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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Look ,But Don't Look, Look. In other words who you (and me)did in the PE showers
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for those of you who are younger this a 45 record You might have seen something bigger than that.That would be an album or LP because it could play multiple songs .Can you imagine that?
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A lot can happen in two years and a lot HAS to happen in two years. But the right people are there to MAKE it happen. Thank you sir
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How long can this go on? Matt… you’re the only person he trusted. The only place he felt safe.” This tells me Kitt's Mom knew how overbearing his Dad was but yet did nothing
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The First Morning in Riverbend
weinerdog commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The First Morning in Riverbend
This would pretty much have to be under the table because Kitt hasn't had to fill anything out or jump through any hoops if he doesn't give a name or gives a phony name it will be that much harder to find him. This being a Mexican restaurant and how lax they seen to be it reminds of a time I went to a taco shop I frequented.This one time there was only a boy behind the counter and it wasn't an adult midget it WAS a boy.Looked to be 10 years old or so.I was thinking to myself this has to be illegal as hell he was the only one in here .I was hungry so I ordered a burrito.The kid had to stand on a milk crate to be able to cook at the grill. Guess what? It turned out to be one of the best burritos I ever had.Still is to this day -
Status quo isn't working for him so........ Jamal's first kills and justifiable ones
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"Then why not come to me up front? Just like you did when the site was first disturbed? Perhaps Fletcher would not have been attacked if he had....jackass. "Either way, you're no longer welcome here. I will not cooperate with you any further, and I've instructed my crew not to speak to you." spoken like someone who has something to hide. I really hope Lily ISN't diplomatic when they speak to Healy.If Healy is rude to her I hope Jacy steps in and says that will not be tolerated
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“I’m surprised they didn’t call for a padded vehicle so they could take her to the funny farm,” That might still happen if @Bill W writes it that way (hint,hint) I think it's a shame Louella wasn't invited to the wedding.......
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“I was going to sell everything on Facebook Marketplace, but that takes time and effort. This’ll be faster.” OMG time and effort????? We can't have that now can we. I see yet another possible hurdle Imani might notice the cut marks on Jesse
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If Aidan found condoms what would he label those?
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One thing I like about this story is nobody is an A-hole Marshall Lee in this chapter also showed he's a good brother when they went with Axl on the date. "He's not fine," Marshall-Lee muttered. "He's been like this all week. Re-folding that uniform. Practicing his smile in the mirror." "I did not practice my smile." "You definitely practiced your smile. I heard you. 'Charming but deep. Charming but deep.'" How many mirrors does their place have? Between Marshall Lee doing his and Axl practicing his smile anyone else would never get to use it That's what decent people do." Ollie knows how to be a decent person he just thinks what his father would do and does the opposite You watched a video on waffles?" Marshall-Lee's voice. "I watch videos on everything. It's called being prepared." Ollie laughed—that real laugh, warm and easy. "He's right. The first three batches were disasters. We're finally getting the hang of it." Axl f--ks up pancakes while Ollie f--ks up waffles if that that doesn't make them a match made in Heaven what does?
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The only problem with that name is it sounds too close to taint I hope he didn't have a tough time growing up
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This was very tough to read I think the author captured what kids being kicked out of their home go through. Kitt is more resourceful and is a type who doesn't give up and it was very scary for him could you picture another kid even younger and more unprepared? I hope Matt remembers Riverbend and makes the connection
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I just opened my water bill and electric bill at the same time....I was shocked.........Have a good day despite of what I just wrote😄
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"I know who you are. I know you're a private eye. Now, why don't you tell me why you're really here?" From the moment Lily introduced him as Killian Kendall I thought uh-oh. Since this is sort of undercover I'm surprised Killian didn't of using another name. "Yeah, you didn't have to come over. I could have shown Killian to the site," Jacy chipped in. Me thinks Jacy had another motivation for showing Killian the site. "Wait... Lily, Rose, Daisy? Five girls and you all have flower names?" Daisy should have been named Narcissus (Daffodil) since it sounds so similar to narcissist. There is a garden flower called pansy I bet Daisy would have been even more livid with Flecther if she was named that😄
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I'm not done reading the chapter yet @Josh Aterovis but I had to comment while this was fresh in my mind Why just last week he got so upset when I went shopping that he ate the neighbors' cat. They were so angry! They wanted to put him down!" Her voice was actually filled with righteous indignation, as if she couldn't understand why her neighbors would be upset that her dog had used their cat as a chew toy. "They just don't understand you, do they? Do they?" You DO know you might have just alienated @Summerabbacat don't you?
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If Orel could get 847,392 subscribers for Isopod Canada imagine what he could get if he had a hidden camera on Axl and Ollie and put that on YouTube?
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Just the tip? I thought it would be the whole........never mind
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I think we all are🤞 Lets hope he's on a vacation or something
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I have an idea if Bobby posts that video someone should post the video following that one with Shaun kicking Bobby's ass .What would that make him?
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Wasn't that already in one of your stories🤔
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I'm guessing that suit is either a record company exec or perhaps wants to be Defaced Manager
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Now for the aftermath.... you know what that means! 🤭 I think I do BUT!!!!....It is you we are talking about so I'll shudder in the meantime
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What Don Fraser is doing it seems like it Axl and Marshall were wild kids they would get away with who knows what. I bet they could plan an orgy around Don's schedule.......HEY!!!
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After seeing the Pancakes Axl makes CPS might take Marshall Lee out of the home
