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Interesting how Ash brought up branding was that a calculated move? I was delayed reading and commenting on this chapter.Never heard of a Monte Crisco before so I looked it up.You guessed it I had to find where I could get one. None of the places are what you call close..not far but not close.Well you know where I'm going to now.

It was a scroll of vibrant, obscenely bright pink silk, As soon as I read that I knew was from Tariq Lloyd asked earnestly. "He doesn't even carry an ash-wood spear. Well Lloyd it may not be ash but it is definitely wood I weep to see such a magnificent, rigid shaft hidden away beneath the dark wool of your tunic. I dream of the day I might see it drawn in the heat of passion, to witness the vigorous, relentless polish of your martial vigor..." I think I read that same passage in a paperback from the dirty book store I used to go to as a teenager. Is that what you wrote then @Topher Lydon?

How did you know that's what I was doing?🤔

Regardless if Amy said Brett was with him Brett could get in an accident with Amy in the car so you have to change plans. Besides Brett could get killed that worse than burning down a treehouse (although the fire could have spread) I swear old age must be catching up with me I totally missed the chapter 12 posting

Just admit it you don't want me to read and then comment on your chapters

Hughie picked the name Kyle for a teenage male alien?..... Sounds like he has been reading GA stories

We have driverless car technology today can't Hughie just pilot the ship?

They may have had a better chance if they deguised themselves as Chippendale dancers

"Do not shoot the musicians, Val,...Unless they start to play You Light Up My Life

"and drink a beer" What if the only beer available has Rickard's face on it

Well there's only one thing to do.....Go to the place that makes the best meaningless pizza in the universe

I had forgotten that also. It probably won't be in this story because there is so much to sort out at the moment but it's a safe bet these characters and the ones from Traditions will interact in a future story

Is this the only bonus chapter? Sounds like there could be more written.Ironic Alex referred to himself as smart he's book smart but he's life stupid. Or more accurately 50 years stupid. As much as I hated his bigotry with Logan and other stuff I don't think his whole life should have been thrown away. I want something like that to happen to someone who was truly evil and Alex despite his terrible faults wasn't that. “Don’t show your faggot ass around here until you have a million bucks to your name.” That golden jaguar has to be at least several million, right? Maybe if I find it… I can have my family’s love back! Alex dad IMO is way worst than Alex is It one thing to be a homophobe based on flawed religious interpretation but here it's like he's saying it OK to be a f****t ass if you have a million dollars.Alex was an idiot for believing that but how about writing another bonus chapter where Alex's dad gets a worst punishment? BTW @Lee Wilson can give you a lot of good ideas on that😄

I love what Libbet did to Aldous but I wish you would have had that done to Baldwin and Raymond The Egyptians want a war! We are going to give them one!" Well Darien after what Wyland told you what Ishan said How do you plan to go about it?

Looking forward to Book4 and your other projects but please put your health first.If we don't see you finished work in our lifetime I'm convinced we'll see it when we meet in the next lifetime. but there are aerospace jobs in Colorado too, if NASA or the other places don’t work out for you. There’s Lockheed Martin in Littleton, BAE Systems/Ball Aerospace in Boulder, Blue Origin in Denver, and Northrup Grumman in Colorado Springs.” “Yeah, try to get one of those jobs so you’ll be near us!” Clint suggested eagerly. His father ignored him and continued. Lonnie should have known better not to say that in front of Clint unless....Lonnie wants them to stay close by. once word gets out that shifters might be real, then the mobs will form and go into action. They’ll grab their guns and other weapons to hunt down the monsters they think are walking among them You don't think Louella would be par of that mob do you?OK forget I asked that

I guess it's technology messing with us again because that was picked up at the end of the chapter🤷‍♂️

Matt brought up the the point of Levi being raised religious not all religions are anti-gay but hopefully in this case when Julie found out she was terminal she brought up to topic with Levi to see how he felt about gays and then tried to counsel him if nesessary. Yeah it was a mistake the way they handled it but it's not like it's a situation that comes up everyday.And while I also agree with the response toward Matt's parents let's also give them their due.They are willing to let Levi live with them should he not want to leave the town and school he grew up in

He seems like he’s a good kid, Matt, I’ve had some chats with him.’ ‘But he didn’t know you were his grandfather at that point!’ ‘True that.’ I see that that as a good sign. Levi must have acted with respect to Matt's dad a lot 15 year olds would be condescending or worse

He called him an id... instead of an idiot....Is that the same as saying ass instead of ass____

Actually that could be a good thing Skyler knows more than one song so he'll teach Lucas and at least they'll a variety of songs Ericks will hate

I do see one thing that could happen. If he manages to somehow get George in trouble to where he's removed as principle (or maybe jail with Bubba as his cell mate) and he does it with Noah's help they might all of a sudden be the most popular people in town

That's fair but I only lean toward Brett because of the incident at the diner

Have Tripp knell in front of this. Or he can find a Brenda Lee Video singing I'm Sorry and insert himself in Brenda Lee's spot OH and while we're at it after what the cat did the Captains chair

It is your turn on supper duty, and the men are starving! Move!" "This is an indignity!" Ashot hollered indignantly as he was dragged away into the bustling camp, Had I been there to see that I would have said at dinner "Hey everybody give up for Ashot awesome job of peeling the veggies" When Ashot protests and says "What about the spy I neutralized"..." Oh sure that too"

“Yeah. Don’t do anything I wouldn’t do,” Rylee said after her. Is there something Rylee wouldn't do?......Oh yeah get a job