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Not that there hasn't been plenty of clues such as Chase being so eager to help Brandon get his stuff from his old room I bet Helen and the others noticed that.And come on Brandon having a poster of a shirtless Chase on his wall? HELLO!!!!!

I was just made aware of this story by @chris191070 and I liked the first chapter a lot. My first reaction the title of the story is Murder of a Moral Man based on Mr Keys comment about violating God's law I think he might be that "moral" man who gets murdered.I'm also guessing that since Mr. Keys son appearance was described that he's a key part of this story maybe he's secretly gay and can't say so but it's way too early to predict this can go a lot of ways.

You know if Brandon was unsure he could have asked how much longer he would have to do the roadie job like I said previously not the sharpest knife in the drawer. That could also be said for Gabe. The father of the three brothers set it up in a way that Helen had nothing to do with the crew but since the guys broke away from the Father Gabe should have realized that he should have tried to make nice with the guys Eric doesn't like him so that tell me he was somewhat assholeish with them also.Gabe has to realize that the topic of where Brandon lived might come up in a conversation between Brandon and. the band and one question will lead to another and his scam will be exposed.

I see some intense training coming up for Andre.For Rafe also he didn't know he had this power and probably doesn't know how to control it. GA system is acting up again I didn't get the new chapter notification again the only reason why I knew about is it notified me of @Clancy59go figure

@Mrsgnomie has a beard?🤔

All this time has Loren had other triggering moments with kids? I know he's avoided them for the most part but I'm sure he might have seen something in the past where this has happened.Thankfully the Lorens friends/crew and Jay and Loren himself handled it beautifully. Kbois only hundreds of dollars Loren getting off cheap @Mrsgnomie first you got Rams fans mad and now Peter Gabriel fans?(although he's far from my favorite also)

You don't know how many times in chapter comments of other stories I heard this story referenced and raved about so I finally read it all and it lives up to the hype. I have like 5-10 stories on GA that are so good that I sometimes pick a random place in the story and reread it you would be surprised how many times I find things I missed the first time well this story is now on that list.I imagine for all the people who read this it is everybody's top 5. I have a recommendation. Obviously you can't go wrong reading other C James stories but there is one that is only available on GA's premium subscription a story called Jake (don't confuse it with Three for Jake).That story is every bit as good as Circumnavigation and Let The Music Play. If finances are tight for you I will say if you can pick the cheapest subscription package just to read that story do so.Just make sure you finish that story before the subscription runs out which I think is a month but I may be wrong about that.I assure you it's worth doing so just to read that story

Incredible incredible story .Thank you so much.Trevor told Uncle Greg that they are almost done with the book I would think they would want to add the battle with Bridget also so there will still be a lot of work to do.Since Trevor and Shane don't write as well as C James (not meant as an insult BTW) I bet their book will be more than 157 chapters

Wow I wonder If this is the shortest chapter in GA.But thank you so much for giving up an update and letting us know you're OK. That place you mentioned where they will need three coins I vaguely recall hearing something about a place like that.I'm not going to google it 'll wait until you're next chapter to find out although I am tempted

I had the same thought I wanted Bridget's demise to be from the gators also but know this she admitted to the first among equals that she had been a fool and let her anger put them in that position in her last breaths she realized Trevor outsmarted her

So much incredible stuff going on but despite all that my biggest take from this chapter is the smack Trevor spoke to Bridget loved it

I don't know how this is going to happen but I have a feeling the hurricane will be some kind of equalizer when Trevor and Bridget are finally in each other's crosshairs

This is an odd thing up especially in light of the cliffhanger oh excuse me non cliffhanger but something Frank Tittle said about Bridget making mistakes when you get her angry If he tells Trevor that I can see Trevor trying to do something to take advantage of that

And that's the only reason of course

Well that was definitely some quality time. Lets hope there isn't some incident while Jackson has the house to himself.If Cindy knew about Jackson's parents trip God knows what excuse she would use to ground Luke. When Jackson asked“How was last night, after you got home?” and Luke said“It wasn’t bad,” Translation -Cindy didn't wake up anybody in the neighborhood

If you stop the story because of that then Jjeffalch will be needing a security detail.

Here's my take I don't see a way out of this......But C James does😄

As far as I can tell the story didn't say what part of the country this is taking place in but it doesn't sound too far removed from what the Deep South was like in the 50's the only thing that is missing is the white only drinking fountains.Parker said all the comment agree with what Andrews did the people who commented was most likely people who knows Parker and go to Somerset I hope this is a case of after the first comments other kids were afraid to say anything different because of peer pressure that would still be very bad but at least there is a chance that not all of Somerset high thinks like that. They don't need Parker's phone for evidence the video has already gone viral and Chief Morgan has to know that by now. I'm afraid the reason they want it might not be good for Parker.Morgan has already tried a line of BS trying to whitewash this on Parker's dad but he was having none of it.Kudos to Parker's Dad BTW. You have to wonder there have been so many incidents caught on smartphones you think an officer would think of that when before they do something like this.I have a friend who used to work in law enforcement in California and he told be the department had procedures and tests to try to weed out people like this before they even get to the academy .Well it doesn't seem to be working all the departments all over the country have to reconsider what they are doing wrong in hiring people because clearly they are. Ron has said there is a romance story weaved into this.It's safe to assume the couple will be Darius and Parker.What will be interesting is Parker's friends who don't have that much of a problem with him being gay might all of a sudden have a problem that his BF is black and I bet they won't even see how that is a contradiction. Sorry another long comment but it's hard not to on this topic

Why do I think the next person you know that will have a baby added to their family there will then be a custom made order for one of those?

What an adorable chapter you described things with Aido potato perfectly I can't add anything to that. I'm am curious how Seamus will react when he's told how Aidan took to Lowen er...Loren. When Seamus brought up how Loren acted at the championship game and of course Jay wasn't at liberty to talk about it has me wondering is this something Loren would one day post about? I'm so looking forward to how that part of the story plays out "I take a calming breath so as to not show my cards." “Doesn’t matter. I will quit my job if that’s what it takes.” That was really smooth.👌Hey Jay some buddies and I are starting a poker game Interested?

With Bridget using Julie the way she did in the past she is always thinking three steps ahead.Which made me think Bridget's previous plans have failed @Daddydavekconcern that Grey might get off Scott free might not turn out that way Bridget probably made arrangements on how to keep tabs on Grey should he fail.You don't take Bridget money and not do the job which I suspect Gray will find out

My thoughts are very similar to what has already been mentioned about being Milo's kid.I'm happy Milo is functioning well I'm curious if there is something we still don't know yet we are assuming Milo can walk but maybe he has limitations but is making the most of them the gym they own might be part of that. I doubt this the last we see of Finn so how is the next meeting going to happen?Another crossing paths?Or will Alec actually be the one who seeks out Finn out say maybe at the gym.This would be Alec taking the initiative between the two for perhaps the first time. Alec must have been really young when his Mother has breast cancer the first time as smart as he is you would think he would have notice something was wrong. You have to wonder if he had been told about it would the family dynamic have been different.

Andre has a really nice family. It's Funny every story TV show or movie that has a character in it that's really bad ass like Rafe there are always some bully like idiots that want to mess with them.This inbred trio will find out the hard way you don't mess with Rafe

I have heard some horror stories about the leeway FPS has in some states and if you have an ignorant incompetent person like the one in this chapter in charge things like this can happen. As far as the letter they got from the law firm my first reaction is I bet bet the kids don't even know him and he probably wants control of the assets including the house that is suppose to be Ruths.I bet Mrs. Priestly will try to get involved in that also.

Mattyboy mentioned nothing going wrong for two weeks.Now he has me thinking something will go wrong and it will probably have Max name on it.Or maybe Max dad is more sick then he realizes I hope I'm wrong