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“Haha, you said gist,” Zev laughed. Ben smacked the back of his head. “Idiot. Gist is not the same as jizz.” Now I know where Beavis and Butthead ended up.

What out esteemed author didn't say was....Welcome

Wha.....? I never got a trophy😭

Notice the first thing i did was to make sure I was on page 1 ? I know my priorities

Power outage just got restored.Wondered if you arranged it🤔.Kidding😆

But @kboiscan she told me so herself

Ohh! Flashing this time. That shows its really serious

The more I think about that comment it is in the back of my mind that maybe @kbois is giving a clue of a crossover. That can definitely be interesting in the upcoming Rob Stone story

I agree just in case there was a misunderstanding I was being facetious

@Mrsgnomie you've been getting a lot of nice deserved comments on this chapter so then what does @kboisdo? She posts a comment talking about HER story🙄.I think she's still ticked at Jay getting mentioned a number of times in her chapter comments.

Hey @Howzat your comment on page 2? You spoke way too soon

I do agree that would be a great idea but I bet the standard NFL contract doesn't allow them to do that in the off season the teams are too paranoid about their investment getting injured. A flag football game? Maybe .Since pro football players know their share of celebrities maybe one of them knows a popular singer who could perform afterwards

Actually my next door neighbors owns a rooster we live in the suburbs in a residential area why does that family own a rooster? I have no friggin idea (And no I didn't comment so I could be the first comment on page 4)

I have had crepes before but never filled with eggs I'm thinking egg and cheese would that work? That Girl that is almost stalking James make sure she and that other girl who took bites out of the pastry at the club never meet

Forgive me if this is suppose to obvious but....WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?????

So many awesome moments from start to finish in this chapter it's impossible to comment on all of it. IMHO the two most touching moments is when Loren speaks to Jay about never being over at Mike and Julia's for Christmas since he left home I assume it was because of it being a reminder off that one fateful Christmas . That broke my heart. The other moment is Loren and Geoff encounter at the Super Bowl.It's the best tribute Loren could receive. I was initially bummed that you had the Chargers in the Super Bowl I'm less of an NFL fan since they ditched my city but I got to thinking this is @Mrsgnomiealt-universe so in this story The Chargers are still in San Diego right...RIGHT?😄 besides in our world The Chargers and the Raiders can't play each other in the Super Bowl being in the same conference.Another reason I prefer @Mrsgnomie universe BTW I bet your brother noticed you didn't have the Rams in the Super Bowl

Smart phone strikes again I meant to quote here

I'm here,I'm here I'M HERE!!!!! See? Not late when you don't throw a curve

I agree but why do I suspect that if we took a quick poll that more readers would choose running (I really mean the other term)

WHAT??? Why you....he...them ...say...but...OH YEAH????

@kbois can the krew visit her?

My bad I stand corrected.but I do object to that crack about my vision (my memory no) I'll have you know my euysught id jist fime

Guess what? You are right

Even when it's about me?(Which I suspect is happening more and more often these days)