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You sure know how to paint a picture.On 29 Clouds to me it sounds like you were speaking metaphorically about humans did I understand that right?

There is still a lot to find out here in regards to the Tanners back story how they got their wealth , why both of them while relatively young have no family etc. And geez how did they arrive at the decision to to give guardianship to Manny?The wife and Manny never met why did she go along with it? This is their son FCOL.On the surface nothing makes sense. Manny er....I mean the nanny who wants to be called the Manny not Manny OK from here on out I'll call him Bass.Anyway Bass thinks the Tanners were murdered if that's the case what was the motivation and would it involve the need to murder the Son also? There is some kind of other shoe to drop I think. "I inherited a kid from an old friend, and I need to take a week off to make sure, it will work." "Somebody left you a goat?" I liked that exchange😄

Forgot to mention this “It was a shit sandwich with horseradish sauce, Never heard it put like that before😄

Hope you follow up on this❤️ Rebel and LJ really had to grow up fast.

We don't know how Ahmed family got it's wealth but probably though ill-gotten gains. I bring this up because what if someone in Ahmed family wants revenge? Is that why Joe's men are still at the college? We'll see what our authors have in mind in future stories

I'm certain they would want to avoid that of course but what could the fallout be if that happened. Would Mac be severely affected?

I have to echo what @Al Norris said the fishing trip was going too well something had to happen I guess. Any specific reason why Devin chose being a raccoon? I would be thinking of an animal that has keen hearing does a raccoon fall into that category? Perhaps this would be a good time for another Bigfoot sighting

Manny doesn't sound like the most likable guy in the world.But what up with Boris? What kind of life did he live where he can only think of Manny to take care of his Son? Did Boris even know what kind of an adult Manny became?Did he do any research? Anybody here ever work for DoorDash or Grubhub? Is that a common tip to get?.......Just curious

Manny Needs A Nanny?....Really? What is going to be the title of your next story? Nate Needs a Mate? Kidding😄

Geez a lot of WTF moments in this chapter especially the part about the UFO showing up like it did I'm anxious to hear about the plan M and Mother come up with. A bizarre thought M was speaking of having a baby .We have assumed he was a boy or man all this time.What if M is actually a female Alien using Michael's body and perhaps there really is a way for M to have a baby being an alien and all. I'm going to make a prediction . I'm usually wrong but a few times I have been right.When the dust finally clears (who knows when though🤔) I'm thinking M will have to return home because he can't physically stay on Earth.When that happens we would have Michael in control of his body again and he tells Connor that HE likes him.

A couple of observations He parked and sat in the truck, looking anywhere but at the jungle of tropical plants spilling over the picket fence. Odd for that to be there considering a landscaping company is one of the tenants “You’re not a wanted felon,” Whatever happened in South Dakota apparently wasn't considered seriously enough for the police to investigate I would have thought the pizza place would have called and told them about M being all bloody. I would think Connor will not make it to work the next day on his FIRST day on the job. The main thing on my mind is at the hospital whatever routine thing they might do to see if M is OK might reveal he's in Micheal's body what is going to be the fall out from that are Connor and M going to be separated?

Beautifully put @St4rlight I think Comsie knows how much he impacted you there are thousands and thousands of others he impacted the same way

Very well done. I may have misinterpreted 19 and 20 but was it about Comicality?

In answer to that part of the comment Joe gave the information to Ken. “I’ll leave a couple of my guys here to look after the boys,” he said to Ken. I'm glad the girls were found.Since Ahmad is now lying low it's safe to assume he was going to leave the girls in the storm cellar and they may have been found dead

Connor had enough clues that M is some kind of alien about time. I would agree with @drpaladin I think it's better to take his chances with M as opposed to Mr. MIB after all he put a tracer in head FCOL. Mother as M calls her might be the key to solving things but despite what look like superior intellect from the aliens Mother like everyone else is having the damndest time trying to figure out humans. I hope she has the ability to take care of Greg he sounds like bad news.I bet he's the reason why Julie never contacted Connor. So M is in a body of someone named Micheal? Hannah couldn't find any information about him I wonder if this Micheal is presumed dead by the authorities?. "So, that's a drug dealer?" M asked excitedly, peering out the window. "Can I go say hi?" I defy anybody to find a line even remotely similar to that one in another story😄

Then if I wrote stories they would be very exciting because I don't know shit😄

Trevor being a psychiatrist makes me wonder did Billy asked for Trevor's opinion about Judge Krustypants(No this wasn't an excuse to say Judge Krustypants😄) and perhaps Billy doing what he's doing based of what Trevor said about him. If they can make sure Caleb doesn't find out about Bryan sleeping with Diego and Steve he'll feel left out.

As smart as Ahmad was taking his Mother to the restaurant he was equally stupid for sending Mohammed is such a haphazard way.Sute he didn't know about Joe's men but he should have realized that the possibility that Tom and George dorm room could be watched. Luckily we have dumb criminals

We can't make any assumptions one way or another "Don't trust him"? We don't know who the good guy and bad guy is between M and The MIB. Julie and Family while not evil like Connor's Dad seem pretty dysfunctional. BTW you would think they would be a little more curious about M. Nathan is a piece of work which makes one wonder how good a parent has Julie been." If they paid me $20 an hour I might do it, but for minimum wage? Fuck naw.” In California a law just went into affect that fast food worked are to paid $20 an hour maybe I'll see Nathan next time I stop somewhere for lunch😄

Thank you for an excellent story. We are used to stories where the protagonist (In this case Carlo) is really smart and while nobody 's perfect you would think they would learn from mistakes it's disappointing that Carlo apparently didn't unless it was something totally different and unrelated to what happened with Duncan. Could somebody with incidents like Carlo had get work like he did? I'm glad you mentioned what year this story started I was going to mention "A Laurel and Hardy Story 100 years old? I have to admit prompt #68 sounds very interesting looking forward to it Oh BTW I didn't skip to the end

It was so cool that Colin and Jason took Phil out to lunch and to a nice place Olive Garden.I think Colin and Jason really do love Phil like a Grandfather. That Stanley situation I couldn't help but think you know who would be perfect to help Stanley out? Matt from the story Stuff People Do. I know different story. But it would be cool if Matt made a cameo in this story and it's revealed Phil was a counselor at the same school Matt attended. No @Ronyx I'm not trying to get you to change the story😄. I'm certain what you have planned will be better then what I just wrote.

Connor quirked a brow. “What looks blue?” “The Earth. From far away.” Jeez how many clues does Connor need??? Apparently they believe it is only one man in black why couldn't be multiple men in black? Connor scanned the streets for a payphone. Soon he spotted a row of them in a little plaza, and he pulled over and parked.How long ago did you write this story? Can you still find a row of payphone anywhere these days?

Cool they all enjoyed New Years as a family. I was surprised to hear that music from the 50's would be played. Anybody who was an adult when that music first came out would be in their 90's now. Heck Beatles music has now been around 60 years. I would would have been so ticked at Devin but I must admit it was a good gag. Something slightly off topic on May 3 The History channel is starting a new season of something called Skinwalker Ranch I never seen that show before does this have anything to do with what you wrote about in this story?

Could Karl have taken any action against Stephanie after he found out about her making Barry take the sheets to the laundry room by mouth? I mean that is just.... That 100,000 seconds comment made realize My banks account is worth more than one MILLION pennies......Well it is

It's possible @Arch Hunter meant it one way and left out a word but he usually doesn't make a mistake like that. If @Lee Wilson interpretation is right then more potential for drama and conflict in the future