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Echoing everyone else welcome back. Armand thinks Tommy won't get married with Colin thinks he will so who will be right and why? I wonder what the story with Billy is?
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I bet this is the only story that exists where a character made a backpack out of bearskin designed to blend in when somebody transform into a bear very creative. I was thinking of saying I challenge anybody to find something like that in another story but if I did it wouldn't surprise if some reader here knew of a story where the happened. While Devin's Grandpas are incredibly smart resourceful people there is something Mac said “Damn, it’s almost as if they had a crystal ball.” That got me thinking while Grandpa Issac smartly didn't trust banks he also avoided losing anything in the Great Depression it was as if he knew that was coming also they seemed to hit 100% on the investments in the 50's and later 80's even the best investors made a bad investment here and there.So that makes me wonder did the Shaman somehow leave some kind of ability in Grandpa Issac where he had a sixth sense about these things🤔
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Chapter 3 - Days Like This
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Days Like This
Wow you just keep outdoing yourself. I couldn’t help feeling jealous of people on the street that early afternoon. People seemed to move through the area without a care in the world. Living life, being normal, worrying about the little things such as a bill, or what to cook for dinner, or if so and so really wanted someone else to attend some party. They didn’t know how good they had it I totally see why Ben would feel like that but as he gets older he will come to understand everybody has their own shit. Having said that though Ben has gone through stuff I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy. Here's what I hope happens I guess he's going to have to tell Gus his change of address and when he does I hope Gus suggests to Ben to open up to Josh then that could could lead to Ben possibly staying at Josh place.- 24 comments
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Chapter 3 - Days Like This
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Days Like This
You have to keep writing otherwise Gavin will die😄- 24 comments
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Ah! So you ignored the signs also (kidding)
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I'm not positive but I think one of the smart readers here already mentioned this possibility but all the talk Trevor had with Aidan about security got me thinking could the McKinney's have a plant on the security staff? The place they went to being so isolated I wasn't sure if it would be a good place or bad place for them to try something but thankfully Ranger Rick and his staff were made aware of what's up so that made me feel better. I'm sure this was covered in previous stories but when they were speaking of there superior vision in the dark It made me wonder when they are in their wolf form are they color blind like dogs are? I know I'm showing my ignorance here. As @scrubber6620 mentioned it is certainly looking like Randy will choose to turn.So there's a blue moon on Halloween🤔 Do I see a special Halloween story in the future? I think its so cool they are going to ask Seth to join them for pizza. Can I come?
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After just reading this I just thought I would add some recommendations and another deserved 5 stars. Echoing what i said in my chapter comment why can't the reaction one the characters Hone gave be the norm? It boggles my mind my this should be an issue.What comes in a close second though is why is there coconut Mac-n-cheese (read the chapter comment to understand that)
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I don't know how I missed this of course I don't know how I do a lot of things. The one overwhelming thought I had reading this after seeing Hone's reaction is WHY can't it be that simple? BTW big shocker I was one of those who had to strapped to the cart of course it turns out I had to strapped to other things also.....but that another story
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Chapter 4 - Truth and Lust.
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Truth and Lust.
Admittedly there's more about Asperger's I don't know then I do know but from what I did know about it Corey didn't show many symptoms but the you explained that well by saying how Corey's mom got him the proper help. Hope I'm wrong but I see a future physical confrontation with Corey's former football teammates especially Jackson.Keep that spoon handy Jess. The chapter ended with "The only thought that crossed my mind as I made my way to the shower was, what the fuck was I going to tell Jess." I got news for you Nate I think she already knows- 22 comments
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One thing I left out in my very long comment is what you allude to and that is for a first encounter that was very reckless on Craig's part and I don't picture him being more discreet in the future which means what you said Stacy or someone is going to catch them in the act
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I am going to say something really obvious here maybe some of the other smart readers here already knew this but it took my thick skull until this chapter to figure this out. When Seth started to tell more background about Craig we found out he's been treated special since 12 years old because he's an elite athlete.Seth has said "just about every girl in our class wanted Craig" so why is he with someone as flawed as Stacy? Easy Craig is gay and he probably knew in advance that Stacy wouldn't put out so no pressure in doing it which another girl might pressure him too.Now that he found out Seth is gay all the better he thinks he can finally explore that while using Stacy as a cover.When he said to Seth“If you say a word about this to anyone, I’ll fucking kill you. Got it?” Besides the obvious reason Craig also has to worry about if he's exposed as gay at least two thirds of possible scholarship offers from college football programs would be withdrawn possibly even the place Craig would want to go the most. We find out about a lesbian girl named Roni a good guess that was the girl Craig referred to last chapter.If it is Craig seemed to know about this before the school did I wonder how? Seth just as he did with Blake in the hospital tried to comfort Roni. This shows what a good hearted compassionate person Seth is .Sounds like a lot of undeserved crap is going to come Seth's way (Duh just check out the title of the story) I'm sure Ronyx will make things right by the end of the story🤞but it will be interesting how. It looks like Seth and Roni are going to be friends so perhaps somewhere along the way he'll tell her what is going on with Craig. One piece of leverage Seth has but doesn't seem to know he does is he can threaten to out Craig with the implications to his possible scholarships. Judging by the way Roni stood up for herself in this chapteriIt sounds like that would be something Roni wouldn't hesitate to do to Craig Sorry I was all over the place but there was a lot to absorb in this chapter. BTW Roni,Ronyx?...coincidence🤔😄
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"Did I just say his smell is yum" I at first misread it as "Did I say smell his yum" then I thought that was an interesting way to put it, Still a choice of words I never heard before. Maybe you and I created a new expression for the aftermath of a certain activity.
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Chapter 3 - Things Break
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Things Break
For somebody who told us you didn't know where you were going with this you certainly did a kick-ass job on this chapter I was torn between a love reaction or a tear reaction not because it was sad although it is on some level be because it was so touching. @drsawzall and I think @Summerabbacat called it right after last chapter about Chris needing help also if there is a silver lining to all this its their Dad realizing they all need professional help. @Jeff Burton hinted that it may be Gavin from the other story I hope so. I think Corey knows this but he has to realize he may have to drop those other friends to be friends with Nate despite being teammates.I hope it's a case of Jackson being the biggest A-hole and the other friends aren't as bad.I mean what Jackson did didn't make sense. Perhaps one reason why Nate doesn't have many friend and no other gay guys on the sly haven't tried to approach Nate is because they have to pass the Jess approval test good luck with that.But bless her heart though- 27 comments
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Yea we all can split our attention you forgot the most obvious one looking at a hot guy (or girl if that's the case) with whatever else you've doing at the time
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I think every reader knew was coming when we first met Mr Rude.He actually got off pretty cheap which leads me to believe after not seeing Mr Hyde for awhile that asshat is going to get confident again and will revert back to his old ways and when he does.....BIG MISTAKE!!!!! Can't wait
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“You know they depleted the entire supply of counter-agent for the whole territory, That could have been the Mckinney's plan all along.If so They would have plan to strike quick. It's so awesome What Trevor ,Randy and Skylar is doing for Seth being their big Brother's and all. There was a strained laugh and crooked grin. “Yeah, I remember you. The hot guy who was nailing my older sister.” “Seth Anthony Murphy.” The voice from the kitchen was stern. “Sorry, Mom.” The eye roll was typical teenager. She was upset at that? Geez that was so nothing compared to what Cassy did.I don't rule out yet the Cassy had something to do with the attack
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If your heaven is Sodom and Gomorrah😄
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Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
You're shameless when it comes to lobbying for new chapters- 34 comments
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Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
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Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
I get the feeling Corey might have been somewhat interested In Nathan even before the incident.Maybe he even forced what happened in front of his jock friends because he WANTED to serve detention with Nathan and get close to him. People do strange things when they are in to someone. In your other story Travis, Matt etc, referred to the players on the other team as lug-heads.Was Corey on that team🤔- 31 comments
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Chapter 7 - That Dark Day After
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 7 - That Dark Day After
This chapter should have had a warning to keep a box of tissues close by.It was just one emotional moment after another. The part where Tyler squeezed Travis hand really got to me and when I thought nothing could top that Tyler waking up saying "I'll forgive you" came really close. You implied this was based on your personal experience I'm so sad that you went through that but I guess we all have something like that in all our lives.You managed to take that experience and create a masterpiece.- 28 comments
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I applaud Devin for coming to that women's aid and while I would do the same thing there is one risk the man could be a mover and shaker in the seemy world such as say the mob or a drug cartel when (I'm pretty sure when) Devin subdues him and that might piss him off to the point of revenge.I'm sure Devi could handle it but it may put people he loves in harms way .Worse case scenario of course. After reading this exchange between Devin and Mac “Come on, do you really want to miss out on seeing all of the other guys naked in the communal bathrooms, because that’s where the showers are?” “Oh, I didn’t really think about that. Ummm, in that case I’ll probably be able to deal with living in a residence hall for a year,” I confirmed with a sly grin, “as long as we can be roommates.” “Don’t worry, because we’ll find a way to make sure that happens too. Besides, we can still live in my family’s house during our last three years at CSU; if that’s what you want to do.” “Yeah, that works for me, because I’ll probably have checked out all the good looking guys by then.” “If not, I can take care of it for you, but you’ve already got the best looking guy. If you want to see what some of the other guys look like, though, you’ll just have to point out the ones that you’re interested in checking out and I’ll transition into them for you.” “Yeah, you could do that, but you’d only be guessing at what’s hidden underneath their clothes, unless you’ve seen them naked before. And if you’re going to see them naked, then we might as well do that together.” “No, I wouldn’t just be guessing. When I transition into someone all of the parts are correct, except if I decide to enhance something, like I do with myself sometimes. It’s just how it works.” You didn't know who I was when you wrote that dialog otherwise I'd swear you based that on me😄.It's a good thing I don't have Devin's ability of morphing ,getting the parts right and possibly enhancing said parts otherwise nobody would see me most of the day
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Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
I guess he's like about the U.K like most Americans are about the U.S. it it doesn't happen here then it really didn't happen.- 34 comments
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While us old farts are reminiscing do you remember a TV show she was in called The Mothers-in-law?
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Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
I believe what @Summerabbacat just posted pretty much summed it up for all us especially the emojis .I had some stuff to say but it has to wait until the next chapter🤞- 34 comments
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