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Through the whole chapter I kept wondering why Connor kept insisting on this party.These Aliens much have something radiating off them that are affecting the humans because really none of them are acting rational. Jack is acting the most rational. I'm pretty sure M is OK.What would be be the point of the story continuing otherwise?
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Manny's First Party, and More Troubles
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Manny's First Party, and More Troubles
The way it was described Manny had no choice so there should be no problem with the police. But if that one customer dies perhaps Manny,Charles or both may get sued by the man's family. Rocky needs to get over it. All what happened means is Don thinks he has a cute ass.He's not scheming to have sex with you Rocky.- 49 comments
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Kenji instead of just leaving the room kept asking River if there was anything he could do for him that should tell River that Kenji thinks this is more than an arrangement. “Like Idaho? As in Idaho potatoes? Was he from a different country?” “Well, California.” He said, shrugging,... I live in California,,, yeah it's a different country😄 The lame ass that Alec was "dating" should have mentioned the movie Field Of Dreams that was set in Iowa.Oh but then that would be talking about a sports ball game can't have that
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What Adam said about Thomas being the most quietest member of the group of friends. I speculate Thomas has gay feelings and that's why he's quiet with the group he has his guard up. Thomas might have put two and two together with Adam and Ross and is making a play for Adam.Could explain the difference in Thomas demeanor when he had Adam one on one. That could be OK unless it turns out Ross is staying
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I'm stealing this line from @Cane23. The way Alex was leaning over Ken while viewing the tapes it seems Alex has Ken's back
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With this officer he'll have his back.....SIDE
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Oh you're pulling a @Ronyx every time he says "Final chapter" there always seem to be at least 3 chapters worth of stuff to deal with .Same with this story
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OnlyFans unless there is something new I never heard of
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I like @drpaladin and I'm sure other readers wondered if that could be Mike but half brothers?????😳OMG!!! It isn't incest yet but still. Have to believe if that would be the case Liam's Mom or Dad would HAVE to let Mike and Liam know that
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I wanted to ask this question in a previous chapter when Devin shifted into a dog.When they are in wolf or dog form would they carry the exact same scent as the animal or would another animal smell a human scent on them? I know nobody wrote a book covering all the rules of shifting but perhaps this is covered by you or another author
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I think we just found out how @Arch Hunter writes his chapters
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“Anyway, when I left I got about five blocks from his house when Jeremy and friends saw me. They were waiting for me in Jeremy’s car and they started chasing me. Pete said "waiting for me" implying the goons knew where he was.How? I guess they could have followed him to Jimmy's house IF they are smart enough a but another thought is could be someone who Pete THINKS is a friend or ally tipped the goon off as to where Pete was? Maybe the son of somebody who's dad works for Turner?
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And how are you going to "borrow" them??? Have them pulled out one at a time?🤔 Man you are twisted......Come to think of it sounds like something @kbois would suggest
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I was thinking the same thing @drpaladin was thinking about The MIB and Mr. Corpse man violating the rules (Is The corpse man the MIB in a different form or are they two different aliens?) So I would guess the Home planet would see them as rebels, dissidents or traitors or whatever term you want to use. Perhaps the Home Planet will send a ship or something to deal with them
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More Explanations, and Hiding Things From Rocky
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Explanations, and Hiding Things From Rocky
Your teaser said" more troubles".That sort of supports my first reaction when Manny invited Sam and the gang Manny should have run that by Bass first there may be a security consideration that Manny doesn't know about- 44 comments
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Chapter 168 The Love Triangle
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 168 The Love Triangle
A crack is definitely starting to develop between Robbie and Nathan I thing there is going to be some fall out with this dinner on Wednesday that Rory is preparing the question is will it be before or after? “I saw her bazookas,” I liked that line😄 'I promise you’ll be the first to know.” That line along with some other clues in the chapter makes me think Robbie will be the first to know because Rory will choose....ROBBIE BTW whatever reason Don has to not relinquish control of Robbie's inheritance cannot be good -
I can't speak for @drpaladin but I believe the word in the story was meant to be boxers
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I doubt any of the gang would have that expression while watching.But what is THIS person looking at?🤔😳
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I'm sure Joe and Ken is smart enough to think of this but I hope they think of the possibility that Tom and George could be targeted
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Truth be knowned after hearing that story Connor told them out of all reactions Nathan's was the most understandable The fact that the agent isn't choosing to enter the house tells me Mother is still alive. Otherwise what would be stopping him from doing so? Oh and good luck with the move.
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Quote from @chris191070 last story's final chaper comments You never know, they could have a nice quiet, romantic holiday 😉.....uh huh🙄
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I echo what @Summerabbacat had to say about Caleb and especially your health. I think we all know Caleb would not get into a fight unless he had no choice. I'm shudder at what the details are going to be.The message said Caleb got into a fight.Don't be surprised if that choice of words was misleading coming from a biased Principle.I bet (but hope not) it's a case of 2 or 3 kids bullying him. Please Bryan show some restraint. We know Judge Crustypants dislikes Billy and it's been implied he's a homophobe but now we know he also has a dislike of Calvin. So I guess the Judge is in a quandary as to what to do with his biases. He could find a way rule against BOTH Diego and Calvin but then the only victims would be Bryan and Caleb. Please think or your health first.The story can wait
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I'm hoping the agent was BS ing about Mother but if not then the end game is M living here on earth🤞Maybe M has some allies where he's (she?) from and they'll arrive to help
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What a doofus I am I though I clicked the follow button but I didn't so I didn't get the notification🙄 That means the absolutely brilliant comment I was going to say was already said by another reader Seriously great chapter
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Do you mean K(cough,cough) boi..(Cough,cough)? @kbois (Just so she sees this)
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