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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    I like just about everything on their menu except the coconut shrimp. Well thats one line @Mrsgnomie deleted and you made sure to put back in
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    Nice to see you're in a good mood today
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    ZZZZZZZ....Huh? Oh she posted
  4. Then both deserve it? You're the one that made them do it so to speak
  5. Someone having a same sex crush while having the appearance of having a straight life a theme you can find in a lot of GA stories but Comicality puts his own unique take on it which sets this one apart from the others
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  6. Interesting the last time I was there I noticed a huge drop-off overall from the previous time before I thought it may have been that individual restaurant been maybe it's across the board
  7. I'm glad Drew and Leo will officially have their Dad of course he aways was but this makes it totally right "And They All Lived Happily Ever After - Well, Most of Them." Pretty sure we know who you are referring to "Henry's idea of a nice dinner out was TGIF's." And what's wrong with that?(kidding😄)
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    You make a lot of valid points but I still think if the father cared a lick for his kids he would have eventually try to make contact which is why I think something is preventing him from doing so
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    I absolutely think Julie left something out. The part about why the Father left doesn't ring true which is why I think now we are going to see him at some point and he will fill in the parts Julie left out. As I said in my previous comment why didn't the father fight for visitation? What does Julie have on him? In previous chapter comments if I remember right both @Summerabbacat and @drsawzall suggested he was forced to leave because he might have had a same sex relationship that is the only thing that would make any kind of sense and why Julie would have him have no contact at all with the children. Where is he right now? Is he on the other side of the country? Or is he in town? If he is in town has he been watching from a distance? Or will Aunt Marie contact him?
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    This chapter left more questions then answers. In the flashback after Micco told Chase he said three weeks later he was gone what happened in those three weeks? The main line I expect everyone will talk about is “I know what happened. I know what you did. I saw you. And you’re going to pay, Garrett. You’re going to pay with blood.” Is this the ravings of somebody high who's grieving? Or did Danny really see him do it. Since Micco doesn't remember anything one would have to wonder. The pay in blood part means to me Danny is planning something so he won't go to the police.
  11. Well of course you were you are the same person
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 220

    "She was always saying the kids didn’t need all of this fancy food.” Ann is not too bright otherwise she would have known saying that would raise a red flag especially after Colin and Armand was mad that the kids was only getting cereal for breakfast.I could only guess after Tommy took over for Pat he didn't do certain things Pat did and Ann took advantage. Disappointing that Christian didn't want to adopt Pierre but what is more disappointing is Christian being unhappy about Pierre being adopted he has no right to be its as if he had plans for Pierre's property
  13. From Texas? Maybe he crossed paths with Caleb although Caleb has been too much of a hermit for that to happen
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    I based that on what Julie said in this chapter "No one knew about this except me and your father. Doctors said she might never have a normal life.”
  15. I don't need an executive washroom as the korner crew already knows
  16. Max was always an interesting character to me needless to say he's even more so now can't wait to hear more of his back story. I wonder if he takes Keegan along on his projects.Max acted like he's in some kind of position of authority over Reid when he told Reid to leave he did. BTW Reid Martindale? Is he related to Wink? (Sorry had to ask ) (I hope nobody asks who Wink Martindale is)
  17. Speaking of advanced copies sounds like you got the one on Max
  18. It seems only @kbois gets an advanced copy to thrash er.... read
  19. So your editing is the reason why the chapter is good GOT IT!!!
  20. I couldn't help notice @chris191070 didn't do one countdown for this chapter not ONE!!!! Now why is that?..........oooooh! He's doing it for @kbois now ..hmph fair weather reader if you ask me
  21. The last real Autumn I had is when I was a little kid going up in Massachusetts.Here in San Diego the season's never really change except maybe a little hotter in the summertime.But what I do remember of Autumn you captured real well
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    I thought all us readers already did that.
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    That part of the comment you should have added(In Homer Simpson voice)
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    I remember another annoying song from the 70's (or so I been told) where the main lyrics are "Put the lime in the coconut and drink it all up" This one has that one beat
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    If you didn't write it like that @Mrsgnomie would have edited it that way
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