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  1. I like your spec. This chapter cleared the EVIL Diana Holloway IMO because I don't think she's smart enough to have Chloe guessing. (they can still get Diana for abuse though) Elena IS smart enough but I hope it isn;t her
  2. But tomorrow was the Fourth of July. And Ryder was waiting in Youngstown. So this story is almost in real time. The Forth of July weekend was last weekend. Excuse me let me check the police blotter for crimes in the state of Ohio for the previous week....... Okay no public meltdowns leading to arrests of anyone named Donnelly and no arrests of anyone who has a first name of Ryder (we still don't know his last name) OK they haven't found out yet
  3. “Sounds like a good plan,” Gerald said. “It’ll keep him focused,” Mom added, in the voice she used when she was supporting Dad’s decisions regardless of whether she’d been consulted on them. “Structure is good for young men. That sounds so much like a corporate meeting room where everyone is kissing the Boss ass. "Great idea Boss" "BRILLANT" Owen: learned about casket pricing tiers Ryder: there are TIERS? Owen: bronze, copper, steel, hardwood, and then there’s a premium line with custom interiors I don't think it matters to the deceased what the fricken casket is made out of “See how that works? The key is empathy. You listen first, suggest second. EMPATHY!!!???? Oh yeah that's the Donnelly family all right🙄 so tell me Mr. Donnelly and Eric can tot emphasize with what Owen is feeling now?........Uh Mr Donnelly?....Eric? Aren't you going to answer the question?
  4. Only you can come up with a scenario where an avalanche is a good thing
  5. weinerdog

    Opening Move

    Now HOW would you know that? Unless you wear one during the night and.........Never mind don't answer that
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    There are five of them who's the other one?......Do they know that are going to have their own TV show
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    "I am not saying we all get into a romantic pile on the bed.......uh and the problem would be.....what? You will not breathe without my permission!" While you're sleeping and they can't get your permission what happens then?
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    Opening Move

    Yoder would have gone for this anyway but does knowing this would affect Taggert in a negative way make Yoder want it even more? This is 100% wishful thinking on my part and I don't expect this to happen but perhaps Grandpa told Taggert of some deep dark secrets Yoder has or Taggert is aware of inconvenient info that could stop Yoder from getting the ranch
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    Opening Move

    The kitchen smelled like coffee, bacon grease, toast, and leather. The first three items are perfect after a night with the fourth item doing..........Uh I'll stop it here
  10. Happy Thursday! When you said Thursday you didn't specify the Gregorian calendar so on one of those other calendars it just may be Thursday
  11. But you wouldn't know that, would you? You interviewed him for two hours and never once asked if he felt safe at home." When I first read that I went RIGHT ON!!!!! Getting back to Perry Mason in 90% of the episode he beat the prosecuting attorney Hamilton Burger. After trying to convict so many innocent people HOW did that guy manage to keep his job?
  12. IMHO you're doing a great job
  13. He changed his name to Blanchard?🤔
  14. With a boy you’ve known for three weeks. Who has a criminal record. Before you get all high and mighty Margot as the mastermind of the fake engagement it accepting gifts under those premises is fraud for sure and depending on how valuable some of those gifts are it could be wait for it.........LARCENY!!!!.
  15. “I don’t want to hear about any more of this, Owen. Well Mr. Donnnely I don't think that's going to happen
  16. That’s not love, Owen. That’s control.” My immediate thought after reading that. 'Said the pot talking about the kettle'
  17. I think Jules is the one that can call out Margot. This part probably won't happen but I would like for Beth to be close by to join that conversation that would really acclerate things
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    They had Cheerleaders during these wars?🤔Well one cheer makes sense "Push em back ,push em back waaayyyyyy back"
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    Chapter 12

    I had to throw boards down to stop them catching Ash-um what’s his name again?” You missed an opportunity to use "Snot"
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    "'Richard, you will do your duty to this house, even if it means getting your hands dirty.I don't think the hands are the body part Richard is worried about getting dirty
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    Didn't Wyland do that in a previous story?
  22. Getting the lay of the land or the lay of the story if you prefer,So far interesting. after last year’s diamond-encrusted cock ring, he was rather glad she had kept this one separate. I have one of those I went to get it appraised.The appraiser made such a big deal over nothing I was only wearing it while he appraised it so I wouldn't lose it🤷‍♂️
  23. That's one of the truths of life .If it's fun or tasty.....It's not legal
  24. It's not redundant it maddening.......There's a difference
  25. It's not redundant, It's maddening.......There's a difference \
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