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The way I see it baby steps.At first Alec wanted to high tail it out of there but ended up going on a hike with Finn even said something I thought was significant “Finn it’s one of the happiest memories I have from that time of my life.” I don't think he ever expressed himself like that to Finn in the past.On the hike back I hope the subject of that girl in the picture comes up. Milo reaction to Alec somewhat surprised me(Jailbait made me laugh) I get the impression Finn's entire family liked Alec. So you dance when you reach 600,000 written words?What are you going to do when you reach 1,000,000?

Once Rafe finds a way to control those lasers he is even going to be more of a bad ass then he already is but there has to be a better way than imagining Andre being hurt. I need to find out more about this restraining order.The Coat seems to be a lawless bunch who exactly would enforce this restraining order?

Did you miss chap 7 earlier today? I ask because you didn't react to that one.

What an odd place a bunch of destruction and everyone is like ho-hum.😴 I have to believe in that environment that it's imperative Rafe trains Andre to defend himself. I thinks it's obvious somewhere down the line the Coat will find Rafe

Oh that's right Poland right next door to that.I'm praying for the people of Ukraine and now also Poland since they have been threaten. This was in addition to being happy for Sammy and Drake it was also suspenseful for me for them being on the living room rug I just kept picturing their Mom coming in and say "Guess what they let me off ear....".I would say she suspects in the back of her mind but since she's away a lot maybe not. A thought about Sasha perhaps he secretly has a thing for Sammy and he's mad at himself for it so he's sort of mad at Sammy just a thought

That was a cryptic comment by the husband of the Priestly women.I'm going to take an admittedly wild guess here.I wonder if they are related to the college roommate guy in the previous story (I don't remember his name at the moment and I really don't care to) that would be motivation for Priestly to take the kids away maybe they attended the trial. Okay since I'm probably wrong it will be interesting to see the back story and how they know them

I suppose it's human nature to worry what can go wrong now.Judging by how the chapter ended there's another hurdle.The most likely source?I'm thinking Carson

Excellent chapter. Now why would Armand want to show Colin the sex room🤔

Before anybody answers that how much storage space does GA allow in our comments?

A real fun story thank you.Good thing Mike and Robbie aren't cops otherwise they might recharged with cruel and unusual punishment. Jeez you had to mention a steak and cheese omelet. After I'm done posting this message I know what I gotta do now.

When @Mrsgnomie mentioned @scrubber6620 instead of @kbois I though uh-oh something is going to hit the fan but Kbois enjoyed it anyway Another great chapter .I don't remember if what Loren proposed to Seamus and Matt was mentioned in BN.I'll reserve comment on that until I check it out.In any case it was a great gesture by Loren I had a news channel on TV in the back ground when you posted the new chapter.I didn't have the sound on but the picture looked like one of those White House Press conferences settings and there was a empty microphone I guess the press briefing was delayed.I know what happened whoever was suppose to be there waited for your new chapter to come up to read first.

Like I said in a previous chapter comment there wasn't any reason that the police needs Parker's phone to see the video has gone viral .So why do they want Parker's phone?It can't be for a good reason I think they are looking for Parkers personal texts,sites etc. to use to their advantage I hope the lawyer has a counter ready for that. The Principal is a moron this Principal has no principles he kept saying"What Parker did..."PARKER DIDN'T DO IT!!!.First the students at the basketball game did and then the police officer.The Principal shout be asked what should Parker have done after he saw what happened just move on like nothing happened?Is that his position?He doesn't care if there's a racial problem at his he only cares that everyone knows about it.It's been mentioned that there is one black student are there any Hispanics or Asians at the school?If there are the ignorant student body would probably think the Hispanic family are illegal immigrants and the Asian family started covid. Things could escalate to the point where Parker isn't safe at school I see an scenario where he transfers to another school maybe a private school that Darius attends it's one way they can get to know each other

Thing are awesome between Mike and Robbie so of course bank robbers have to get into the picture and F things up for them.My guess is and I stress this is a guess that Mike and Robbie go out for a walk and wouldn't you know it they somehow come across that tree I can think of some other scenario's also so I'll be interested to see what happens.I will say this I guess the tree is in a secluded place but I would feel comfortable leaving a lot of money there then again I also would not rob a bank either so who knows how these guys think.Depending on how long Theo has done his job I bet he would consider that possibility also

My first reaction at how the chapter ended is those large blurry masses are bullies or they are a species that are naturally hostile toward Bones kind. Either way I see Rafe coming to his defense

Wasn't Aidan's terrible twos already a horror story?

@Tonyr you better be careful how you answer that "them could be fighting words"

That is perfect.Its exactly how I pictured Aido Potato Let me guess this is from Loren's next YouTube video is this where Loren finds out that Aido Potato is in the episode

Very well done chapter.Glad they had that talk things that needed to said were said.But still two weeks of that?Hey we all say things that come out the wrong way from time to time and Loren knew Jay didn't mean offense so that wasn't worth two weeks of silence.Jay like all of us will do that again unintentionally will Loren do the same thing again? So we'll see Aido Potato again 😀Why do I get the felling he's going to make an appearance at the Launch and steal the show. Two and a half minutes each? Did they set the timers on the smart phones? I figured Loren wasn't going to win but as soon as I heard things were running quicker then in previous years I knew something was coming up involving Loren.I'm starting to think like you.....should I be worried🤔

That's better then anybody is Washington D.C. does

Judging by the descriptions given in this chapter it sounds like you took the same tour I bet that was awesome. The church has some history of having some really corrupt Popes I wonder if was one of them who ordered adding fig leafs to Michelangelo paintings🙄 BTW I just noticed the story jumped from chap 32 to chap 34 did GA miss 33?

GA is at it again I didn't get the notification for the new chapter.I only found out after some readers commented on the chapter this has happened with a few other authors it has me stumped. What Alec said needed to be said and it looks like it will be good for him.It may also be good for his Mother being raised Catholic I know that Catholics believe along with most of the other Christian denominations believe is if the lightbulb finally clicks on your death bed and you understand how you've been and then you repent and are sincere about it God will forgive you and maybe Alec saying that MIGHT make her realize it.But the evidence suggests she wasn't ever a sincere Christian. This chapter ends with Alec in his mind preparing to go back home but I think it's safe to say something going to keep him here a while longer.Finn?His Mother?Both? That conversation River and Alec had about person A and person B one thought is River has found his soul mate and while River and Alec will always be lifelong friends maybe the constant of River being around all the time will change that then would be a good time for Alec and Finn to connect.The other possibly is when River was speaking of person A was he talking about Alec? My first reaction to that would be that it would be a mistake

When I was reading the chapter I was scratching my head on how Seth had Money all of a sudden but then @drpaladinmade it fit for me somebody must have seen his writings but how was he discovered?It seemed like Seth wasn't satisfied with what he was writing. The only other explanation I have is admittedly nuts maybe Seth sued the police department for the way they handled the abuse they got from his father. This is just me throwing stuff up against the wall to see what sticks I don't really think that but I can't think of anything else

I agree with Clancy59 that Preistly women will go up the ladder maybe even get the local media involved.That hotel Oliver stayed at how long ago was it?It seems like it took a long time for the FBI made the connection to that hotel and its unusual amount of missing people the local police seemingly was clueless which begs the question are they somehow involved in covering up things.

You described it very well.One thing I'm curious about is Ernesto really gay?Or is he straight but because he's on that list he's into being with Q like he's under some kind of spell or something.And does the same apply to the others on the list? Now about Ryan we have already been told he has a flawed personality will be be that way when he gets together with Q?Or because he's on that list he will act differently? I know read the story and find out🙄

So Ernesto is a good guy while Ryan.Hunter and Terrence are jackasses.The one thing if I had a chance to make my own naughty list is to put no jackasses on it no matter how hot they are. The trio look like they solve problems with intimidation so I see fights coming.I think Terrence and Hunter intervened on Q's behalf because they are now in to him