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Thankfully I never was in a situation of having withdrawals🙏 But I guess it affects your ability to reason in the most basic way. OK so Lee gets the money out of the jar he still has to get his own money by going to Greg so Greg could go to where Mason put his money so didn't he think he would be asked about the money in the jar? You didn't say what time of night Lee did this whether it like say 10:PM or more like 3:00 A.M. I bring this up because Avery saw Lee do this why was he awake? was it because of his ADHD?

It's very good that Roy's parents are cool with everything. Roy mentioned something about watching the Falcons lose again so I'm assuming this takes place in Georgia. One thing I didn't see until now was the story picture of who I guess is Roy. I Don't remember if you mentioned in the story if Roy and his family are black.I only bring that up because if this is in Georgia with the current political climate there that could be an issue also.I could see other black football players having a problem with Roy being with that "white boy"

I don't know how much time has passed at Camp Refuge since the last story but is this something Joseph has already done bring a troubled kid to the camp or is Lee the first one?

Unless changing it means Caleb knocking on your door right now

You mean like the author writing him?Hey who said that?

Obviously a newbie here so allow me on @Northern Dutch Guy behalf on page 2

You may be on the road before I get another chance to say this so have an awesome trip and Merry Christmas

As far a passings go you couldn't have done any better that how you did it with Silas. As we already knew Vann is a special kid.Looking forward to the epilogs will it have the same Wednesday/Saturday schedule? And also are you doing anything with the @Carlos Hazday thing?

Told you she was slavedriver. Didn't you hear the Nyah-ha-ha?

That's a great question perhaps the epilogs will explain it

Is it any wonder the way @kbois is a slave driver?

Okay I promise not to ever again comment before I read the full chapter………For this story……Hey it’s true right?🤷‍♂️

Based on that image I consider Jackson good looking man. You're not going to make it that simple and uncomplicated are you? is Zack going to show up and make things interesting? Does Adam and Andy from the other story go to the same School ? I ask that because Mr.Sheridan could cause a stink for Jackson BTW I'm confused "You said was. Are those guys dead?" "Yes, they are Dominic Unless I missed a headline Bill Gates is still alive right?

Good one!!!!!!......Oh? You were serious?......Uh gotta go

I'm guessing the guys at Camp Refuge are going to be in for a big surprise next time they see Harlan and Bailey I'm assuming they don'y know about this trip to Idaho.Looking forward to the next one but of course I'll read Wild Maple Farm first

I'm pretty sure this won't be the case in the last chapter but now that Bailey owns his recordings I'm not sure how long it's been since Bailey's accident and I don't know how many followers he had on his site but couldn't he now make the CD available? I know it would only sell so much bur perhaps a person with some influence will hear it and think "Hey this guy is a great songwriter" and who knows what that could lead to

I think it's fair to say this just might be the most significant and memorable Thanksgiving for everybody that was there

I'm curious if Andy somewhere along the way will seek out Adam I can picture Andy being left out of something among his other friends because he's not supposed to be friends with Adam. If I were Jeremy I don't know if I would want to visit his Dad he killed his Mom FCOL

Do we know if Vasco is really doing this for scientific purposes or.......

Laying some good groundwork it will be interesting to see which direction certain things will go.Like the dad thinking Roy will have a GF soon he might get surprised by Roger also I assume Ted was introduced in this story for a reason so well be watching that. You mentioned football so I'm foreseeing Roy being observed interacting with Cory by some of his future teammates and a few of them approaching Roy saying "You know he's a f-- don't you?" In some HS cultures a jock isn't even allowed to be a friend ler alone a BF. I'm a baseball fan and I know how good Ronald Acuna is but I never really looked at him too close is Cory a fan because he is hot?(believe me I'll look closely next time I see him play) .Having asked that it does sound like Cory is a legit baseball fan he sounds like one of those sabermectric guys if he is then he's pretty smart

How can you have a son in college when you're only 29?

Well great....Now how many hours until the next chapter?

Not only did Harland not lie but also not tell the truth he said nothing about being estranged from his Dad but perhaps this wasn't the time and place for that. Something might have been mentioned and I forgot but has any of Bailey's background as it pertains to his parents been mentioned? Elias shows what a smart kid he is by saying "I'd like to hug you. Is that okay?" Rayne may not have had the same issue Elias but Elias knew he had some issues so he was making sure' The project that Bailey will be involved in with Elias I think will also involve Shawn

Well that's good while you were at it you should have finished with your edit on this chapter comment

Like so many other readers I also was touched by the word "Dad". Most of the time hearing a scene described by a talented GA author like @Wayne Gray is lot better then seeing it in a movie or on TV but a scene like this is an exception I would love to see a good actor or actress reaction to that. Parker Owens had a similar scene in one of his great stories it goes to show your great authors minds think alike