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Chapter 8 - Lost In The Confusion
Doha commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Lost In The Confusion
Luke went a long way to redeem himself in this chapter but Gary will need to toughen up a bit if he is going to survive this mission. Chris remains a natural peace maker who understands the intricacies of human emotion. Let’s see what Jason does with this. -
Chapter 7 - Just a Conversation
Doha commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Just a Conversation
This is complicated now as Chris will either need to report it or keep the secret. He won’t want to report it, but keeping the secret drags him into something he has already said would be wrong - not because of sin but timing. -
Hmmmm. Supervisor is an idiot, but that kind of dogmatic adherence to the law is very common and highly respected in Mormon circles. I'm glad Luke realised he was way out of line with Gary and I’m equally glad that Gary is coming out of his shell a bit.
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Chapter 5 - Reflection and Seduction
Doha commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Reflection and Seduction
We we’re specifically told that P-Day was never to be referred to, even in jest, as Play-Day. -
Chapter 4 - Love and Judgment
Doha commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Love and Judgment
Jason is very like two of my mission companions. One is unfortunately deceased now, but I didn’t keep in touch with either. The Luke and Chris type companions I have maintained contact with despite my coming out. One of them subsequently left the church but the other remains faithful. -
Chapter 3 - First Impressions
Doha commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 3 - First Impressions
I also served a mission and have found these first few chapters to be a real memory booster. -
Chapter 2 - Just Like High School
Doha commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Just Like High School
I can see a little of myself in these guys. As a missionary, I was hiding my gayness under a cloak of religious austerity - kind of a mixture between Jason and Gary. I had also completed my degree and military service before serving so I blended the maturity of Chris as well as the academic kind of Luke. I’m really enjoying this trip down memory lane. -
This poor family is in disarray and Ethan is caught up in it. Mr Jamieson is probably suffering from some kind of depression but the whole family is paying the price. This could end very badly.
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It certainly seems like the Jamieson family could be a repeat of the Elwood family. I really hope not.
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I am enthralled already. Where will this go and how will Ethan/David continue to evade the law?
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It sounds glorious.
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Deed is the sequel to Buckshot and will keep you enthralled from start to end. Elias, Theo and the Silver Creek gang arrive in Canada and all seems well at first. That is until a vicious enemy wrapped in corporate respectability arrives on the scene and the same grit that defeated Cobb and Rourke is required anew. A tale of love, determination and loyalty, Deed is a perfect read for a long weekend in.
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I loved everything about this story. Thank you and again thank you.🤩
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A brilliant line.
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Another brilliant chapter where need trumps duplicity. Well done Jean!
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I can’t wait for this to be posted!!!
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An uprising of labourers taking down a republican rebellion. Quite a turn up for the books I would say. But then I am a royalist, notwithstanding current events.
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The deluge is about to break and our Merickville men, young and old, are going to exterminate the pests or die trying.
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An amazing escape against all the odds. Now the trick is to keep the town alive until the Dominion forces arrive. I hope they still get to use the Amazon a little more.
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I can’t wait to see the maxim gun unleashed. I can’t hardly wait.
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Tim’s dad is a good man underneath the religious fervour. I really want Elias and Theo to kick the arses if the Fenians and the CRP thugs. Fingers crossed 🤞🏽
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A lovely reprieve from the storm that’s about to break out. Every pot has its lid, as Cam is discovering.
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The two Harding boys go off to battle, having declined what was a hefty bribe. This just shows the moral courage of these two men and the town without knowing it, has been given a lifeline.
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The tide is going to turn soon. When it does I look forward to McCulloch, Valance and Grizzly floundering.
