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    Interlude

    That was a dramatic interlude. Gabriel is almost killed, we discover that Tom and a Kelly have serious issues and now Gabriel has to rely on Sergio being discreet about what has happened. The net around Gabriel is tightening.
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    Dilvuging

    So is Gabriel a wanted man on the top of a CIA hit list? Or is he a double agent masquerading as an assassin? Or is he a deep cover government asset used to take out undesirable people across the world? Just who is Gabriel Foster? And how will this impact Sean? Will he blow his cover by attending a gala event in a tux? Or is that cover already blown wide open? Is Fred telling the truth?
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    Dilvuging

    Well I certainly hope you do write the sequel. This is enthralling.
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    Ardent

    A nice cliffhanger. What has Tom got to do with all of this clock and dagger stuff? Will Sean be able to extract himself from the group before the next album is made?
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    Bollix

    Sean is starting to explore not just his sexuality, but what it is he wants from life and to give back. It would be so easy to just carry on as he is for the next 6 years until some other superstar boy band supersedes them - and then fade into oblivion. I mean what are the individuals in Pet Shop Boys doing now? Or Aha? Making the break though is going to be difficult.
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    Erroneous

    Loving it
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    Obfuscation

    Sean and Gabriel will want more of each other I’m sure. And eventually Michael will try something with DJ, more than just opening the door a crack, and theirs will be an explosive but satisfying relationship. 🤞🏽 the things poor old Lonnie has to put up with!
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    Obfuscation

    This is all in a day’s work for someone like Gabriel.
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    Rendezvous

    It’s a right little tap dance between Gabriel and Sean. But who is leading and who is following?
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    Coquet

    This was a brilliant chapter and the plot is definitely starting to thicken.
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    Adjudicator

    Like others, I’m guessing Sean has realised he cannot be with Brooke because he prefers the lads. Let’s see. He may need a really strong partner like Gabriel, he of many names. When contemplating your own sexuality as it becomes clear to you, it can be a very tough and insular time, so I feel for Sean right now.
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    Erroneous

    Loved this first chapter. I’ve kept it in my folder for a few weeks so I can binge a little bit. 😂 looking forward to seeing where this goes.
  13. Parker and Brody: An Alliance is a heart warming story about two uber masculine men who find each other and themselves. Kicking off in the heat of Qatar’s desert and ending in the tranquility of a pine forest in the USA, Parker and Brody become Paul and Brian. A magnificent love story that had me smiling, laughing and howling. A triumph!
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  14. Would you lie with me and just forget the world? That is one of the most moving lines ever put to music - for me at any rate. This was a fantastic journey and I enjoyed every mile. Thank you @Cap. I am where it all started here in Doha, but I love how it developed, ended and will continue. ❤️
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    Part III: Joint Ops

    This chapter was a total coup! The tap dancing around one another with the watchful audience of Brody’s team was a masterpiece. They finally acknowledge to one another what this random encounter in Qatar actually means to them. Wonderful!
  16. Another chapter that got the waterworks going! I’m glad Adam is finally moving forward and that he has Alex at his side.
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    Fractured Reality

    Theo is barking up the wrong tree, I suspect, whilst Jack seems to have found favour with a forest of good oaks. Hopefully Vince makes a full and swift recovery and they can get to Theo before he is wounded beyond his ability to recover - whether that be physically or psychologically.
  18. I thoroughly enjoyed that. This ability some of us have to carry the world around us and just carry on, is shown up so starkly in this first chapter. Here we have two men who not only find an incredibly hot human being, but potentially a person with whom they can relax totally, who will share the weight of their worlds and in that sharing provide a serenity they had longed for but never thought they would find. I LOVE the fact that these are mature men and not teenagers and find it so much easier to identify with them.
  19. Sitting here crying like a baby. Well written.
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    Noose

    As others have said, Theo is almost certainly possessed by some entity that is represented by the noose and perhaps the snake that Jack saw. The longer he remains in this state the less likely he is to come out of it. Jack needs to find his strength now as a Seer and perhaps with the Guardian they can save Theo, his pack and themselves.
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    The Veil

    The trip through the veil illustrates clearly why this team needed three. They really are a trinity type of thruple in this strange world beyond the veil. A Power Thruple perhaps. 🤔
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    Delicious Hunger

    That got nuclear pretty damn quickly! 🔥 🔥 🔥
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    True Nature

    There is a slow transformation happening here in all 3 of the characters. Vince and Jack are becoming more aligned to Theo and his wolf and in the same way Theo is softening towards these strange pack members he has found. There is something important about Jack being an orphan.
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    Presentations

    A wonderful Friday surprise and I look forward to another installment next Friday, being Good Friday. Granger is an astute politician and quick to spot networks and links. Like @drpaladin I love him eavesdropping on conversations others assume he cannot understand, and their alarm when they realise he understood every word and nuance. Will he bed Villeneuve? What has Talleyrand written to him? What does the king want him to do?
  25. Theo is definitely softening towards his two mates. Glitter of Hope - this is going to come in useful. Perhaps all of Jack’s good luck charms are going to be needed in the fight ahead. He could well have being preparing for this all his life without knowing it.
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