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    Chapter 9

    Wow a lot of info about Stanley,Jason and Phil in this chapter I am very, very worried I see a couple of red flags that has me very very worried for Phil. As I said last chapter comments Roger has some very valid reasons to be angry at Phil but to take away his cell phone for what reason? It’s not costing him anything or is it? Perhaps Roger wants Phil to be isolated because he has a scheme to take his assets." When I had my stroke, the hospital asked me questions. I gave them his name. I fought them, but they insisted that he help me with my arrangements for aftercare. He came in, signed a few papers, and he’s never visited me since.” The hospital was very irresponsible for insisting Roger help with the arrangement when Phil clearly did not want that.What did Roger sign? And did Phil get to read it? Can Roger use this in an illegal way to get Phil’s assets? I’m so glad Colin asked Phil if Roger has access to Phil’s account. I’m sure Colin is smarter than I and I hope he inquires about these papers Roger signed I hope he say he suspects elder abuse Jason should tell Colin about his past I think it’s quite admirable Jason has overcome this Sounds like Stanley is going to need all three Phil ,Colin and Jason to help him Colin talking about not knowing anything about Stonewall got me thinking that is probably common among younger gay people.You know that is not discussed in most schools.
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    Chapter 21

    This was a very very good story before this chapter.This chapter catapulted it into one of the best stories of all time
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    Chapter 1

    If you're accurate about how things are in Australia (I have cousins in Adelaide) another country could sure use a hugh dose of that
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting start .You don't write a whole chapter mentioning stalkers without there being stalkers do you? So there is a stalker .Bring on chapter 2 @drsawzall I have been right a few times you know. You might be also.Let's see is the moon blue?.... Uh you still might be right
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    Chapter 14

    Is this a standard M.O. of a wealthy Asian businessman?( well any wealthy public person really) on one hand I get it on the other hand with a contract so much for spontaneity. I wonder if the Me to movement influenced Kenji's thinking? He doesn't want to be the next Kevin Spacey (Although what Spacey did was truly creepy).Come to think of it a certain trial that is going on in New York right now may be part of Kenji's thinking🤔
  6. You said Wednesday but 20 something minutes after midnight? I guess 12:01 a.m. was too soon for you.🤔 I would hate to have somebody around who's as observant as Rocky that can be a pain in the ass but I have a feeling that will come in handy later in the story
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    Chapter 11

    If you mean the flag football incident at PE good point. I'm thinking Carl using one of his goons might have put Mitch up to that. Again I'm not saying this is the case just something to keep in the back of your mind
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    Chapter 6

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    Chapter 6

    If @chris191070 is writing it yep
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    Chapter 11

    I hope @pvtguy speculation about the celebration is correct. I hope it it isn't some surprise put on by people with the intention of honoring him and perhaps local news coverage that would be the last thing Pete would want. I agree with Pete's and all the readers assessment of Mitch so I'm not trying to be contradicting here.But "I have my reasons " while I understand the sceptical reaction to that is there a scenario that Mitch could have a valid reason? The only thing I can think Mitch is in some kind of abusive relationship with the person he cheated with and has threatened Mitch in some way. Just throwing that out there
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    Rough Start

    After reading this chapter I have NO!!! idea where this is going🤷‍♂️
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    Chapter 16 S2

    He said my explanation cleared up why I wasn’t was you, although at first he wondered if I might have just changed into the dog that you had with you. That scared the fuck out of me, because you know I can’t afford to have people questioning what I’m doing, especially not something like that.” That's not something you say in a casual conversation joking or otherwise It looks like this guy suspects something and perhaps he was around some other incident Mac and Devin had. BTW the talk of Devin attracting the female dog made me wonder is there a plan as to what to do when they transition into an animal and some another animal want to get intimate.I bet Gramps and Pops might have a story or two to tell about that
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    Chapter 10

    Using @kbois pain so you can be first and second on page 3🙄
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    Chapter 10

    Crazy?????Us!!!!!! Well I'll have you know.......Oh excuse me I have to go those annoying alien from planet Yxczmkhp are making trouble again
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    Chapter 51

    You forgot 50/50 chance
  16. Manny giggled, "Well, since you already know about hiding the salami, the term is bisexual. Rocky slapped his forehead, "Oh, geez. I'm so stupid. That makes a lot more sense than bicycle. I think I like Rocky's term better. It totally changes the expression 'It's just like riding a bicycle you never forget"
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    Chapter 10

    Now that @Mrsgnomie and @kbois have been mentioned (kbois is probably ticked at me for mentioning gnomie first) you can be sure they are both going to show up here.They did that after being mentioned in a @Geron Kees story comment
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    Chapter 10

    Interesting information.Luckily Pete had similar information about testicles
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    Chapter 12

    Jiji?🤔That's an interesting name for him.I wouldn't mind if @Demiurge used it
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    Chapter 7

    I'm catching up on this great story.I wasn't going to comment until I caught up because all the smart readers pretty much covered everything. But something did get my attention. “Wow! That’s 22 years as a criminal lawyer." I had a friend who studied to be a criminal lawyer but he only finished half his education......The criminal part😄
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    Chapter 51

    For somebody who says he doesn't like courtroom scenes you know how to write a great one. The 20 women reminded me of a U.S. senate hearing to confirm a currently sitting Supreme Court justice.I won't say the name but you can probably guess the name. In that one he was accused of sexual harassment from a former co-worker and here's where things are similar 12 other women were waiting in the wings to testify to the same thing.....they were never called to this day I wonder why. As biased as Judge Krustypants is even he now can see how much of a POS Calvin is.If he somehow finds a way to rule in Calvin favor I think he knows that could cost him. In the last paragraph you mentioned Billy meeting with his other clients Terra and a older gentleman and you said something serious was about to happen.That is intriguing also
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    Found

    Going back to South Dakota wasn't the best idea. They seem to have no idea what their next move is. Can't Mother put them somewhere else? California sounds good now
  23. Call me cynical but I don't believe we have heard the last of Ivan's organization. I still have a tough time with wrapping my mind around Boris leaving Manny guardianship of Rocky it makes no sense. Could Boris have staged and faked his and his wife's death? I find that more plausible
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    Chapter 5

    I noticed you didn't say correct definitions
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    Chapter 8

    Perhaps I was too kind when I referred to Roger as Phil's jack ass son. Having said that I will say by Phil's own admission he married Eloise so he would not go to Vietnam.Although it was her idea was he using her? Phil said he hurt Eloise deeply Roger probably saw how hurt his Mom was and when he found out the truth about Phil he got very angry.Up to that point very understandable. Where Roger loses me is when Phil said “He actually told me that he didn’t want me anywhere near his son because he was afraid that I would molest him.” That was such an asinine thing to say.There are two possibilities here one Roger really believes that making him a moron and perhaps Phil's grandson following the same path.Or Roger doesn't believe that and said what he said with the intention of hurting Phil .Still wrong bur perhaps that could be fixed.I'll reserve further comment until Phil and Colin talk about Roger in the next chapter. The situation with Stanley? Oh wow not good and I find Mrs Sullivan not showing up the next morning an ominous sign 🤞
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