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Yes, Alexander has been hiding his feeling in plain sight all along, hidden by innuendo and faux-humour.
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I'm very hopeful that Lynton will heed Alexander's caution ⚠️ regarding Brad. They have something very special surfacing and Brad has nothing of substance to offer.
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[Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
We get a little insight into young Lynton, who comes head on with his mother's chosen career as well as the possibility of who his father could be. Tough for a teenager already trying to figure out his orientation. -
[Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
That is true. I think most parents could relate to that. The years from the time the eldest child goes to school and the youngest finishes college, are just a blur. -
[Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
I'm on a yacht floating on the Mediterranean off the Turkish coast. Loving this yacht nearly as much as I'm loving this story! -
This was quite a chapter and so many apt comments made. @Seraph28, @LeeSA, @Cane23, @Paladin to name a few. Alexander is more vulnerable than we think, when it comes to Lyn, and Lyn is having a shift towards Aelxander and away feom Brad. This is something Brad has cottoned onto. What is Luke up to?
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[Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
So much might have been easily handled and been fantastic for all 3, if Lynton could be a little more intuitive. But I also understand, that like many of us, he was in hiding and desperately trying to blend in. What a lot of time we waste. -
[Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
Because when it comes to Brad and Alexander, Lynton is not smart at all. -
[Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
Lyn was so skittish and tightly wound up. If only he could loosen up around Brad. But I get it. He was so young amd scared and hiding on so many levels. Alexander remains the rock. -
There is a very tense dynamic developing and Lyn, to his surprise, is the prize. What exactly is going on with Brad?
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That was a fantastic read. I loved it. Bearpaw is a land of legends. Hopefully we see more of it in the future, as well as Larkspur. 💋 😘
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Farley & Wolf is a quick and captivating read; a twist on a theme that will leave you smiling.
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A lovely short story. It would be a dream to have this experience in real life, wouldn't it.
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Hermit is a sweet short story, perfect for a cold winter's afternoon.
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The federal agent angle took me by surprise. Hopefully Coop can play the stockmarket with what is left.
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As did we all. 😆
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Those years were so full of angst. Trying to come to terms with who we were in a world that didn't quite allow for it. I'm about 10 years ahead of you, with university being in the late 80s. God, I was naive. Your story brings back so many memories and to some extent regret for experiences not lived. Nevertheless, we cannot walk 2 paths at once, so we try to appreciate what we have and what we did rather than regret the wrong choices we made. What to do, as the Egyptians say.
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Eastbourne Tales is a collection of glimpses into the life and soul of the author. The little slices of life that are revealed, speak to anyone who has been young, uncertain and scrabbling to keep his nose above water. A must read.
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These slices of life that eventually make up a whole. ❤️
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On a river bank in Africa, and in the back of a car at the drive in. But not on top of a muddy cliff in a rainstorm at 4am. This was a very poignant chapter for me. I could feel the anxiety and trauma of that 17 year old. I never got that close to topping myself, but the thought of being gay and not wanting to be, consumed me like a relentless bush fire at that age.
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All the adventures of youth. Fabulous.
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The days of easy going hook ups. If not why not?
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Loving this and making me think back to university days in the 80s.
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It sounds like you had amazing friends. 👏 Having only finally emerged from the closet later in life and living in the Middle East, those kinds of friendships have eluded me.
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Some poignant back stories here that resonate on many levels with a lot of the readers.
