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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 13

    They were cheering for the tragedy, placing bets on the outcome. The sheer, inhuman cruelty of it filled him with a rage so vast it was dizzying. “The one that protects the school from liability, Take those two statement from parts of this chapter. These evil morons should realize a suicide could bring unwanted scrutiny to what happened which could lead back to them. They should stop this to cover their own miserable ass but it looks like they are out of control
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    Chapter 49

    Please have Bobby plan sone very stupid revenge to where he gets arrested.....Perhaps he and Erin can be cellmates. I think it would be cool to have Imani show up in typical metalhead fan gear
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    Chapter 49

    Did you miss the flight? If you did at least it was for a good reason........ Maybe you can bill @mastershakeme for the ticket😄
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    Chapter 12

    No you didn't you rented for the first time yesterday when you turned 18
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    Chapter 15

    Micah's pulling out all the stops. "I just talked to a buddy of mine, who said he can qualify you for your gun permit if you meet him at the range around ten. Would that work for you?".....Why do I think Killian is going to have to use a gun before this story is over "No, but I've always wanted to be a PI. I love true crime. Are you sure I couldn't have a gun?" I bet she was disappointed when she saw Novak didn't look like Magnum P.I.
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    Chapter 6

    Well Lonnie's better then I could ever be, These conversations with Leo I would always be replaying especially the line “I didn’t choose to leave you.”
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    Chapter 16

    The warlords info might be the difference
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    Chapter 13

    So what happened to Taine's old residence?
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    Chapter 13

    Tell her what?🤔
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    Chapter 12

    The GM knows every one of Tim's moves and Tim knows the list of possibilities is short so you would think he could figure it out. they’re always timed perfectly. When your dad is out of town. During your debate finals. Right after a big win or a loss, when you’re emotionally vulnerable. They know your schedule, your life, like they’re living it with you.” Doesn't all that sound like it's Tim's Dad? Or perhaps someone who is always around Tim's Dad🤔
  11. Actually the clues are right there ,Bryan breaks up every two month like he's hoping THIS girl will ignite the feelings that he hasn't been getting from the other girls. The consider the alternative isn't in Bryan's vocabulary yet. If Bryan had just went with Cooper's kiss back when they were 12 at least Bryan wouldn't be kissing like a cold fish
  12. This is the first time I sampled this author I like what I'm reading.'m following the Author and the story
  13. While all this is happening has ANYONE reported Kitt as a missing person or a runaway? If it was mentioned I missed it.Kitt is under 18 right? So what gives?
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    Chapter 14

    You mentioned your age once and you have some years on me but I was in the same general neighborhood.You know rotary dial phones, rolodexes only 3-5 TV channels available.....I bet some readers are wondering "What are those two senile idiots talking about?"
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    Chapter 12

    Well here's what naive me is hoping. Since Tylers's Grandfather was able to find a way to defeat a Demon perhaps Tyler can also. They say talent skips a generation
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    Chapter 12

    Well they can say Mr Hartley had an affair and the mother died.....But that wouldn't work we ALL know politicians don't do that
  17. This Bubba guy seems to be in every prison in every state
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    Chapter 11

    BLUE: “I did not send that photo to your father. Another Player did. They are targeting me through you. I am… sorry.” That other player whoever he/she is just made a big mistake. The worst case scenario has now happened to Tim and the other are already in their own hell. The only reason the other had to obey is because of worry of what would happen to Tim, Now they are uninhibited.Game on
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    Chapter 40 S3

    Any plans of doing a story with Clint and Daniel with Devin and Mac making appearances? Of course that would mean that Clint and Daniel would have found out what they were shifters
  20. Great, a moron lawyer. Why not? He has a moron client
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    Chapter 48

    Remember this comment from @mastershakeme from chap 41 Yes, we're coming to a close in this story. After this big show scene, we'll probably skip ahead to like a week before batttle of the bands in October, see how they're doing in their new house, have one more big drama moment, then, finale at the event!!! One more big drama moment,ONE!? I have to ask what does she consider a big drama moment
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    Chapter 48

    When it rains it pours
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    Chapter 5

    For record I believe Ty is on the level but there was this one exchange I felt awkward now." I'm sure there are other guys you can ask." "Nah. Honestly, there aren't." To me that doesn't ring true,I would think someone would be willing to do this in a business deal type of way. I would still speak to lawyer about language on how to protect himself I vowed to love Leo till death, and that's what has happened. I don't want to say them again and not mean them." Well you can always write the vows in a way twhere you don't sound like a hypocrite. Let's see... " Do you promise to financially cover Ty's ass"..... Ok needs work😄
  24. Well if history repeats itself and he disappears again at least we will have this story. As I understand it the whole story has already been written and submitted to Awesome Dave's website with scheduled postings so I'm grateful that we'll to able to read that. As for what you're speculating on chap. 17 I came away with the same thought
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    Chapter 14

    With Quinn — I mean, with Dr. Healy dead, we'll probably be closed down." "I understand. That's your job. It's just not easy. I may not have liked him all that much, but I respected him." Those seperate statement would seem to contradict. On one hand she is saying she didn't like him so you would think she would always say the formal, professional Dr.Healy.But a number of times she said Quinn which would suggest a familiarity perhaps an intimate familiarity if so did it end bad? That would put a new spin on things huh? it could have been a deer — or even a squirrel. A deer huh? Like a white stag? "There was blood...all over the floor, splattered on the wall — everywhere. Oh God, so much blood." I don't really think this but I'll throw it out there could an angry white stag leave behind that much damage?
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