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When I read “my parents took it way better than I thought. My friends too. I kept it to myself because of fear. You know the horror stories that are out there. I feel lucky and relieved to have the support I do. Because if I didn’t I don’t know what I would do, and we probably wouldn’t be sitting here right now.” I Immediately thought that it might have been totally opposite for Jacob and could be a contributing factor on why Jacob is like he is. Couldn't help but notice Jacob's Dad wasn't at court and there has been no mention of him at all are they divorced? Did he die? Is he in prison? I suspect something going to be revealed here. I hope Jacob gets Gavin as his therapist in the counseling sessions. Couldn't help but smile at how awesome Tyler's friends are, and Travis needless to say was a big surprise nobody deserves that more then Tyler

So that determines when your chapter ends?🤔 Well it's a good thing you don't have my sister-in-law as one of your characters your chapters would never end then.

I bet family gatherings like Thanksgiving for example must be fun huh?

@Salerion if he DIDN"T make that the cliffy I would be worried. After devoting an entire chapter to this I would be surprised Randy didn't eventually accept but with this author you never know. One thing Randy should do is speak with Ethan to ask him about if turning did anything to change the dynamic with his human family since I only read one other of this authors story and it wasn't a wolf story I don't know if that aspect of it was discussed when Ethan turned

Gus figured out Ben situation very quick and Ben saw the look on Gus face after Gus" said you aren't a throwaway" combine that with Dylan's statement “I understand dude. Don’t be a stranger though. Me, my brother, even Josh, hell especially Josh knows about having a long answer to certain questions.” Tell me they all have had experiences similar to Ben. To early to guess but I think they are going to tell Ben to stay in school

I lie how this started .I guess we'll get more details about Josh as we go on but is it really about Gus garage needing help and thats why Josh went the extra mile with Ben? I think there's something else motivating Josh not saying bad or good just something else.

I have to agree with @Jjeffalch that was overboard.Not to put any blame on Tyler but when I was 16 I wasn't the best communicator in the world but I would have have asked Jacob "What the F did I ever do to you?" that may have given Jacob an opening to at least give a clue what was wrong. In no way what I'm about to write here is meant as an excuse for Jacob's action's but I wonder if his dad is a hateful homophobe (Jacob's Mom didn't seem to be) and Jacob might have heard a lot of comments from his Dad about "Fucking faggots" just spec on my part ,Doesn't make it OK of course. The only mild disagreement I have with Tyler is he's immediately forgiving. I would need some time first .After some thinking I would ask myself should Jacobs future be ruined over this ? I would eventually come to the conclusion no but as mentioned in the previous comment Jacob needs help.

Poor Adam he's just like me I always forget where I put things t I was reminded of that when he couldn't find the pump. But Adam is a kid what's my excuse?) "I haven't used that bike in donkeys" I confess this Yank never heard that expression. I'm going to have to look that up

Boy am I dense I just looked at my previous comment and something finally clicked. Perhaps @Libby Drewwas thinking the same thing I wrote in the previous comment.Quent.Clint ....coincidence?

Just adding my two cents or in this case 5 stars. If you like a good murder mystery then you have come to the right place. The synopsis describes the story better then I can but out of many great characters in this story the character Quent almost stole the show I kept envisioning Clint Eastwood when I followed Quent interactions. Think Dirty Harry stuck in a small town. Because the town was so small Quent couldn't blow a bad guy or two every half hour like Harry does in his movies thats pretty much the only difference between Quent and Dirty Harry I guess GA was a different website when this story first appeared a lot have missed gem. I'm hoping with this author's more recent submissions which have been well recieved and after this review is posted it will be the tenth 5 star review of this story If you haven't read this yet then 5 stat reviews is hard to ignore don't you think?

GA must have been a different site back when this story first appeared it certainly deserved more attention then it initially got. I suspect after your more recent efforts gradually more people will see this story. I'll add another 5 star review to the mix BTW I think TV show about Drew and Quent PI business would e a hit.

Very well written I was in suspense and considered every possible outcome even the ones we didn't want to happen. I guess after this turn of events Rob has a job even Quent wouldn't fire him after this. But then again he is Quent

I'm not so sure it looks like she's going to out Drew and Cale to save her ass

Sarah was a crack-up this chapter

So what else is new?

Well you reminded me of how ignorant I am I didn't realize O negative and O positive blood are compatible .While I'm asking stupid questions can only Lycan's donate blood to Thad? Or can they also take human blood. The Doctor mentioning the staff taking up more bed spaces then actual patients got me thinking what if this happened during the height of co-vid when all the hospitals were overcrowded. Would Thad have made it? That would have been a big challenge for your writing ability. Alright. Get back to your manwich. Love ya, bud.” That line made me laugh😄 “Part of me wishes I wasn’t going back to school at the end of August. But I need to finish that. Hopefully Randy and Skyler are able to give each other what they need when I am gone.” .Well some readers wondered about that. This is just me and my quirky thinking but this chapter seemed to calm for me I now worry something huge will happen next chapter

Oh boy Adam has it bad for Ross more then he realizes if he's going to buy an R.E.M album just because Ross likes them.I remember in the U.S CD's had just started to take over I guess in the farm community no kid had a CD player yet. I suspect Ross has the same thing for Adam If was surprised while I was doing that certain activity Ross apparently was doing I would deflate very fast. Sounds like that wasn't the case with Ross was that because it was Adam who was at the door

Stuart would have been a perfect unsub for the show Criminal Minds

Rob surprised the hell out of me

Maybe Drew's conversation with Rob followed by the word association game was meant so Rob would call Stuart

Too many chapters left for Dr.Cobb to be revealed as the killer IMHO

Drew was amazed that Quent was elected but he keeps getting re-elected apparently

How does everybody hating Cale's father figure in this?

Hiring Rob back?Wow good help is really hard to find in this town.

"Oh my, nipples. It’s been a long time since I’ve seen nipples.” Now THAT was an unusual thing to say especially when a stranger he never met is there. Judging by by what Adam wrote in his diary he was self concious about being shirtless although he didn't have a problem going swimming the day before.Adam wondered if Ross was staring at his chest. If he was I say be complimented but I do get Adam struggle with his identity might complicate this We don't know yet if Ross is just visiting or if there is a family situation that has caused him to move there. If Ross is just visiting he might be the right person for Adam to explore things with there would not be the awkwardness that could happen if it was someone he went to school with.