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    Chapter Four: Coalesce

    Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Four: Coalesce

    Yes @chris191070 I think this is why they were destined to Meer and Dave had the necklace "Protect the wolf".
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    Well this was an jntersting chapter. You have managed to paint a very forlorn, almost decaying little settlement. Beatrice is certainly a person of interest and has revealed a haunting aspect to the situation that, i suspect, will create a good deal of tension for Grey and the Belcore pack going forward.
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    Chapter One: Arrival

    Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter One: Arrival

    It's happening right now. ✅️
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    Chapter Two: Scent

    Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Two: Scent

    Another great chapter. I'm intrigued by Dave. He sounds like a lovely bloke. I wonder if he has any special power or connection to the supernatural. Same goes for Clara.
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    Chapter One: Arrival

    Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter One: Arrival

    I'm loving rhis already. I'm glad I kept it until there were several chapters. A little binge read lies in my future I think.
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    Chapter One: Arrival

    Doha commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter One: Arrival

    Hey @Darryl62, you hit the nail on the head. This has a very "Grimm" feel about it. I loved that show.
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    I'm delighted for Dylan and Colton. I hope they will be as happy as can be. The boys are going to love being brothers. 😃
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    A great chapter. Like @Al Norris and @drsawzall both said, this life has come quite late for many of us. I grew up Mormon in South Africa. Born in the late '60s, this was unimaginable. This partnered life, still exists a hope.
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    Well Patty is trying so I give her that. Dominic has gained a cousin who will also be his friend I think. A great chapter. 👍
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    Well Patty is a piece of work. I wonder if she has redeeming features? Let's see. I hope they sort it out. It's good to have family nearby when ypu all get on.
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    Dylan is a good parent and so is Colton. The boys are good kids too. I wonder why Dylan's sister in law doesn't like grandad? 🤔
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    Lucifer's Almanac is a powerful poem revealing what we have always been taught about hell and its horrors. A chilling, thought-provoking read.
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    The story of Owain and Colin, No Going Back, will bring a smile to your face in every chapter. This is a story of two ordinary men, who live ordinary lives doing ordinary things; and, yet out of the ordinary, a sweet and enduring love emerges that prompts us to consider that within all our ordinary lives, lies the extraordinary, if we will be open to it. A fabulous read.
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    A gentle story that has made me smile all the way through. 😊 Colin and Owain, Joe and Mhairi have been wonderful company. Thank you.
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    And that was the end of 2 bad eggs. I don't have any sympathy for them. Glad Dylan has met Colton. I was expecting a football player when I saw the name. 😉 😜 Hope all goes well with these two.
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    That was a horrible chapter, but an example of what happens all over the world everyday. Children being preyed on by perverts.
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    Well that turned quickly. Dominic is in real danger now. I just hope that he does as Dylan has said. He cannot be allowed to get naked.
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    The missing piece

    Doha commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The missing piece

    This short story popped up on a banner in another story I was reading. Loved it. 😍
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    The beach sounds like a great idea. Everything is catching up with Dylan. Perhaps a break from Jackson is a good thing right now, as he works through the aftermath of divorce, abuse and death. His thinking won't be clouded by the happy drug of love.
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    The Sleepover(s)

    Doha commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Sleepover(s)

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    The Sleepover(s)

    Doha commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Sleepover(s)

    I think it's because he routinely barebacks. Jackson is a jackass.
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    The Sleepover(s)

    Doha commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Sleepover(s)

    The Internet is an unprotected frontier for kids, and their exposure to sex and a host of other adult things comes a much younger age. I think it's detrimental to them, but what to do?
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    Colin 15

    Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Colin 15

    A great chapter. I have a feeling that Owain and Mhairi are going to become anonymous local patrons/benefactors for various causes over the next few years.
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    Agreed. We need to see more of Owain and Colin. This has been a lovely story that felt real.
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    I was! 😁
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