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Chapter 1: Christian and Josiah
weinerdog commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 1: Christian and Josiah
I like the synopsis based on that I would say Chris is going to be the most anxious of the group but it's way too soon to start guessing.How Did Chris get up being there it sure sounded like he was staying home -
He didn't specify the big head or the little head........ I guess to the prince it really doesn't matter
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"Pour yourself a cup. We have politics to discuss, and I refuse to do it sober." That also explains politics today also
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Didn’t think it was appropriate to say things like that in a Catholic boarding school.” “The world’s changed.” “It has.” Makes one wonder if this had happen today would things have been different between them
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What are you saying with that picture? One part that does correlates is The Billy Crystal character had an affair with a quarterback Ala Tyler. So are we going to see a character walking around with a puppet? And will Caleb start snapping his fingers and say "invisible"
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As bad as the majority of the charaters are Vickie and the incubator are outlapping the field "I got a call from Detective Cross this morning," his father said, not turning around. "She wanted to know if you had an alibi for Friday night.". That tells me Det. Cross is doing the investigation in good faith (Not so sure about her partner though) Before this chapter I thought everyone rushed to Judgement on Caleb including the police. I'm thinking I'm missing something to me the anonymous text is from Issac but @Topher Lydon isn't that obvious. Wouldn't Tyler tell Marcus Webb about Issac? From what I can tell Webb's investigation of Vickies online activities wouldn't reveal Issac's participation
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I locked my phone without responding. I knew that was wrong. Margot was my best friend and she was scared and she deserved a response. I'm not so sure she does at least not an immediate response. “Just for a minute. I’d like to meet the seahorses.” “You’d better not.” He grinned. “Saturday then. For sure. We’ll do something. I bet he shows up Friday anyway. My dad is...” I couldn’t finish the sentence. My dad is what? Going to disown me? Going to never speak to me again? Going to throw me out the way Ryder’s family had thrown him out at fifteen? I didn’t know what my dad would do. That was the problem. I didn’t know him well enough to predict it I wonder to what degree do Owen and his Dad know each other at all. Did they have any real honest to goodness father/son moments? Owen's go with the flow ways means he's never communicated anything to his parents and equally his Parents never asked if this is what he wants to do. If Owen's dad had any skills of observation he might notice Owen is not that enthusiastic about the business especially compared to Eric.But as far as we know he's too engrossed about his business to notice. Even under the best conditions any reasonable person can see Ryder is moving WAY to fast. A go between,arbiter or what ever you want to call it needs to step in. The only people who might be able to do this are Beth and Jules
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Maybe understandable given what he went through with Shane. Does Ryder have someone who can tell him he's moving too fast and maybe talk him down?
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Across the room, Rupert and Robert were involved in some kind of escalating argument about whether coyotes could climb ladders. “They absolutely cannot.” Jeez doesn't Rupert know anything🙄 I seen the coyote on the Roadrunner use a ladder countless times
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“Because Zane Yoder’s a smart man.” Branford continued, “A man like that spends decades building a name people recognize.” He shook his head once. “No way he’d send you undercover somewhere. He’d never imagine his son’s name could pass unnoticed.” The corner of his mouth lifted. “Probably would've considered it insulting.” The Yoder's are a powerful family.Based on what Branford said Zane Yoder would be embarrassed if everyone knew about Taggert.Is there something he could do to cause trouble for the ranch? Hope not
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That's not their son perhaps Great.Great Great Great Great.......Great Grandson seeing that he's on a train
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It's going to be fun to see her go down
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You say Good Morning after the words real danger 🙄
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The bear and the warnings.
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The bear and the warnings.
Is the text about Kellan and the wall being spray painted about Chase from the same person trying to confuse the hell out of Noah? -
The bear and the warnings.
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The bear and the warnings.
Comments, conspiracy theories and reactions always welcome. Conspiracy theories?...... OH!!! You mean about the story I was all prepared to say a lot of stuff about JFK -
The step Tommy took in this chapter is the step Brian still has to take. I could understand when Brian was a teenager but now? I'm thinking WTH. If Brian calls out of the blue again if I'm Tommy I don't know if I would answer it
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Chapter Four: The High Chair
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Four: The High Chair
It might even be worse than that. She might know what Caleb is saying is true but it may be better for her sick narrative to act like what he's saying isn't true. I'm thinking about the pills I don't know if Caleb can convincingly put the pills on the side of his mouth or under his tongue to avoid taking them. As gross as this is he may have to force regurgitate them. Maybe the incubator's sister overheard the commotion on the phone. Right now she would not get it but if Caleb gets well enough to remember things and accuses the incubator of what she is doing perhaps the sister will remember hearing what she heard over the phone and put 2+2 together -
I typed this comment and then discovered it wasn't here now I wonder where I posted it? Duh with most of his mother’s clothes going to the local Saint Vincent de Paul shop I didn't know St Vincent dePaul had such a world wide reach.We have some here in San Diego run by Father Joe Carroll.They do good work You may not be aware of this but in the U.S. there is a DePaul University founded by St.Vincent de Paul. And while there is an innocent explanation for this the school's mascot is Blue Demons...Go figure
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‘Maybe. Pop didn’t ever really like me having friends around, or anything like that anyway . . . it’s just the way things were.’ Remember in a previous chapter I commented that Pop's religion had similarities to the Amish well here's another one.It sound like Pop didn't want Levi to have friend from the evil English world Since Levi didn't have many friends perhaps Aaron's brother Zack could be one ‘Goodbye, Mum,’ he said quietly. Matt placed a hand on his shoulder and Levi leaned into him briefly. That line really got to me
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The Drop In Centre 3
weinerdog replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
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Shane took advantage of Ryder with the drug dealing but I also have to wonder if Shane also targeted Ryder because he was cute and you know where that could lead
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“That’s fine. All you gotta do is hold on to me and don’t let go. That’s the whole job.” “Arms around me,” Ryder said. “Tight. Don’t be shy about it.” Bet you Owen had an instant love of motorcycles He kissed me. I wonder if the long motorcycle ride was Ryder's idea of foreplay
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Just so you know ....A bird and a Cat don't mix well😄
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I have a feeling if Owen and Ryder's relationship got discovered, Margot wouldn't take his side... I just hope she'll grow a spine soon! Answer to both questions Jules. I think if Margot tries to throw Ryder under bus Jules would then say "if you go through with that WE"RE THROUGH. As far as being an ally to Owen I could see Jules filling in some blanks to Beth.
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Your way?🤔....OH YEAH The alternate universe where @Topher Lydon wins all those Pulitzer Prizes
