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The comment "You must remember that everyone that creates a reality here does so for a reason. Most want to experience places they were familiar with in life, but under rules they feel are more to their liking than the original" would then explain this comment "You won't be. Remember where you are. You will get the pleasant feeling a good drink provides, but there will be no physical or mental decline at all. You can literally drink the place dry, and not become drunk." I guess we know what kind of reality the author wants to create

what a mysterious comment

The on the right would be me after I visit there.Seriously its so sad that an owner let that happen

One thought/question after Ben and Zev demonstration I would think that it would have also been a good time for E to tell Mama and Papi about what he can do. They might have told them on the plane but if they didn't any reason why not?

As @Mrsgnomie so aptly stated KH has a plan but I'm puzzled why he went about it this way. He let the pack know the was aware of them if he had kept Kaya a little longer the pack might have thought he wasn't aware of E and Ty's connection to them and it would have been easier for KH to set a trap. By letting Sebastian know he aware of E and Ty's connection to them he sort of did them a favor that is one less thing for them to consider. Any doubt of the twins retaining their humanity was dispelled with the line We’ll be fine. Tyler needs you. So Mama and Sandi meet remember in a previous chapter I commented they could open a buffet house? Almost makes me prophetic. I bet they are cooking as we speak. Any chance the Krew can take a trip over there?

My bad I fixed it. I won't make the same mistake with Calub I MEAN CALEB.I MEAN CALEB

She also caught the paragraph where you inserted Jay Petermeyer in.

I bet you didn't have a first place gif prepared you know better

Well I'm going to make sure I'm on page one.The only way to be sure of that is to post something before you even start to read the chapter.C-YA in a while

Ah! Nothing like getting the morning off to a cheerful start

Wake up @Mrsgnomie

When @kboissaid she dislikes feet I didn't think it included measurements

I get your POINT

I bet if he had to write it over he would use a different name

There's razor thin margin for error. (geez)

It would not be a Charlie Boone story if somebody didn't get into something. But what's the big deal they can't get hurt right?

I hope John condition isn't something that gets worse to the point where a complicated surgery is need. They should have posed for a picture with Andres to show his professor surely Andres had a smartphone

If you have read previous stories from this author you are aware he deals with dark subject matters and some characters have suffered some ordeals. In this story its mental illness severe anxiety the main focus but by no means not the only issue.This author has stated the protagonist Alec was himself so he is uniquely qualified to discuss this.You will learn a lot about the thought process and emotions of a person with this condition and for anybody who may know somebody close with this I believe this story a valuable tool to help one understand. We have Alec who has been homeschooled up until age 15 all of a sudden be thrust into a public high school and all the scary things that would entail for anybody let alone something with his issues.When Alec was homeschooled he admired from afar this boy who worked at a family bakery named Finn.On Alec first day in public school he see Finn and Finn is really friendly toward Alec.Turns out Finn is the most popular boys in school.It also turns out Finn is into Alec which Alec doesn't get at first. Under any circumstances the most popular star athlete being with a blued haired perceived misfit would come with hurdles to overcome let alone that it's a gay couple.There is also an religious extremis mother in the mix that as the title of the story suggests makes Alec want to get the hell out of town much to Finn's disappointment. Circumstances years after high school reunite the pair and hear is where I'll leave it before I reveal too much.Despite the frustrations you grow to love the characters (and dislike a few) and that is the strength of this story. Highly recommended.

Normally I would agree with that as I asked the same thing.But in his previous story he "ended" it and titled it Epilogue but then voila a bonus Christmas chapter showed up. Maybe he's mulling something like that over.And Hmm Christmas is fairly close so @Demiurge if thats in the back of your mind take your time 😄 Opps right after I posted this I see complete me and my big mouth😄

Now you're trying to show up @chris191070

I always thought being dead that you would not have to worry about cut throat business practices. It really is universal

There really would not be any reason for Alec's dad not to be there. The Larsons showed up early before his dad but I do see why you would think he wasn't there

It's cool that Marie gets to see Spain for the first time. I'm concerned John didn't say anything to his wife about the doctor visit.Maybe he just want to enjoy the trip but I hope he's not holding anything back.

Thank you for a great story with a great ending. Only one small thing I bet Kenji's arrival would have been an interesting and I bet one of the Larson clan would have asked about his "business". Alec deserves happiness for what he endured and Finn deserves it for all the effort and patiences he had with Alec. BTW put the "complete" tag up I can't wait to give this the deserved 5 stars

Without the cowboy hat I sort of picture Finn looking like that