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Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
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Nice chapter. I feel like we are getting to know the guys quite quickly. Good Job.
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The 4rth story in a collection, The Undertaker's Devil is a fascinating look at life in the old west. Andy and Samael are good men who struggle to find each other and struggle to stay together. This was a super read which brought many smiles and a few tears along the way.
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I have really enjoyed these old photograph stories. Thank you so much. This one brought a tear to my eye but also a whole heap of grins.
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I wonder how many of us waste years of our lives avoiding love. 🤔
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Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Lol. Thanks. I read it last year and loved it. I never thought I would enjoy a western theme story but I really love the way you write. Thanks for writing. 👍 -
Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Ah. No!!! I have read it. I thought there was a 3rd on the way. -
Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Nor do I. Can't wait for this sequel. 🙌 -
Good job. 👍 👏
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Hell No Bru.
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Connor would. His ego is beyond compare.
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A fantastic chapter. It is so good to see that thoughtful, happy side of Rusty. I think he and Matty have a future, beyond college. 🤔 and I hope that music will feature in that future.
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Good point @raven1. Connor will agitate and move his masses to action but he could well stay far away from the action.
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That makes perfect sense @Joie J.. It's time for a new 🤴
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John could well be the downfall of Connor.
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Yep. He sure does. And he will finally explode with pent up frustration.
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I've always loved a road trip.
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I'm sure he will be splendid.
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Looking forward to the road trip and travels to Oz.
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The fourth in the CJ Series, Spring completes CJ's first year with his dads. The character development is masterful as the plot unfolds and the year draws to a close. Another excellent addition to the ongoing saga of the Abellos and their expanding crew of friends and family.
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So spring has turned to summer and a year has gone by. CJ has grown so much. I'm glad he is going to Oz on his own and that he will be returning with Owen. The dads and their crew are great.
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I am delighted that CJ is open to Owen and something developing between them. The letter to Owen was a good way to remember the events in CJs life. A very encouraging chapter.
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If Memory Serves GA is a short reflection on a life changing event that occurred 3 years previously. Definitely a good read. 👍
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Yep, those anxious moments of not knowing what to do or what would happen next. Breathing in rasping gasps.
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I had forgotten how much CJ has experienced in the year he has been in DC. He has had more than his dair share of ups and wons. Meeting Leo and Eli was great. Eli might become a member of the gang. Speaking to Dragon. Genius. Bradley and Paddy moving down is super news. It will be hard for Tom and Jp to adapt as well as for Hilary and rhe bits. This might be the saving of Paddy, who I suspect is gay 🤔
