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  1. mansexlover
    As much as I am enjoying these stories, I find the banter between the author and the readers just as funny. Keep up the good work people x
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    have taken out my question re prompts
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    This certainly is a different way of writing a story and these two chapters are the first two I think I have ever read. You have used them to make really imaginative short stories. When teaching we always tried to get the pupils to make their stories more imaginative by teaching them different words to be used in sentences firstly . then to be used in the story they were currently writing. It was a fun way of introducing new vocabulary and worked well. I would have loved to try out this method of prompts with them.
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    The last thing he needs is a stalker and getting text messages at that time of night. Real scary. I would be sh...ing myself in his position.
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    Justice

    mansexlover commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Justice

    A great mystery story very well written. Characters were totally believable and plot was excellent. thank you I look forward to reading more of your work.
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    Great story telling skills. Think we all fell in love with Puppy and I can't believe this was the last chapter. Hopefully he will realise his dream of working at Greenstones. Thank you for letting us enjoy the journey with you.
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    I feel so sorry for Luke having to deal with his anxiety issues. Thank goodness he has the support of his dad and his 2 best friends.
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    Chapter 17

    mansexlover commented on Andre Delport's story chapter in Chapter 17

    I have to agree with Mark, a lovely chapter thank you Andre
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    Damn does that mean I cant twitch my net curtains when the stud across from me comes out topless with tight joggers (freeballing)
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    TY it's been one hellofa ride. Great story, fantastic characters and terrific plot lines. Look forward to reading whatever comes next .
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    Great start to the story... it's going to make interesting reading re panic attacks
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    Brilliant chapter loved the proposal and laughed at the reinforcements being brought into the room. Is Jay really serious?
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    Chapter 33

    mansexlover commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 33

    A great chapter ty
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    Chapter 43

    mansexlover commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 43

    Great chapter ... quite frankly ban Marylou for good.
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    A brilliant chapter thankyou.
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    Great chapter ty smile at the that he didn't know of what boyfriend things they could do that didn't involve sex. New waters for him.
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    Seven of Swords

    mansexlover commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Seven of Swords

    You are really building up the suspense very well...I can't wait to find out who is behind all the shenanigans
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    Two of Swords

    mansexlover commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Two of Swords

    What made me laugh was the comment re texting in bed....she knew what the texting would lead to.
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    Chapter 40

    mansexlover commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 40

    Sounds like they are going to be very busy with the alterations to the club. Great that Armand has been receiving helpful advice and assistance from the shops he visited esp with the lady from the nursery offering to plant up the containers he purchased. The builders also appear to be very committed to what they are doing.
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    Wow what an emotional chapter from weddings to an apparent break up. Hopefully Lars will take a big look at himself and realise how important Jay is to him.
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    No need to beg for a review... fantastic ending to this saga. Looking forward to catching up with them all again in the n e a r future lol Love your style of writing. I am a big fan x
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    CDMX • XXXVI

    mansexlover commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in CDMX • XXXVI

    Brilliant chapter my heart was thumping ( and still is) all the way through this chapter. I'm glad he told Northman "fuck you" that has been a long time coming. Having somehow missed this chapter I can read the next straight away... be still my beating heart.... lol
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    Chapter 16

    mansexlover commented on Andre Delport's story chapter in Chapter 16

    A great journey home thanks to their friends the Kinleys. Good old Rascal I can just see his excitement at seeing his family home again. Hopefully everything will settle down quickly into adapting to a larger family but already the older children are leading the way into making the new arrivals stay pleasurable. Where do the jet staff stay for the fortnight?
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    The Inevitable

    mansexlover commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Inevitable

    Brilliant chapter they make a really great couple.
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    Chapter 21

    mansexlover commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 21

    as will I
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