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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
So in other words........Trash EVERYTHING!!!!!! -
Well if one had an attractive neighbor or two I bet they would vote hot.
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In San Diego they say you pay for the weather yeah like all the business here are responsible for the weather. Okay fine but do they have to charge for every one degree Fahrenheit over 55?
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
You forgot Holy shOOT holy shOT Holy shMOELY Holy shED Holy shoD -
No wonder the TV networks keep showing re-runs
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You Went for the Heart
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in You Went for the Heart
We got to know a little more of the past from Alexander's interesting POV but we are at pretty much the same place. As I said before I would think it wouldn't be my place to tell Bella anything unless she was a good friend. But I MIGHT say something to Brad about what a POS he's being- 24 comments
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Not to belabor the point a few other readers and myself Made last chapter but Just to be on the safe side up to this point, we had deliberately not told the boys where they would be going, as the fewer people who knew their whereabouts the happier Helen and I would be. So why did he tell Adam he was going to Newcastle? If it was me I wouldn't even tell my Mother not that she would spill the beans but she or anyone else could inadvertently give away a clue. Adam doesn't even have to be one of the bad guys ,what if he worried that Rick is fooling around? And Helen god bless her is also just as clueless. Rick told her about wanting to take Adam to meet the parents...she didn't bat an eye. Curious if Rick's sister will make an appearance
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
“She also wanted me to give you a kiss from her,” Five said with a mischievous grin. “But I don’t think I’m gonna.” Hey that gives me an idea I'm going to try that on somebody...hope it works.....If you stop hearing from me you'll know what happened -
Well if you like the kind of story of someone losing their soulmate and their complicated way back from that then you'll love this. True that is not an unusual premise for a story on GA or anywhere else but this author's style of telling the story will appeal to you
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Thank you for a great story, And I echo @Seraph statement about meeting again,Perhaps with Marvin POV and of course plenty of appearances from the others(Well except Dailan Mom)
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Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Abyss
Timothy and Jason’s family were spending Christmas somewhere in the Mediterranean on their yacht, there wasn’t much else for him to do in Glacier Bay anyway. Geez that's an interesting way to spend Christmas. “You couldn’t fill a thimble with your baseball knowledge,” Percy said dryly. “I’m the closer.” That could be interpreted in sooooo many ways You kept referring to Mario as a boy I guess he's old enough to drive a vehicle but how old is he? I wonder if Mario and his sister come back in the story at a later date, You're the author and you don't know?- 53 comments
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I have to say synopsis has me interested .On to the story
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For some reason I never thought about this before but people who's mom died while giving birth every birthday is a reminder of her death that has to be a quite an experience once they are old enough to ponder that. Loved the chapter it did have the feel of a final chapter but it's not so I can't wait to see what happens now.
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WOW,WOW,WOW!!!! lot of stuff happening .Bunch of Random thoughts here hope I make sense The main concern I have none of them directly heard from Cliff yet who knows what Erin/Gary would do if cornered . Monica snapped. “Jesus… How the hell does anyone ever get anything done in this house!” She would never know she's never got anything done ever “Shaun. Listen. If the place is seriously abandoned, there might be some type of paper trail. Probate, medical transfers, estate changes, something. Find the local courthouse. Look up the property records.” Considering Sam has been a moron most of the story that was pretty damn smart then started sweeping candy bars, chips, and a family-sized pack of Oreos off the shelf.At the register, Dallas tossed up the mountain of snacks, the energy drinks, and added a pack of Camels for good measure. You know Dallas missed his calling as a nutritionist They even got a little playzone for them to smack each other with foam chairs or whatever.” Oh swell our future WWE'ers
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The Truth That Broke the Room
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The Truth That Broke the Room
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I don't think the worse yet but here's something to consider along with @akascrubber comment ‘Taking a fugitive to our secret hideaway,’ I answered as I got to my feet and wandered down the almost empty carriage a little. I noticed Casey glance at Helen, but all she did was give him a wink. ‘I have no idea what you mean by that, but I’m sure you’ll explain it to me later,’ he countered. Adam IS asking questions about the case and Rick volunteered the info about a hideaway and why should Rick explain anything about the case to Adam? I hope this is what @drsawzall calls a red herring
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The Truth That Broke the Room
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The Truth That Broke the Room
As rough as that was at least Silas has a way to find out what happened where others wouldn't Are we going hear the conversation between the adults? I picture Grandma and Caleb's mom exchanging snarky comments -
Kudos to Dawn in this chapter Now that Kate told her folks I'm sure Dawn's mom will tell Creeks mom. Though not as dramatic that's another conversation Creek and Kate can look forward to
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There are other chapters still. It's not over yetBut for what it's worth I agree with you
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My comments are going to be all over the place so I hope I make sense. the dreaded arepa – the devil’s hockey puck. That comment made me chuckle.Dona Susana was a quick study in American food she must have got the memo the way to a teenage boys heart is through his stomach. One thing that surprised me a little was that Miguel didn’t even comment on why Juan Camilo was packing heat. Take that and the fact that Miguel and Yeison didn't even think twice about the background checks tells me that is common with most of the gringo's they meet. I see things to like and dislike about Miguel at the moment there are more red flags. I'm curious if Miguel approached Hunter again after Hunter turned down the party because Yeison hooked up with him. I could see that turning potentially ugly. That our house was always open to them, whether it was sleepovers, mall trips, whatever kids did these days. Hunter's dad may regret that.Yeah Juan is there but here's a thought one of Hunter's friends might case the place on behalf of the wrong person There were no good new stories on Nifty or any of the other websites for gay teen fiction, You mentioned Nifty???You should have edited that to GA😄
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And since you’re hearing me speak of abstract things such as the heart, an internal organ, being a stand-in for personality, you must know that we’re serious. Let’s get the hell out of here.” “Alexander, language,” Brad said with a low snicker. “Like, what the hell, man?” Classic Brad Many readers asked about Blanche. Never occurred to me my bad.Like @akascrubber said lots of question I'm guessing he wasn't left much. I can see both Brad and Alexander offering help financially and Lyn not accepting it which might be a factor in any kind of falling out
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Michael's Result and a Quiet Late Summer
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Michael's Result and a Quiet Late Summer
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Michael's Result and a Quiet Late Summer
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Michael's Result and a Quiet Late Summer
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Chapter 6: Doing Stuff Together!
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 6: Doing Stuff Together!
And none of your little faggot friends can come over.” Under no circumstances is that ever OK to say.I sure sure she has heard Asian slurs thrown her way WTH -
I might have missed it.I'm all for community spirt and all but after Adam told is his diary how tough the day was Carl's dad should have gave them a little something for their efforts
