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Three for Three and 15 to 20
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Three for Three and 15 to 20
Great, a moron lawyer. Why not? He has a moron client -
Remember this comment from @mastershakeme from chap 41 Yes, we're coming to a close in this story. After this big show scene, we'll probably skip ahead to like a week before batttle of the bands in October, see how they're doing in their new house, have one more big drama moment, then, finale at the event!!! One more big drama moment,ONE!? I have to ask what does she consider a big drama moment
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When it rains it pours
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For record I believe Ty is on the level but there was this one exchange I felt awkward now." I'm sure there are other guys you can ask." "Nah. Honestly, there aren't." To me that doesn't ring true,I would think someone would be willing to do this in a business deal type of way. I would still speak to lawyer about language on how to protect himself I vowed to love Leo till death, and that's what has happened. I don't want to say them again and not mean them." Well you can always write the vows in a way twhere you don't sound like a hypocrite. Let's see... " Do you promise to financially cover Ty's ass"..... Ok needs work😄
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Well if history repeats itself and he disappears again at least we will have this story. As I understand it the whole story has already been written and submitted to Awesome Dave's website with scheduled postings so I'm grateful that we'll to able to read that. As for what you're speculating on chap. 17 I came away with the same thought
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With Quinn — I mean, with Dr. Healy dead, we'll probably be closed down." "I understand. That's your job. It's just not easy. I may not have liked him all that much, but I respected him." Those seperate statement would seem to contradict. On one hand she is saying she didn't like him so you would think she would always say the formal, professional Dr.Healy.But a number of times she said Quinn which would suggest a familiarity perhaps an intimate familiarity if so did it end bad? That would put a new spin on things huh? it could have been a deer — or even a squirrel. A deer huh? Like a white stag? "There was blood...all over the floor, splattered on the wall — everywhere. Oh God, so much blood." I don't really think this but I'll throw it out there could an angry white stag leave behind that much damage?
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I'm thinking it will have something to do with the brilliant idea Matt unknowingly stumbled on to at the end of last chapter
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Sounds like my dates. Only in my case it only LOOKS like my body is dying
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Oh so Aidan from The Secret Lies Of Schoolboys was you🤔
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I'm not s smart as Tim (even if he doesn't really exist) But I say make a plan revealing all the texts to EVERYONE and say you will then show this to law enforcement and bluff that you don't care if you release all the damning BUT what the archivist is doing will become known for example the planting of weed in Leo and Sam's locker .That way the archivist will have something on the line.With the exception of the Tim's father issue the hell they are going through can't get any worse. And perhaps there is a way to distract Tim's father something that will make him go out of town for a bit.
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Funny I don't see your name anywhere on it
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Pastor Greene is a wise man. “Curiosity isn’t wrong. But that’s not the life you deserve.” Until Tom said that Kitt had a right to wonder about Tom's motivations. I'm glad Tom was able to communicate that. Okay crazy prediction time. I'm seeing Matt and Stephen working together to find Kitt.
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the one just before that holiday
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well done every movement filled with suspense
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Taine stared at him. This man—this awful, complicated, impossible man—had just threatened political assassination on his behalf. "Oh my God. Dad's a better person than I thought. Sure he doesn't hate gays but will kill Labour Party members...salt of the Earth
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Up until this chapter the pieces have been high profile Justin,Tim etc. Now how the hell do two freshmen fit into this?
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You know I think Allison might be the biggest perv of them all
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“And if they start deciding people made the company look bad? They could start cutting whoever they think is easiest.” I'll tell you who made the company look bad.It's the company itself.For not doing anything about Bobby in the first place all of the crap that followed would not have if they had just dealt with Bobby,It's a leadership problem from the very top .
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Didn't work @Lee Wilson I'm still first 😆
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I had to stop talking to myself aloud, but this ghost seemed so real. I would have thought I was imagining things also until the radio turned on by itself. Yeah this Leo ghost is real
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I wasn't thinking that but I was wondering how all this affects the situation with Keve.
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Now go and yell at me in the comments. WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!??????....There I yelled at you
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"Nice coat. Very... serial killer chic." I loved that line😄 Detention was held in a cramped classroom at the end of the humanities corridor, overseen by a bored-looking supply teacher who'd clearly given up on life. Six students sat at scattered desks, staring at walls or phones or the clock that seemed to have stopped moving entirely. I had visions of the movie The Breakfast Club Charlie held on to Taine a moment, trying to speak. “You- you are. Good person. T-thank you.” This could be the turning point for Old Charlie IF he gets his body back.It also got me thinking ( I know dangerous) I saw a excellent GA story where two people were in the same body could this happen with Taine and Charlie? The buyer showed up five minutes later—a teenager with more money than sense, Justin Bieber bought the trainers? Oh wait he's an adult now (sort of) never mind
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He has a championship belt but he's not really THAT good .I let him pin me.......Well wouldn't you?
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All in the name of God of course
