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Pevensey, KZN, South Africa
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The twists and turns match the convoluted black and gold veins of Dave's magic. Is Mark Osiris? Osiris, is after all, the Egyptian god of the dead.
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Wow. Not only did Dave turn, but he also popped back into human form with ease. He must now be ine of the most extraordinary of beings. Wizard/human/wolf.
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Good thinking @Zuri.I think he has a surprise in store for them all.
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Yaaay. Dave is a regular guy!! He is my new hero. 😍
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Well that has us hopping about. Theodore seems like a prize prat. An egotistical, entitled, arse, but I suspect not as all-knowing or omnipotent as he thinks. I'm certain a big cumuppence awaits him. Dave HAS to make it.
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Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
That was Ana amazing scene. Like @IBEX and @Darryl62 I think Mark is becoming something different. Perhaps the separation of his 2 parts or the collapse of the physical j to the spitlritual-shadow. -
Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
It's been 2 months since that big change. I hope it has gone well. -
Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
Ah!!!! Mark is the shadow? Almost like a trinity. @IBEX good thinking!! -
Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
Now that makes sense @Darryl62. Good thinking -
Why is Dave referred to as Little Dave? Is he short? It's good if he is. Heroes are always 6 foot something. What an amazingly descriptive chapter. I loved every word.
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A simple matter of house keeping. Those uniquely individually shaped bowls are going to be very difficult to stack in the dishwasher. 😃
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Another intriguing chapter. The forest people are one. I wonder if they share some kind of cosmic spirit? 🤔 Let's see what the "spread lady" Maio has to say. It's getting interestinger and interestinger, to quote Pooh.
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Must get me some of that soup @Philippe.
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Wow!! So powerful. I feel for Mark, having an immensely important secret that impedes your ability to choose what you want. He will be a good friend to Grey, despite this.
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Najma, Qatar 🇶🇦
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Well, I will think on it and put in a request.
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Edna seems like a darling. Now that shower was 🔥🔥. Sizeable erection. 😁 🤣 😂 I'm glad they had fun.
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The great quest begins and our two guys find their way into bed together. What more can we ask for?!
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Wow! It just keeps getting better. Twins, a mystical pregnancy and birth. Golden light connections. And, of course, cleaning up the mess with the wave of a hand.
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That was a super chapter. So who is Mark? He came like a bolt out the blue. Clara, Dave and Grey are going to make a great team. 👍
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This chapter was marvellous! Clara has some kind of affinity and so does Dave, the successor to his mother, though without the curse. I can't wait to see where this all goes.
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Yes @chris191070 I think this is why they were destined to Meer and Dave had the necklace "Protect the wolf".
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Well this was an jntersting chapter. You have managed to paint a very forlorn, almost decaying little settlement. Beatrice is certainly a person of interest and has revealed a haunting aspect to the situation that, i suspect, will create a good deal of tension for Grey and the Belcore pack going forward.
