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Kyle is pretty cute for an alien “P-play with myself? That’s forbidden, the elders said I would grow hair on my palms, and go blind!” Wow some things really are universal is this case literally universal

Anybody around there good with technology? I'm not so maybe what I'm saying is stupid .But is there some way to put a hidden cam that could capture what is going on somewhere? That is the only way I see out of this.George still uses his anniversary date for the school security alarm so he doesn't sound tech savvy. So he they could probably do this without George being wise.

“I hate you.” Stephen grumbled as he covered himself with the book. “I hate all of you, I am not… some painted Trollope you can just throw at poor, innocent boys.” If Tariq had liked me instead of Stephen they wouldn't even be having this conversation

The only place on this coast that has cured cedar in those quantities, and the surplus infantry to spare, is Tyre." this is where I'm in the chapter right now my first reaction? Sounds like Stephen may have to make some time with Tariq.Now to see if I'm close or far off

I read you're response to @chris191070I deserve that

Thank you for your patience as I healed from an injury that needed screws, surgery, and six weeks recovery time. Here is Part One of the end, Part Two will be posted on Saturday. I'm glad you're recovering. So when are we going to see Garbriel's Gambit again?

Despite my smart aleck comment to @Gary L he was absolutely right about this chapter. Of course no way Julie was going to die alone with Levi there but having Matt,Luke and Matt's parents there must have been a source of comfort for her. He had seen Levi reading from the small bible that sat now on the drawers beside Julie’s bed. That is not necessarily a bad sign but one to be aware of,It's also not unusual for people to turn to that in this kind of a situation

He post that 8 minutes ago........Are you practicing for the next @kbois story? (Those who read her will know what I'm referring to)

@mastershakeme should write you into the story so you could tell the gang to do just that

(Or, How to Accidentally Become a Sex Educator) where I live that is called somebody knocking someone up *The late-night radio shows were right. The saucer people took me. I am going to be dissected.* Oh I didn't know reruns of Art Bell's Coast to Coast were broadcast in space Until then, I suggest you both think about baseball." Kyle plays Hover ball does he even know what baseball is?

Glorb?...shlorp-nodes?....Once GA figures out what those words mean they''ll ban the chapter

Interesting how Ash brought up branding was that a calculated move? I was delayed reading and commenting on this chapter.Never heard of a Monte Crisco before so I looked it up.You guessed it I had to find where I could get one. None of the places are what you call close..not far but not close.Well you know where I'm going to now.

It was a scroll of vibrant, obscenely bright pink silk, As soon as I read that I knew was from Tariq Lloyd asked earnestly. "He doesn't even carry an ash-wood spear. Well Lloyd it may not be ash but it is definitely wood I weep to see such a magnificent, rigid shaft hidden away beneath the dark wool of your tunic. I dream of the day I might see it drawn in the heat of passion, to witness the vigorous, relentless polish of your martial vigor..." I think I read that same passage in a paperback from the dirty book store I used to go to as a teenager. Is that what you wrote then @Topher Lydon?

How did you know that's what I was doing?🤔

Regardless if Amy said Brett was with him Brett could get in an accident with Amy in the car so you have to change plans. Besides Brett could get killed that worse than burning down a treehouse (although the fire could have spread) I swear old age must be catching up with me I totally missed the chapter 12 posting

Just admit it you don't want me to read and then comment on your chapters

Hughie picked the name Kyle for a teenage male alien?..... Sounds like he has been reading GA stories

We have driverless car technology today can't Hughie just pilot the ship?

They may have had a better chance if they deguised themselves as Chippendale dancers

"Do not shoot the musicians, Val,...Unless they start to play You Light Up My Life

"and drink a beer" What if the only beer available has Rickard's face on it

Well there's only one thing to do.....Go to the place that makes the best meaningless pizza in the universe

I had forgotten that also. It probably won't be in this story because there is so much to sort out at the moment but it's a safe bet these characters and the ones from Traditions will interact in a future story

Is this the only bonus chapter? Sounds like there could be more written.Ironic Alex referred to himself as smart he's book smart but he's life stupid. Or more accurately 50 years stupid. As much as I hated his bigotry with Logan and other stuff I don't think his whole life should have been thrown away. I want something like that to happen to someone who was truly evil and Alex despite his terrible faults wasn't that. “Don’t show your faggot ass around here until you have a million bucks to your name.” That golden jaguar has to be at least several million, right? Maybe if I find it… I can have my family’s love back! Alex dad IMO is way worst than Alex is It one thing to be a homophobe based on flawed religious interpretation but here it's like he's saying it OK to be a f****t ass if you have a million dollars.Alex was an idiot for believing that but how about writing another bonus chapter where Alex's dad gets a worst punishment? BTW @Lee Wilson can give you a lot of good ideas on that😄

I love what Libbet did to Aldous but I wish you would have had that done to Baldwin and Raymond The Egyptians want a war! We are going to give them one!" Well Darien after what Wyland told you what Ishan said How do you plan to go about it?