that fascinating.It reminds me of where I live in San Diego there is this highway that passes the navy base where Seal team 6 is at. Going in the direction of the base from our homes on our bikes is somewhat difficult but go back is a lot easier no matter what the conditions.I wonder if some of the same principles are involved here. Hey anybody want to start a pool? Cousin Ben is he or isn't he? Never mind @Bill W would win
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School and Recovery Begin
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in School and Recovery Begin
I understand those are pretty popular once Manny has it on he'll be hooked........OK I'll go quietly now- 44 comments
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School and Recovery Begin
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in School and Recovery Begin
If he went to school like that Wilmer would have "found him" earlier "Take a seat, you've disrupted the class enough already." Never mind the reason why Rocky was late but geez it's the first day of the year it could be a new student who doesn't know where everything is yet..like Rocky. That teacher sounds dicky. Manny reaction totally understandable but he has Bass,Rocky,Linda etc. there will be a call to arms and they will give him a hand......So sorry for that but I'm surprised nobody said that yet- 44 comments
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Just found you after reading this I eagerly will start After The Dance .Seeing that I'm 12 chapters behind you won't be hearing from me for awhile but you will
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I'm so happy to hear that
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Nice feel good story.I'm going to mention @Dabeagle so he'll see that I mentioned him. He loves dogs so he most likely will enjoy this story
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I get the feeling that after M finishes with the locator and perhaps finds Mother it will be revealed that M has the power to heal Jamie and Hannah perhaps he's the only one who can.That would mean another trip to SD
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Most of the time I enjoy reading a good author using words to describe an event better then seeing it played out on screen but in this case I would make an exception.Please write that it left a mark on Calvin
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What did those three a___holes think was going to happen if they found Manny they already know what happens if you mess with him.And granted they had no idea what Bass was capable of but after Bass easily disable the first two the third guy oblivious tries to sucker punch him As if. I I had a million dollars for every brain cell among those three I'd be broke
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It's unclear which Bass he meant
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