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Al Khor, Qatar 🇶🇦
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A great chaprer. I'm hopeful for Keith. He deserves someone lovely.
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Along with @CincyKris and @drsawzall I really like Thomas and hooe he is as good as he seems. He would be perfect for Keith. A Vicar for a brother - why not have some goor, old-fashioned, English rural idyll involved.
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I really like Jaz!! She is going to become a good friend to Keith I think. Keith is exploring his sexuality in earnest and asking the questions most of us probably asked. I certainly would have liked to, but didn't really know any gay men to ask. I just knew I liked men, and then went and got married to a woman anyway. Divorced now, but there was a lot of heartache (and some joy) along the way.
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A fabulous second chapter. Keith has finally dipped his toe into the gay scene. That first experience wasn't great but hopefully he meets someone that sets his world ablaze.
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I loved Chapter 1. 😍 Keith is endearing and I'm sure someone will snap him up as soon as he allows it.
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What a cliffhanger and my mind will be whirling for the next week. Did Jamie shoot the victim? Dir RMW shoot? Did they shoot the hand with the knife ? We will have the answers soon , but in the meantime:
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Good questions @Kitt. Who stands to gain the most from the world being filled with monsters? That is the question that needs to be answered.
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What a horrible conundrum for Jamie.
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I have gone skinny dipping. Never have I ever had sex on a plane.
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Well the suspense can be felt and the power of the shield is alarming. I doubt Jamie is adequately armed for this. Perhaps RMW has something up his sleeve. I hope so.
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Lusaka, Zambia 🇿🇲
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RMW handled the speech very well. Jamie handled RMW very well. 😆 🤣 A nice kind of pulling the threads together chapter, because the next few are going to be supernatural mayhem I think.
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@MichaelS36. Good, for that is exactly what they are. 😆 🤣
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I think it's critical that Jamie is assigned to RMW. Without Jamie at his side he cannot overcome the evil that threatens the world. I think this is just a matter of necessity.
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A fabulous chapter. Jamie did very well to weather that and RMW was wonderful. I'm anxious about Jamie and Mike.
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I'm sure this special ability has helped him enormously in political life.
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That's the point. I'm sure it rhe same for Secret Service agents. Sometime you simply cannot tell people, especially those closest to you, what you do. I love Mike and know he will support Jamie, but he needs to stop asking Jamie to divulge information to him. It's possible that he could help Jamie bear the load, but it's also possible he could become a target.
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Gelvendale, EC, South Africa
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The Paranormal Hits Home
Doha commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in The Paranormal Hits Home
Where is Mike? In Zulu: ipi uMike? -
The Paranormal Hits Home
Doha commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in The Paranormal Hits Home
Your writing is so engaging. I'm enjoying every word. The Turners have probably been involved with this their entire lives. Perhaps RMW's father was also aware. It seems like RMW is the guardian of the world and Jamie is the guardian of RMW. The sooner he knows the full details the better. I think he and the Right Honourable Minister are a good working team. 💪 -
The Paranormal Hits Home
Doha commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in The Paranormal Hits Home
I wonder if RMW is trying to protect Jamie from some of the horrors of this "supernatural world". Jamie is quite new to it whilst RMW has had years, perhaps his whole life, to come to grips with it. I want to know more about the minister. -
Howick, KZN, South Africa
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Another great chapter. I agree with @kbois, Jamie should tell Mike about his powers but leave out the case details. He would be safer that way and so would Mike potentially. As other have said, so many red herrings.
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Ethekweni, KZN, South Africa
