This was a five star story until the ending as you can imagine nobody was prepared for that. GA readers don't see that for the most part in stories on this site but it is worth discussing and it is another part of life.
Why Derek wouldn't eat anything not associated with the number 3 was a mystery to all. Really?It must not have been a very good psychiatric staff. A doofus like me figured it out because of the 3 people dying.I have to believe someone would have at least wondered that. I guess the only dessert he could eat was a three musketeers bar
Excellent part 2. Even before this was posted it hit me💡The first epilog was about was about Sebastion and then I figured this one would be about Elijah. and I was right. So the next one will about Reilly. I'm so brilliant it scares me........
AW SHUT UP
We actually just got back from Washington State about a half hour ago (yes I could have passed @Mrsgnomie and she wouldn't have known it) I took the last driving shift it was about 5 hours.Luckily interstate 5 goes from Oregon to Socal otherwise with me driving we might be in Timbuktu now(Or Buttfuck Montana) see you in a little while
I can easily see Carlos making these same points in one of his stories in fact I know he did
The eloquent words you wrote have been expressed in the 70’s,80's,90's etc.up until now the present it has been 50 something years since Stonewall happen and your words are sadly still relevant let's hope someday someone reads this and doesn't know the significance of what you wrote because it is no longer an issue
I know of another one from seeing YouTube videos and those TV channels that show really old shows.Rowdy Yates is also a character from a show called Rawhide and was played by none other then Clint Eastwood before he became a huge star. Got to admit its a cool name
Nice story .I know where the name Rowdy Yates came from I won't say it here if you don't want me too. I wonder was Rowdy one of Carlos favorite characters or something.Hope we see these boy again some time
It was good that Robert got to see the whole family shortly before he passed. Edwin did mention this possibly being the last time they all see Robert but little did he know.It also seem Robert knew something also with the setting up of the Trusts.
Happy new year everyone
Happy new year to everybody.
If Devin or Mac is ever suspected of something serious and they are under surveillance you would surprised some of things that can be done to spy on someone they would have to be extra,extra vigilant to make sure they can't be seen. I'm picturing Barry somehow finding out because of his comment to Devin about his over sized clothes.
I love how you describe something like touching bare feet so stimulating. Wouldn't it be something if Micheal got rid of Stephanie on behalf of Seth. So Seth wants to go somewhere more private with Adler? Nothing could go wrong there like perhaps Steven's parents finding them...nah of course not
1888: So who did the protagonist really want Monica or Marty?
1988: Did you base that on me? Thats when I got my first CD player. The other stuff sort of resemble me also
2088: Sorry can't comment on that one without breaking some political guideline
Great stuff
They already had a prosecutor ready? Sounds like the Keystone Kops already found Roy guilty. Now that they know Roy's Mother is a defense attorney the next time someone tries to frame Roy maybe the police will actually do their job right
I am purely guessing here but one of the two players in trouble is the kicker. You don't have to be huge to be kicker maybe Cory has some ability to do that