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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 47

    the one just before that holiday
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 15

    well done every movement filled with suspense
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Taine stared at him. This man—this awful, complicated, impossible man—had just threatened political assassination on his behalf. "Oh my God. Dad's a better person than I thought. Sure he doesn't hate gays but will kill Labour Party members...salt of the Earth
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    Up until this chapter the pieces have been high profile Justin,Tim etc. Now how the hell do two freshmen fit into this?
  5. You know I think Allison might be the biggest perv of them all
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 47

    “And if they start deciding people made the company look bad? They could start cutting whoever they think is easiest.” I'll tell you who made the company look bad.It's the company itself.For not doing anything about Bobby in the first place all of the crap that followed would not have if they had just dealt with Bobby,It's a leadership problem from the very top .
  7. Didn't work @Lee Wilson I'm still first 😆
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    I had to stop talking to myself aloud, but this ghost seemed so real. I would have thought I was imagining things also until the radio turned on by itself. Yeah this Leo ghost is real
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    I wasn't thinking that but I was wondering how all this affects the situation with Keve.
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    Now go and yell at me in the comments. WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!??????....There I yelled at you
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    "Nice coat. Very... serial killer chic." I loved that line😄 Detention was held in a cramped classroom at the end of the humanities corridor, overseen by a bored-looking supply teacher who'd clearly given up on life. Six students sat at scattered desks, staring at walls or phones or the clock that seemed to have stopped moving entirely. I had visions of the movie The Breakfast Club Charlie held on to Taine a moment, trying to speak. “You- you are. Good person. T-thank you.” This could be the turning point for Old Charlie IF he gets his body back.It also got me thinking ( I know dangerous) I saw a excellent GA story where two people were in the same body could this happen with Taine and Charlie? The buyer showed up five minutes later—a teenager with more money than sense, Justin Bieber bought the trainers? Oh wait he's an adult now (sort of) never mind
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    He has a championship belt but he's not really THAT good .I let him pin me.......Well wouldn't you?
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    All in the name of God of course
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Are you sure you're not the head archivist?
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Good to the last drop.......Or is it splash🤔....hope it's decaf
  17. Stephen rose sharply, the chair scraping against the floor. “He needed to hear the truth.” How can Kitt hear the truth from you when you don't know it moron. A bulletin board overflowed with community flyers, I know Matt's brain is going in so many different directions but why hasn't he thought of a flyer with Kitt's picture to put on that very same bulletin board? Professor Hot Dad that made me laugh😄
  18. So what's this issue about Logan has about not being seen shirtless especially since Ollie said he looked cute. How can Toby go from being valedictorian to getting C's sure it's a private college but it's not like it's Harvard. And while it's not unheard of it is unusual for an adopted child to have contact with a bio parent as an infant.Did they talk about this with the adoptive parents?
  19. Perhaps the six bourbons saved Mr. Robinson life BTW you made Mr. Robinson's name Bill which could also be Will as in "DANGER WILL ROBINSON"
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Charlie's mom is a crack up😄 I'm surprised Ellis doesn't seem to be aware of the pendant He told him about Ellis at the register, in the stupid uniform with the "DAVE" name badge. I know you already posted the chapter(s) but you can still edit this for future readers of this story.I think name badge should have said DAMIEM😄
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    All I know is I want whoever that guy is underpants
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Do they know Tim and Ben were close childhood friends? Maybe they would not have paired them together if they did
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    Wow even Wallace is in agreement about Killian. Jacy dropping his knife at the site makes sense if it wasn't I would have suspected Wallace so now it seems it's somebody working on the dig. He nodded distractedly in my direction. "I should have seen this coming," he muttered by way of greeting. "I'm supposed to be looking out for him." When I heard that thought to myself oh no Daisy is coming. I might have been wrong, but it appeared to be the same deer I'd seen a few days before. I think that's significant I may or may not have broken a few speed laws on my way to Fletcher's...I refuse to incriminate myself. Oh so Sgt. Kaplan and the police dept reads your stories. Interesting
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Wh..w..what d..do yo..yo..you mean?
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 46

    And not starting a fire while doing so
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