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  1. Welcome(As long as you know who isn't with you I don't have to hide)
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    Chapter 6

    Remember the movies in the 90,'s I.Q. where he's riding a motorcycle. He was a lot of fun.(That was a true story right?)
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    Chapter 6

    Bend it? More like obliterate it.
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    Chapter 6

    You must have seen I was comment #25 and you immediately went into "I must get there before @weinerdog " mode
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    Chapter 6

    Very intense chapter I must say. As far as Asa wondering if he would fit into a pack a couple of people he could talk to about that would be Eli and Tyler. When you were writing about what impact Asa doing this will have There were no words to convey the sheer terror he felt. He had glossed over the true depth of the complexity of what he would be attempting. Truthfully, he wasn’t sure it would work. It wasn’t that he lied to Caleb, Giles, and Santos but merely omitted a few facts–primarily, the knowledge that he would have to draw on enormous amounts of energy. Quantities that he had never attempted before. He had no idea how it would affect him. Healing physical ailments always drained him to some extent. Manipulating the mental issues of his friends had wiped him out for an entire day. He was clueless about what the toll would be trying to heal Caleb I was picturing and worrying Asa maybe being in a coma or something like that.I guess it can still happen.Hope not🤞
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    Chapter 6

    Hmm while Asa uses his abilities to heal a nerd like you would use it to make Star Wars laser swords
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    Chapter 6

    BTW notice I stay to read while @astone2292 goes back to bed
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    Chapter 6

    Just woke up after falling asleep at the screen haven't read anything yet just making sure I'm in top 10
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    Chapter 26

    On one hand that is funny but one huge risk when you do something like that involving pills is somebody could have an adverse side effect which I'm sure David is clueless about.
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    Chapter 26

    Diego isn't the only one who feels old. "Awesome sauce" ? First time I heard that but I like it. BTW do they actually call it fart spray? You mentioned Billy's abrasive personality that tells me something is going to happen because of that. I liked how you described Billy's costume but maybe in his case he should have been dressed as a vampire being a bloodsuc....er attorney
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    Chapter 1

    I noticed it's a male dog so what's so unusual about a male being led by pussy
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    Chapter 1

    You forgot negative, no go, and no way Jose
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    Starting Over?

    I believe for the moment at least it would be better for Derek to stay with Mrs. Perch
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    A Letter

    Everybody is in agreement that Jasper is a POS.Brian ,Gordon and others at the camp are former military maybe they can show Jasper first hand what they learned in the military
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    At the Cabin

    Found what I think is another good story written by a good author very good first impression. You'll hear from me from time to time.I bet E numbers are lobbied against in the U.S. because they believe it part of a deep state plot
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    Chapter 7

    If whoever was in that house takes off then Micco is in a world of s__t if the police come and find two there that would be different of course a third possibility is the person hides Micco and tells the police it was a false alarm.Very good cliffy. I would think Billie with his unique abilities could do something that makes Micco remember the gaps in his memory
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    Chapter 222

    I bet the visitors with Dr. Hamlin were impressed
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    Chapter 24

    An exorcism? That's even nuttier then the conversion camp thought and on top of that they tried to files assault charges against Blake????? You know as bad as Julie is Blakes sperm donor and incubator are the worst set of parents ever. I'm pleasantly surprised by Craig's reaction to Seth and Tye the boy may be growing up.It still looks like to me Tye would not up for a foursome(well maybe once😄) Just a hunch I think Mrs. Bowen is going to appear again
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    Chapter 1

    AND FIRST ON PAGE 3
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    Chapter 1

    No she's just chewing out a tenant she'll be back trust me
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    Chapter 1

    Ah thats what was missing I couldn't put my finger on it.Seriously your friend must have been really special to inspire you to write this excellent story . I would love to visit these guys but Martini is there I don't think we would get along. Nick should find out where the idiot who ran the red light is at so he could send a thank you note for without him.....
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    Chapter 5

    Unlike the curves you always throw
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    Chapter 5

    You spelled it wrong so we would think you were talking about another character ...didn't work
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    Chapter 5

    Uh......It's always over a 100 comments when we're on page 5
  25. Wow I guess HEA are not your thing but it is closer to reality bad things happen to good people (And not so good people) You know how they show videos in school like the dangers of drugs or smoking etc.? They should make a scared straight type video starring people like Marty on how being a bully is bad for you in the long run. Good story thank you
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