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That was a delightful chapter and had me smiling throughout. Our guys are getting so comfortable around one another. It's good though, that they swiftly deal with little irritations.
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This trip is taking them past a number of landmarks from their old lives. A trio down memory lane as they go on. It seems like Brohm and Cormac have reached an understanding.
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I saw that immediately as an option @drsawzall - Theodrik transporting them and saving 2 weeks. Im glad that Brohm has got his feelings out in the open and that he and Nathan can move forward.
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Well the friendly demon returns for help. If his return to rhe underworld closes the portal for the goblings then I hope that Nathan and Brohm can figure a way, or perhaps rhe monk knows. A trip to Morgan might be on the cards.
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Dog Whisperer is a short story of two men who find one another, whilst workong jobs they love. It is a pleasing mix of realism and hopefulness that lifts the spirit. A great weekend afternoon read.
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That was good. Two men meet, eventually fall in love and the rest is history. I loved it. 😍
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Absolutely 💯 true. Granger is a master strategist whether at sea or on land.
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Another super chapter. 👌 The two men are sorted with mistresses and society will be placated. I do hope that these convoluted living arrangements do not create more barriers than opportunities for Granger and Calvert to develop their own relationship.
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Hmmm. Truth seeer and truth teller, living with truth hiders. This is an interesting set of possibilities. How will the goblin bite affect the magic that keeps their identities hidden.
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What exactly are those squat little creatures- vileness personified. And what will that bite and stabbing pain up the arm produce? I hope it does not change Nathan on some way. Nathan is far too trusting, not a trait one would expect in a retired assassin. Eyes open for the coming chapters.
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So we meet the beggar who calls himself Cormac. I wonder if that is his real name. 🤔 Tarn. 😔 😟 I liked him, but there was no way he could stay. Nathan and Brohm need to keep their tracks well and truly covered. Brohm gets a little too physical with Nathan at times and I hope he never gets pushed too far.
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I'm quite certain Tarn will show up again and as for the demon and the beggar... who knows but I suspect they will both re-enter at the most inopportune times.
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Tarn is back. I'm glad. He was such a huge help. I hope he can find a new purpose in life and that it will develop out of this opportunity from Nathan. It would feel redemptive. Brohm, of course, is totally justified in his anger. And as for the beggar... who knows what will come of it all.
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I wonder if the beggar is simply in disguise? Is their a witches guild or some such group for magic folk? Ramsey has taken 20 years to mourn his wife and is still raw. I wonder if there is more that is not yet revealed. 🤔
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Yes. I think she may well have done that, leaving Calvert no choice but to be gallant, brave and handsome.
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Interesting thoughts above. 🤔 It probably was a risk to leave rhe senator to deliver Brody to his widow and children. It feels right though. Let's see what the next few days bring.
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Laird is sniffing around and smells a rat. Nathan and Brohm are going to have go tread very carefully indeed.
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That is a very good question. Would magical beings recognize the magic?
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Deeds of their Past follows the stories of Nathan and Brohm. Trying to outrun the consequences of past actions, they are sent on a quest, a quest that sees them battle their demons, both figurative and real. It is a story of redemption and renewal - one that will have you on the edge of your seat as ypu venture into the unknown with our two unlikely heroes. This is a binge read for a lazy summer holiday. ☀️
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That was a wonderful adventure. I enjoyed every chapter, even the harrowing ones. I can't wait to read the sequel.
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And now, as others have said, off to find Morgana. Let's hope she is an honest witch.
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I hope they still have the amulet.
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I wondered if that was Morgana. Where is the witch when you need her?
