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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
HEY ARE YOU SAYING @kbois IS DAFFY?????..........ok -
Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
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Why did Armand deny that was him in the newspaper? Was he afraid that guy was going to talk his ear off or something?
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
"Great minds "work" alike" Especially when you're the same person- 108 comments
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
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Boy so much to talk about here before I say anything else I have to say I was impressed with Blake on one thing. I thought a fight would break out when a member of the football team and his girlfriend danced up beside us. He leaned over and snarled, “Fags!” I had to grab Blake and hold him back. “Mother fucker,” he muttered. “I’ll show you what fags can do to pussies like you.” “Bring it on,” challenged the boy. People around us stopped dancing. Mr. Stevenson walked up and asked if anything was wrong. The boy walked away, and Roni assured him that everything was okay. Blake showed me some guts there As for the rest of it I predicted the dance was going to be a doozy but it was the afterparty instead. Blake and Craig acted so reckless .First Blake making Seth go into the poolside bathroom with him where Craig could easily see them and then Craig making the same mistake moments later by going in there where Stacy can see him. Craig was drunk obviously because Seth could smell the alcohol. Blake had to be drunk also because just a few chapters ago he refused to make love too Seth. Seth had said Jerry snuck alcohol in at the dance Blake must have had some then it would explain him trying to give Seth head while he was driving(BTW I guess Blake never saw the movie The World According To Garp anybody who saw that would know what I'm referring to). While Stacy had a right to be upset she didn't have the right to scream at the top of her lungs what they were doing so all the crowd would hear outing them in the process sure she was drunk also but I think she would have done that anyway.( I almost wished Craig had hit Stacy with his car as they were driving away....almost) I really was worried that Craig was going to crash the car @Ronyx had done this kind of thing before in previous stories .Thankfully Seth talked him down. Now comes dealing with the fall out but there could be one more explosive incident to come.Seth and Craig are at Blake's secret place so it's quite possible if not probable that Blake will be going there walking in on them
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
I bet when @FanLit posted comment number 24 @kbois went " Hey If I post the next two comment I'll be first on page 2.She's on a roll .Page 3 anyone? -
Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
Take this with a grain of salt this is coming from someone who's made every mistake a person can make (Yeah I know big surprise) But why not just tell Max. I guess Kyan doesn't want to hurt him but it's either hurt him now or hurt him later and this lie makes it worse. Am I missing something? What Perry says about the friends part makes sense but I'm afraid he has doubts- 108 comments
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
It means we can all get together! We could double date...uh no. A threesome maybe. You all were just talking about that last chapter. @kboisidea ?🤔- 108 comments
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
The reason why we are "late" is because @chris191070 didn't give his update of how many hours until your next chapter- 108 comments
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
AW!!! My day is complete- 108 comments
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Unresolved Issues Become Clearer - Well, or Badly?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Unresolved Issues Become Clearer - Well, or Badly?
GA did it again I didn't get a notification of the chapter being posted but I found out later when I was notified of a chapter comment. One last time? Before I read that I thought of a lot of scenarios that would take awhile so what could end this? Perhaps Paul Turner's dad does something? I love the Song The Boxer it's a little different from the rest of the set.But I have a question how is Sittin On The Dock of the Bay southern rock? Otis Redding right? Or are you talking about a cover by someone else? -
I was torn between love reaction and a sad reaction only because what River went through.I knew Matt was an ass h--l but not like that.Are you going to have River testify at a trail? Two wrongs don't make a right but I would love to see Gav get a chance to kick Matt's ass (in self defense of course) BTW do you have a drawing of Gano? Or some drawing of what you think Gano looks like?
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
And if it turns out well it will because of a suggestion you made like Clydesdale right? -
Like the others I can't think of a good scenario for Calvin being there. This is me making a huge reach and is very unlikely but could Calvin have put an life insurance policy on Donna and Brayan and Caleb are the beneficiaries? I know crazy but I can't think of any other positive thing so Calvin appearance will most likely be negative
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This was a excellent chapter but then the last sentence "How bad could it be? Had a famous last words quality to it
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You comment about paper carriers in the prolog ( we called them carriers where we lived I guess because girls started having routes) these days they adults do the routes in their vehicles. Matt has met an interesting family to say the least.
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Is there anybody among the Dine` that may have a supernatural ability to sense who Issac really is? Wow Route 666 why can't they change that? In California the state changes state route numbers all the time. All you have to do is flip the sign and call it Route 999. I remember being in 7-11 and my total at the counter was $6.66 so I immediately bought a bite size candy .I know it's just a number but it gives me the creeps
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I might be in the top 2% in the world about being clueless in matter of the heart .So I have no useful opinion to offer only I hope it works out and I'm confident @John Henry will write it well. One thing I worry about is Dan and his goons might mess with Kenny off school campus sure hope I'm wrong🤞
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Overall I would say Kenny is over reacting although he probably has some valid issues but unless Kenny wants to end the friendship which I know he doesn't he has to know the silent treatment will accomplish nothing. Bryans concerns about Steve are still there but after hearing little about Steve's history he realizes that you have to respect the guy for what he's done in the past.
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The week went by slowly. Bryan was given some pretty hefty chores, including cleaning the kitchen from top to bottom, which meant pulling everything out of the cupboards, wiping those down, washing all the dishes—whether needed or not—cleaning out and scrubbing the refrigerator, and cleaning the oven and stove top...and that was just the first day. By the end of the week, Bryan had landscaped the front and back yards, cleaned out and scrubbed the bathroom and garage, cleaned and re-organized the three bedrooms, including Caleb's, rearranged the living room and shampooed the rugs. His last task was to remove the moss from the roof and clean out the gutters. Wow given the context of Bryan's suspension which in the big scheme of things wasn't so bad I bet part of Diego was glad Bryan got suspended😄 I bet Bryan did more in that one week then Calvin did in his whole life. Speaking of Calvin IMO what Raul did makes him just as much of an ass as Calvin
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I got so many notifications today I almost missed this. Only you can paint such a vivid picture on a topic like tinnitus
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
It's hard not to think you came up that comment based on personal experience -
Part One. Chapter Eleven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
Trying to get your comment count up? Well since I'm here I'm a 2 every once in a while a 3. You should have another category 7.When somebody tells me they are visiting and asks to stay a few days
