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I have neglected reading this story because I was trying (still am) to catch up on other stories) Have you thought about having the twins siblings attempting to contact them at a later date?
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Celebrations, Crises and Promotions
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Celebrations, Crises and Promotions
Only one part has me scratching my head. If there was no missile hitting Lemon Grove then AJ's Commander should have been informed that it was the same for the other cities but she ended up telling AJ they were hit. But still excellent. Peter the Meteor(ologist) clever.What would come after Maddie the.......Maddie the Laddie? No doesn't make sense .I'll get back to you on that -
Hmm....That would inspire me to act like a two year old
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Oh boy some ominous signs.I'll give you even money odds The police were investigating something Andy was doing. As far as what happened at the Pub it looks like they have to keep their guard up. I know about dolphins being friendly mammals and that they have come to the aid of boaters against sharks(I wish they would do that to the lawyer type sharks)But I didn't realize they interact with people like they did with Justin
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Dad doesn't want Mom to STAND BY HER MAN
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I was thinking the same thing @JohnnyC was thinking about Bailey. Louella's reaction “Why I never!” she bristled with her eyes opened wide in shock. Well of course she never who would do it with her?
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I hadn't heard of Squab before this chapter and there are a lot of pigeons around is it not popular anymore? Or maybe they are protected? I bet the waiter could have avoided spilling milk on Mom but I guess since she touched his arm he said to himself "Alright go for it".A 10$ tip was HUGH in those days but the waiter earned every penny of it.Hell my cheap ass would have tipped him more for spilling milk on Mom
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I didn't make a prediction this time but I was debating between two and I did lean toward Scott POV seeing the somewhat similarities between Justin and Tony's situation. Aaron and Tony looks like a no brainer. Glad that Matt got a job. The one worry I have is would Matt ever have any reason to use Luke's computer? And if he does could he inadvertently come across the e-mail Luke sent?
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I see AJ is going is stationed in San Diego. If by that time The Padres still haven't won the world series (A very real probability) Maybe AJ could modify how he moves things and go to key Padres games and make a ground ball do something weird at the right moment.Maybe have the other team's pitcher unable to throw a strike etc.
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It's interesting how Albin keeps running into these kinds of people that tell him about these things.You would figure a college library would be the last place he would be told something like this. Who is the custodian for the library?Why have toilets if you're not going to supply paper
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A couple of WHOA!!!!!! in this chapter.Nothing like other things happening to get your mind off the current things. Maybe this would be the wrong thing to do but if what happened to Luke happened to me I would initially not say anything to anybody hoping this is an isolated incident.If not all bets are off. I would also try to look for subtle signs to see if Cass is doing unwanted advances to other students. As far as the Tony situation we all remember what a piece of work his Mom ,Luke's Aunt is.I'm guessing she kicked him out for God knows what.
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I'm just about to start since I was a little arrogant last chapter I won't mention the obvious again.....What's that you ask? Oh well since you asked I predicted that this chapter would be from Luke's POV...Opps I done it again as the song says. BTW @Mark Ponyboy Peters where's my kewpie doll🤔
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Google that and you'll find out
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Remember that person (no names) that said Israel started the California wildfires by using lasers from space? That's what I was thinking of
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Outstanding start. We all know Avery Sr. held high political office could you imagine Avery Jr. being interviewed about his Dad? Boy the uproar it would cause if he said "My Dad can see auras around people and he knows when they are going to die and".......Come to think of it that isn't all that different then what you hear today...never mind
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I guess a lot will depend on how the next day will go with Thomas but whatever Adam is planning for Ross should he invite Thomas to it? Also is Ross perhaps jealous of the time Adam is spending with Thomas?
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How did I miss this chapter?🤔 I don't know if Adam is handling things right but at least he's aware of Thomas feelings most people in his position aren't
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(It's always the weinerdogs causing the trouble. Good luck trying to pawn those critters off on anyone) Now what have I done to deserve that.... DON'T ANSWER THAT!!!!!
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The biggest takeaway I got in addition to Ben remembering is Justin not visiting Ben in the hospital.I think I know why . You while you might forget someone's name you don't forget if you find somebody attractive perhaps Justin was worried that Ben will stare at him again and people would wonder even more. I can picture Ben playing pranks now based on his past memory loss. As far as next chapter's POV Samantha or Justin would make the most sense but since it was mentioned that Luke was going to call Samantha I'm going with Luke
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Haven't started reading yet but @SummerabbacatI was right it was Tim POV(kidding😄)
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I'm not going to use the H word I'll use the T word instead.Did you know there was a tornado warning in Dallas. They evacuated all the people to the Cowboys stadium seeing that there was no chance of a touchdown there
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I might have misunderstood in the descent part but I'm guessing swallowed up in shadow is referring to the skyscraper.As to how it relates crazed, cruel creatures I guess that's represents the types of people who rent and occupy these buildings. Did I get it wrong? Interesting regardless
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They are doing a remake of it due out in Nov 2025. From what I gather it is going to be different
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I hope Dad recognizes that Mom needs some kind of professional help.
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Good stuff😄You could have had an older Devlin being summoned to fix Dave Hey, in microwaving things, size matters. I've heard that saying before. No clue what it means for humans. For me, smaller means it gets done quicker. It get done quicker? I think the same thing happens when humans say "size matters" So like Ben Richards said, I'll be back! I wonder how many remember that under appreciated movie. That was the first time that catch phrase was used BTW @Sherye Story Reader good one😄
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