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We'll get a better idea once we find out more about the incident in the past. Who was more to blame.? If the blame is equal between the two then I could see Brad being ticked off at his parents reaction. Still Brad is being very callous. You know the old joke what's the difference between your Job and your wife? After a couple of years your job still sucks. Well perhaps Bella is already at that point so maybe in Brad's mind this is OK because it's the only way to get head. I bet this thinking is more common than most realize. “Yeah, right. Hey, by the way, did you tell His Majesty about your sexual orientation?” So Brad has no clue about that. ” Although Luke had proven to be an ass, Lyn didn’t want to throw him under the bus. Why the hell not?

Notice he wrote "Percy's machine" Also notice that he didn't write "But Ethan never rides Percy's non machine"

I would hope the nightmare is a clue.The reality is dreams and nightmare are formed by your own thoughts so perhaps these are Rick thoughts about what happened but this is a story so thats no fun😄. Maybe he'll see something in the yearbook and Marty's journal that he can piece together. ‘I have her number somewhere, so I’ll dig it out for you. Then it’s up to you as to whether or not you call her . . . but I certainly hope you do. People really can change, Rick, and if nothing else, it’d be a shame to see you miss out on meeting your nephew.’ Here's what I would do I assume it's a cell phone so I would text her "It's Rick I want to call you will you take the call?"

Why do I think Mario and Ethan are going to visit at the same time? It wasn’t that sharing a shower with Five was an unpleasant thought. But gay chicken aside, Five was straight. And he really should not be having the kind of thoughts he was having. After all this should't it be Bi after all the thoughts pretty turned into actions So what's the next accident? Lets see they walk out of shower one slips and falls on his back while the other rushing to help slips and falls forward and while his mouth is open because he is screaming he just happens to land......

Well this is an interesting unique type of story. Can't wait to read more Sorry to use such a lame comparison but nothing else comes to mind. Remember Gilligan's Island? The Professor always had all the answers to their problems...except how to get off the island. In this story Morgan can say a spell to get money out of an ATM and say a spell to make it stop raining until he gets home but did he have a spell to find the key?🤔 Of course not.But I guess he did have a spell for looking like he's in his thirties even though he's been here for 15 centuries. Tomorrow I'm going to an ATM and say “Obliviscere et largire.”

Do you realize who you stated that to😱

Did you also go a few rounds with a boxer? Or did the full court press with a basketball player?

Geez the chapter ends before they find out what happened to Marty. It may be nothing but I'm keeping the name Josh Bell in mind. Also Mr. C with Rick saying he was a little creepy and it seemed like he was the only teacher still at the school. Could the guy Adam saw at the train station who looked familiar be Mr.C with a changed appearence? Again probably nothing ‘He’s in the computer game, working for one of the high-end companies in town, programming systems for some of the biggest companies in the country. Well since I'm on a roll suspecting everybody 😄 Adam would have skills which would help the bad guys but as I stated last chapter I'm getting less suspicious of him. For all you readers all these guesses are most likely wrong.Now about JFK.........I better stop here

Thank you for writing this .I'm seeing now more then ever Tommy finding a way over to Harrison. I am saddened to hear Danny won't be back. “Breathing is so mainstream,” Jonah said, Well since EVERYBODY has to breathe to live I guess that's as mainstream as you can get

Awesome that means your next chapter will be top notch

If Five was asked by his parents if Percy was gay and Five didn't want to lie that would be one thing but Five didn't say it happened like that so if it didn't it wasn't his truth to tell. If Percy doesn't take this chance with San Jose he would be second guessing it for the rest of his life. She was 99% over Percy now that she knew she could never be with him. Hmm🤔 Maybe that trouble comment I made last chapter isn't inaccurate “Is that your end game?” Percy asked as he closed the bed hatch. Percy I think your end might be his end game “You don’t understand, there is not a single out gay player in the major league.” There was an MLB umpire after he retired (of course) who came out as gay and in his book he claimed to have an encounter with a player. Another former player had said if he became a star then he would have came out. You may know this but the San Jose Giants play in a place called Excite park .I'm you can do something with that

So here we are, another wonderful Monday. Here is Chapter Three of Frosted Hearts. What a depressing world you live in where everyday is Monday

Oh you'll never match what @Lee Wilson does to his asshole characters

Well something apparently happened while Lyn stayed at Brad's house during senior year .It will be interesting to see what. You look like that chick in that movie with the rotten cake. I'm not sure of the movie Brad ( @Laura S. Fox) is referring to but I hope it's not the movie The Help “It looks to me like you do. Take it or I’ll make you swallow it.” That guy is not a chauffeur ...He's from the mob

Hunter has been here what? A week? And he's already creating a triangle. If this was set anywhere else I would be unhesitatingly #Team Yeison and I am for the most part but this being Columbia there may be other issues we haven't even thought of yet. Hunter's self loathing and Miguel's confusion sounds like a recipe for disaster. I know Miguel says he putting on an act to hide things about himself but I can't respect bullying behavior

I guess I wasn't the only only one that noticed Max's lack of a reception for Miguel's arrival

“Gavin also ate crayons until he was seven,...That explains so much doesn't it? I couldn’t wait to sit on this side of the field and hope Tempton kicked the shit out of them. we keep getting these reminders about how Joel's heart is still with Tempton and why isn't he going to Tempton? He worried about negative reactions from people if they find out he's gay .And who are these people?.....STUDENTS THAT GO TO TEMPTON!!!!!

You have to be more specific .Saying dumb ass in this story is way to vague

I was also thinking about Logan making a move. If I remember right Logan is not in band so there will be a lot of times Toby is away so Logan might have opportunities. You mentioned in a chapter comment that Oliver's and Toby's self defense training will come into play. I hope it doesn't involve Logan going too far .To be fair there is nothing that suggests Logan is that kind of person I'm just trying to consider all the angles

A lot of this reminded me of when my Mom went to my Dad's work office to clean out his desk. I was only 4 at the time and we had gone there a number of times visiting before and I don't know why but when Mom opened the door I expected to see him there. a lot of thoughts go through your head when you do do something like that as I'm sure it did for Darren

I'm surprised Aedan hasn't gotten more grief at school over his dad. During basketball tryouts I was picturing Aedan getting fouled hard (by the same flag football guy?) The kiss would have been the perfect opportunity to tell Jake it was a birthday kiss. Happy Birthday

If you were in single digits I would get. But where I am our temperature is in double digits and so is yours see not much difference at all

This is looking more and more like Bethany may be bummed by the end of the story. Unless of course they like the idea of a thouple

I know I said next installment would be on Monday, but to get everything posted by Christmas, I might have to speed up the schedule. So let's pretend today is Monday. No complaint's here it's great to get as much of this story as we can. So today is Monday cool........ Oh shoot I was supposed pay back some money to somebody on Friday..ah such is life. Now on to read the chapter

A perfect chapter in so many ways but then then there was this ‘Yes, and we understand them fully. But you don’t need to worry. If anything happens and it looks like we need to get out, we have somewhere else where we can go to. And Rick knows where that is,’ added Tom, to which Helen nodded I take that as foreshadowing and the bad guys are going to find out where the boys are. And I don't think it will be a betrayal from Adam but they might have found out about Adam's connection to Rick and perhaps will trail him